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Old 04-22-05, 09:33 PM   #1
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Hoe Luv (verse & hook)...its been a minute yall
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guess who's back?...its muthafuckin Doe Bagz BITCH!...Emerican Movement...get down or get laid down hoes...what now???

*real pimp beat starts*

[verse 1]
u must have me totally and literally twisted trick
thinkin dat i gotta hoe and i trust tha bitch
afta she gave "lawinski' and "sucked my dick"
and i put babies all ova her black dress and shit?
nigga please, imma playboi, i aint married
tha only ring i got is tha one dat my left ear carries
u got me confused wit tha othas, man im not tied down
but i can act a clown when me and a chick lay down
shit im a pimp like "don quan" wit my green on
plus i got gold condoms for "xxx" tha "sex storm"
aint shit changed, i still hustle to feed my son
and he a pimp too, he got hoes, more than one
and he only one but he do what he do, be who he is
its nothin, he aint frontin when its comes to dis shit
so raise ya glass at dis playaz ball and pop ya colla
its tha emerican nigga from detroit makin dollaz (oh!)

[hook]
u got me fucked up, thinkin i love a hoe
i'll fuck a hoe, but i neva loved a hoe
cuz lovin a hoe is wrong, it'll neva be right
and like dre said, u cant turn a hoe into a wife
-repeat 2x-

yeah...a lil sample for yall...more to come 4real niggaz...EF Movement bitches...fuck wit us...and if dis is weak...so what...i neva rap like dis anyway...DB is back at it!
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Old 04-22-05, 09:43 PM   #2
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Old 04-23-05, 02:50 AM   #3
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Damn Dis Was Sum Hot Shit As Usual
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Old 04-23-05, 10:01 AM   #4
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thanx fam...uppin dis rite here

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Old 04-23-05, 01:44 PM   #5
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Decent flow, wasnt really feelin the hook all that much

but the verse was solid, some aight metas an wordplay, keep doin it big Doe, i know how you do...

we still gotta collab, we aint never collabed, an nobody do it like us on this open mic shit...

hit up my O.M'z wit some feedback, ''I Thought You Knew'' & ''So-Low''
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Old 04-23-05, 03:54 PM   #6
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Dis was iight homie da flow was on da wordplay was good its some solid shit had some good metas in there......da hook wasnt all dat good but da hook dont really matta.....i give it a overall of 7.8/10.....~1~

RTF heres da link
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Old 04-23-05, 04:03 PM   #7
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yo this was a decent piece keep it up yo....had some good vocab good flow and that..not wack like the rest of open mic is becoming..lol..keep it up yo..7/10
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Old 04-23-05, 04:04 PM   #8
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uppin for my homie DB..lets get some feed flowin
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Old 04-23-05, 04:06 PM   #9
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yeah, not bad, little basic, but still had some cool lines...i enjoyed cause it flowed nicely...keep up yo
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Old 04-24-05, 06:35 PM   #10
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thanx alot yall...and PM me for dat collab teph...uppin

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Old 04-25-05, 07:34 PM   #11
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i would like to up this now

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Old 04-26-05, 10:06 AM   #12
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dis sum nice work man...known topic but creative way of rappin...multis, flow, structure were all there...nice shit homie...8/10...1
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Old 04-26-05, 01:21 PM   #13
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ya this wasn't ur best...i've heard better...but you were prolly just foolin around

this is my favourite line...lol

"aint shit changed, i still hustle to feed my son
and he a pimp too, he got hoes, more than one"

ya...ur son's a pimp and he's one...werd...lol
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Old 04-26-05, 05:24 PM   #14
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was feeling this, nice hook flowed really well nd nice worddplay and shit, i liked

nigga please, imma playboi, i aint married
tha only ring i got is tha one dat my left ear carries

and a couple of others, nice shit.
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Old 04-26-05, 07:59 PM   #15
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thanx yall...and i was jus playin around...uppin dis yall!

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