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THE PLAGUE
ARTIST: MAKENG KNOW CENTZ
ALBUM:THE APOCALYPSE

HOOK: IF THE WORLD SHOULD END….LIFE SHALL PASS-
MAY I PROVE I SURPASS-BEFORE I BREATH MY LAST.
RESURECT THOSE-WHO I CALL MY FOES-THOSE WHO OPOSE-
MAY VENGENCE BE MINE BEFORE MY EYES SHALL CLOSE.

IF I FALL TO THE WRATH OF MAN LIKE DA MESSIAH AND JUDIS-
CEASER AT THE HANDS OF CASSIUS AND BRUTUS-
MAY THE LAST WORDS I UTTER THROUGH MY MUCUS-
MAKE A CRUEL JOKE OUT OF RAPPERS LIKE HANDING BLIND KIDS A RUBIX-
YOU….. MEASURE TO ME… NOT EVEN BY CUBIC-
MY PUNCHES LIKE ALI’S-
MY NAMES A ITTLE UNDESPUTED-
WRITE WITH GOD HANDS-THE GOSPELL FROM THE VATICAN-
TO THE LANDS- OF NEW YORK-SANDS- OF PILERMO-
TRACED WITH STRANDS
THE WRATH OF EMPTY SOULS BURRIED IN HOT COALS
OF DONTE’S INFERNO-
NEVER COME SHORT BUT CONSTANTLY FELT MENISCULE-
SHOOT JOKES IN MY RHYMES-DRIVE BYE NINELINES- THAT FIRE SHOTS OF REDICULE-
AHEAD OF MY TIME-OUTCASTED LIKE JESUS BEFORE HIS ANNOINTMENT-
IM THE MIRACLE-LYRICAL SYNICAL LORD WITH A MIC CHORD APPOINTED-\
TO FORFILL THE PROPHECY FOR WEAK M.C.’S AS DISAPOINTMENT-
FACEN ME IN BATTLES IS THE BIGGEST MISTAKE YOU COULD MAKE
-ON OFF TAPE
YOU GET VICTOMIZED LIKE PRODUCTS RAPE-
M.K.C- THE ILLEST M.C.-YOU’LL NEVER SEE-
AS FAR AS RAPS YOU COULDN’T MOVE THE CROWD WITH JEAN GREYS TELAPATHY-
ON THE M.I.C- YOUR WHOLE LIFE WAS BORN FUCKED BY ME-
LIKE I PLANTED MY SEED-IN YOUR WHOLE FAMILY TREE-
I FLOWS WITH VINTAGE-CLONED BY RAPPERS PER APEDAGE-
TRYING TO BE ME BUT MY OPPOSITE LIKE3 MIRROR IMAGES-
RAP BELOW SUB PAR-I MURDER ABOVE MY BARS-
SO ARROGANT I GOT MY REFLECTIONS- LIKE NIGGA WHO YOU THINK YOU ARE-
IVE INDURED 23 YRS OF AGRESSION-IN AN 7 BARS SHOW THE WORLD THE 7 SINS OF ACENSION- ITS BLASPHOMY IF MY NAME IS MENTIONED-
Non centz CELEBRATE JUDEGMENT DAY-AS A BIRTH DAY-RAP ONE WAY-
FOR 24HRS BY MIDNIGHT THE WILL SUN RAISE- MY COLD WAR WITH WORDS GIVE BIRTH TO THE NEXT TEXT OF ICE AGE-THE PLAGUE-

HOOK: IF THE WORLD SHOULD END….LIFE SHALL PASS-
MAY I PROVE I SURPASS-BEFORE I BREATH MY LAST.
RESURECT THOSE-WHO I CALL MY FOES-THOSE WHO OPOSE-
MAY VENGENCE BE MINE BEFORE MY EYES SHALL CLOSE.

that was hype dawg.. I was feelin' the flow, I all the rhyme transitions were executed pretty well, it's shit like this that make it look easy.. lol, "NEVER COME SHORT BUT CONSTANTLY FELT MENISCULE-
SHOOT JOKES IN MY RHYMES-DRIVE BYE NINELINES- THAT FIRE SHOTS OF REDICULE-
AHEAD OF MY TIME-OUTCASTED LIKE JESUS BEFORE HIS ANNOINTMENT-
IM THE MIRACLE-LYRICAL SYNICAL LORD WITH A MIC CHORD APPOINTED-\"...... I was feelin' those lines, flowed well together... ill shit dawg..

THANKS PA

NICE DROP MAN. I HAD TO POST SOMETHING BECAUSE REAL ARTISTS HAVE TO KEEP DRAWING, SO I'M NOT TRYING TO SEE NONE OF HIP HOPPERS LEAVE IT ALONE. KEEP DROPPING. ONE!

pretty good.............................................. .................................................. ........................

ANY SUGGESTIONS PAR

This was cool the only thing wrong with this was that all ya words was in caps lock you shouldnt do that with ya verse..1

I RESPECT THAT AND WILL CHANGE THAT PA THANX FOR FEEDBACK

i agree the caps made me really dizzy.....damn...!

thougths..

alright this is pretty artistic...some lines are damn well written some are short so u gotta like catch ur breath then read again..but that was interesting..

the whole content of the piece was good...the fact that it has good hmm...good..oh fuck it i forgot what figure of speech was it called that u take somethings from history and put them on ur piece like caesar...judas...yeah know..

keep dropping more hott pieces like this and remember no CAPS..hehe

nice drop!

no doubt i will make sure i take that advice

shiznit was correct bout this bein artistic, i felt alot of it n it was good throughout, didnt think to much to the hook tho but hey it was a nice piece.....

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THANK YOU WHAT DID THE HOOK LACK

shit was pretty tight feelin da flo,

For sure lose the Caps , but other than that the shit was tight. It was a little long for me ( maybe , you could lose a few lines ) But I know what thats like , once you write your original peice , its hard cutting shit out of it. But your Vocab was spectacular , you had a great range of Methaphors , and I really felt your vibe. Is this your Album ? or a friends ?

(I need some votes on my battle to end it , no schilling , vote for for who you think came more correct )

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62628

mine i just started working on