Tökën Vs. TBirdRaw
 

Rules:
20 Minutes To Spit After I Spit
No DR Votes
No Crew Votes
No Hate Votes
No Recyclin
No Feedin

You Couldnt Comprehend Fire...If You Were Surounded By Gay Men
You're Fallin Faster Than Leaves Of Fall Trees Bein Shaken
Rhymes Couldn't Get To A Climax If You Set A Match On The G Spot
You Aint Got The Heat To Lock A Win... I Merked You Wit A Key Shot
Prewritten To The Grave... And You Still Aint Copped A Win
What Makes You Think This Is Gon Be Different?... Your Battlin A Veteran
Look At Your Style You're Bringin A New Meanin To The Word Throw Back
Rockin A Pac Avy Aint Been In Since Michael Jackson Was Still Black

Blah... Fuck Writers Block... Damn It...

yo i didnt know that was wrong, my fault, but i wrote my verse with my rules, so......
"Rules:
a quick 8liner
no crews
no hate votes
and u spit first i guess"

my record is 0-2, with 2 hurtins......(NOT!)/
well imma even this out against u and kclipz 4 murkin/
ill leave u sad and hummbled, so u can go onto OPRAH/
and talk about how a lightweight flowed ya(up)/
im gonna make u turn around ur intrest and occupation/
so u can go join the herb garden......a HUGE adaptation!/
heres a "TOKEN" of my appretiation/
its to hot to say, so imma leave it in abbreviations........FU/

i think my verse is aight, i dont think i didnt anything on ur rules............................................. .....

*blagh* what kinda battle is this
you both got writers block or something? (no offense)

there's a winner tho

structure = both
flow = both
punches = token
metas = token

vote = token

from lookin at token's record, i expected alot more from him, y'suppose to be a vet right?

neways

hit this battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87324

lmao ^... look who i'm battlin.... i aint wasting a vet material verse on him... no offense... normally i come much harder...

uppin 1

i aint g0t 100 post so i cant put it on da poll...but here it iz
punchz-token
metaz-token
flow-tbird
struc.-token
so obiously token get muh vote

token......that was ur wackest shit ever!.....

thank god u battled some one who talked about there 0-2 record in there first line......simlpy stupid.....

neither had mych of anything......but the fact that Tbird knocked himself...puts him on a whole nother negative level.......

vote - token......aka...lucky bastard

hahahahaha ^ I Know Man... I Knew He Would Come Like This Thats Why I Did It.... Took Me 1 Minute And 27 Seconds To Put That Up... Hop Off My Net Dick... You Know I Can Spit...

lol

Uppin 2

structure: Token
flow: Token
punches: Token
metas: Token
Structure: Token

Fav Lines:

Token

Rhymes Couldn't Get To A Climax If You Set A Match On The G Spot
You Aint Got The Heat To Lock A Win... I Merked You Wit A Key Shot

Raw

heres a "TOKEN" of my appretiation/
its to hot to say, so imma leave it in abbreviations........FU/

Overall..One sided..Raw was weak..token didnt come that hard..expected tho against a newb...Still tokens weakest lines took Raw
Keep elevatin raw..jackson line was tight

Vote: Token

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87517

Check it

Thank You ^... uppin 3.......
I Didn't Think My Lines Were That Bad :\
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opener:tie
closer:token
structure:tie
punches:token
wordplay:tbirdraw
overall:token

nice battle peeps

plz return the favor by votin fairly on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87137

Ight ^..... For Now On I'll Come ILL No Matter What.....

uppin 4.......................................