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06-30-03, 03:31 PM | #1 | ||||||
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THE PLAGUE
ARTIST: MAKENG KNOW CENTZ ALBUM:THE APOCALYPSE HOOK: IF THE WORLD SHOULD END….LIFE SHALL PASS- MAY I PROVE I SURPASS-BEFORE I BREATH MY LAST. RESURECT THOSE-WHO I CALL MY FOES-THOSE WHO OPOSE- MAY VENGENCE BE MINE BEFORE MY EYES SHALL CLOSE. IF I FALL TO THE WRATH OF MAN LIKE DA MESSIAH AND JUDIS- CEASER AT THE HANDS OF CASSIUS AND BRUTUS- MAY THE LAST WORDS I UTTER THROUGH MY MUCUS- MAKE A CRUEL JOKE OUT OF RAPPERS LIKE HANDING BLIND KIDS A RUBIX- YOU….. MEASURE TO ME… NOT EVEN BY CUBIC- MY PUNCHES LIKE ALI’S- MY NAMES A ITTLE UNDESPUTED- WRITE WITH GOD HANDS-THE GOSPELL FROM THE VATICAN- TO THE LANDS- OF NEW YORK-SANDS- OF PILERMO- TRACED WITH STRANDS THE WRATH OF EMPTY SOULS BURRIED IN HOT COALS OF DONTE’S INFERNO- NEVER COME SHORT BUT CONSTANTLY FELT MENISCULE- SHOOT JOKES IN MY RHYMES-DRIVE BYE NINELINES- THAT FIRE SHOTS OF REDICULE- AHEAD OF MY TIME-OUTCASTED LIKE JESUS BEFORE HIS ANNOINTMENT- IM THE MIRACLE-LYRICAL SYNICAL LORD WITH A MIC CHORD APPOINTED-\ TO FORFILL THE PROPHECY FOR WEAK M.C.’S AS DISAPOINTMENT- FACEN ME IN BATTLES IS THE BIGGEST MISTAKE YOU COULD MAKE -ON OFF TAPE YOU GET VICTOMIZED LIKE PRODUCTS RAPE- M.K.C- THE ILLEST M.C.-YOU’LL NEVER SEE- AS FAR AS RAPS YOU COULDN’T MOVE THE CROWD WITH JEAN GREYS TELAPATHY- ON THE M.I.C- YOUR WHOLE LIFE WAS BORN FUCKED BY ME- LIKE I PLANTED MY SEED-IN YOUR WHOLE FAMILY TREE- I FLOWS WITH VINTAGE-CLONED BY RAPPERS PER APEDAGE- TRYING TO BE ME BUT MY OPPOSITE LIKE3 MIRROR IMAGES- RAP BELOW SUB PAR-I MURDER ABOVE MY BARS- SO ARROGANT I GOT MY REFLECTIONS- LIKE NIGGA WHO YOU THINK YOU ARE- IVE INDURED 23 YRS OF AGRESSION-IN AN 7 BARS SHOW THE WORLD THE 7 SINS OF ACENSION- ITS BLASPHOMY IF MY NAME IS MENTIONED- Non centz CELEBRATE JUDEGMENT DAY-AS A BIRTH DAY-RAP ONE WAY- FOR 24HRS BY MIDNIGHT THE WILL SUN RAISE- MY COLD WAR WITH WORDS GIVE BIRTH TO THE NEXT TEXT OF ICE AGE-THE PLAGUE- HOOK: IF THE WORLD SHOULD END….LIFE SHALL PASS- MAY I PROVE I SURPASS-BEFORE I BREATH MY LAST. RESURECT THOSE-WHO I CALL MY FOES-THOSE WHO OPOSE- MAY VENGENCE BE MINE BEFORE MY EYES SHALL CLOSE. |
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06-30-03, 03:58 PM | #2 | |||||||
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that was hype dawg.. I was feelin' the flow, I all the rhyme transitions were executed pretty well, it's shit like this that make it look easy.. lol, "NEVER COME SHORT BUT CONSTANTLY FELT MENISCULE-
SHOOT JOKES IN MY RHYMES-DRIVE BYE NINELINES- THAT FIRE SHOTS OF REDICULE- AHEAD OF MY TIME-OUTCASTED LIKE JESUS BEFORE HIS ANNOINTMENT- IM THE MIRACLE-LYRICAL SYNICAL LORD WITH A MIC CHORD APPOINTED-\"...... I was feelin' those lines, flowed well together... ill shit dawg..
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06-30-03, 04:27 PM | #3 | ||||||
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THANKS PA
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06-30-03, 05:41 PM | #4 | |||||||
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NICE DROP MAN. I HAD TO POST SOMETHING BECAUSE REAL ARTISTS HAVE TO KEEP DRAWING, SO I'M NOT TRYING TO SEE NONE OF HIP HOPPERS LEAVE IT ALONE. KEEP DROPPING. ONE!
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06-30-03, 06:35 PM | #5 | ||||||
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pretty good.............................................. .................................................. ........................
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06-30-03, 08:35 PM | #6 | ||||||
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ANY SUGGESTIONS PAR
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06-30-03, 08:44 PM | #7 | |||||||
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This was cool the only thing wrong with this was that all ya words was in caps lock you shouldnt do that with ya verse..1
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06-30-03, 08:48 PM | #8 | ||||||
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I RESPECT THAT AND WILL CHANGE THAT PA THANX FOR FEEDBACK
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06-30-03, 09:15 PM | #9 | |||||||
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i agree the caps made me really dizzy.....damn...!
thougths.. alright this is pretty artistic...some lines are damn well written some are short so u gotta like catch ur breath then read again..but that was interesting.. the whole content of the piece was good...the fact that it has good hmm...good..oh fuck it i forgot what figure of speech was it called that u take somethings from history and put them on ur piece like caesar...judas...yeah know.. keep dropping more hott pieces like this and remember no CAPS..hehe nice drop!
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07-02-03, 10:18 AM | #10 | ||||||
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no doubt i will make sure i take that advice
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07-02-03, 10:27 AM | #11 | ||||||
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shiznit was correct bout this bein artistic, i felt alot of it n it was good throughout, didnt think to much to the hook tho but hey it was a nice piece.....
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07-02-03, 11:57 AM | #12 | ||||||
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THANK YOU WHAT DID THE HOOK LACK
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07-02-03, 12:03 PM | #13 | ||||||
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shit was pretty tight feelin da flo,
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07-02-03, 12:23 PM | #14 | ||||||
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For sure lose the Caps , but other than that the shit was tight. It was a little long for me ( maybe , you could lose a few lines ) But I know what thats like , once you write your original peice , its hard cutting shit out of it. But your Vocab was spectacular , you had a great range of Methaphors , and I really felt your vibe. Is this your Album ? or a friends ?
(I need some votes on my battle to end it , no schilling , vote for for who you think came more correct ) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62628 |
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07-02-03, 01:35 PM | #15 | ||||||
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mine i just started working on
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