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dont bitch ova votes

g'd luck

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Check in by: 04-08-05 at 01:54 PM

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R Stylez has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-05 01:59 PM.

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Yung Wun has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-05 02:59 PM.

I Step To The Podium; For My Openin-Statement, I'll Say I'm Potent-Wit-Great-Grips, So I'm Chokin-This-Fake-Bitch/
Who's OutSpoken-With-Haste,-Which Earns A Token-For-Face-Lifts...And'll Leave Ya Fuckin Stomach Smokin-From-Eight-Clips!/
I'm The Pure Essence Of Talent; I Don't See A Speck-In-Ya-Rhymes, styles Should "Hook Up Wit A Clock" Just To "Get-Wit-The-Times"/
Here's A Lesson-Of-Mine, Dawg, I'm The Best-Wit-The-Lines...You Aint Got The "Big Guns Like P.Diddy" So You Ain't "Set-Up-To-Shine"!/
I've Heard The Speeches-of-Several, My Heat-Is-Incredible, Faggots Put Up Their Defenses, The Breaches-Are-Plentiful/
Whenever Rappers Comin At Me; They Get Sprayed-Wit-A-Round, I Don't Mean "Sex On The Floor" But You'll Get "Laid-On-The-Ground"/
I'm A "Hunter" Wit Mad "Game"; Ya Got Ya "Neck Sliced-"In-This-Brawl, So I'm Thinkin "This Bear's Head'll Look Nice-On-My-Wall!"/damn

HeAt Up
Dude... I'm Lyrical-Wit-Sick-Spits, This Basic Member Sparks-Leavin-Gays-Phased! It's A "Miracle"!-This-Kid's-"Whipped"! And I Ain't Talkin-Bout-"Mayonnaise"!/
I Put This Herb-In-His-Place, For Him Defeat's-A-Must!
I'm Way Ahead Of You, I'll "Throw Dirt-In-Ya-Face" So "Eat-My-Dust!"/ It's So Dumb-To-Challenge-Me, I'm A Veteran,-azz! Ya Too Stunned-Of-Talent-G! You Ain't Even Better-Than-Half!/

Its over

damn...............g'd luck.................uppin...1

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Voted For: R Stylez

damn nice battle from both props to boht on that

R gets the vote due to more complex personals.

Flow from both of you was on point
Structure was a lil shaky for boht but it was ight
Multies- I didnt really see any
Personals_ given it to R i didnt see any personals in youngs verse if there was they wernt that hard

R elevate on ya punches ya personals got you this one but make ya punches harder.

young use sum personals n ya verse like i said b4 if u did they didnt hit cuz i didnt evn notcie on

I like how r got into Youngs profile n made personals so that gets him the vote


not hatin nor dickridin, jus votin tryin to get some of these battles closed up

return the fav battles below sig

good ballte

holla

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Voted For: Yung Wun

Flow: Blah
Punches: Yungwun
Personals: Rstyles
Wordplay: Yungwun
Metas: Yungwun
Multis: Yungwun
Enjoyment: Blah

Vote: Yung Wun

ExplanatioN : Yung wun got this good multis peiced together with some good punches .. rstylez was just a lil too basic .. ight battle .. stay elevating .. stay up .. 1 .. and please return the favor guys and drop an honest vote on my battles

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i wasnt really feelin wun's verse...RS shit had tha personals which is always a plus...g'd luck RS...but im only gone post feedback...stay up fam

-DB

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uppin............................................. .......

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can't vote on this battle, so jus checkin polls...

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lol@armada not seeing multis.......................

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