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| TBirdRaw |
  
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3 | 37.50% |
| Tökën |
  
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5 | 62.50% |
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10-24-03, 04:18 PM
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Tökën Vs. TBirdRaw
IP: 41AE D395
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20 Minutes To Spit After I Spit No DR Votes No Crew Votes No Hate Votes No Recyclin No Feedin
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10-24-03, 04:19 PM
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IP: 41AE D395
You Couldnt Comprehend Fire...If You Were Surounded By Gay Men
You're Fallin Faster Than Leaves Of Fall Trees Bein Shaken Rhymes Couldn't Get To A Climax If You Set A Match On The G Spot You Aint Got The Heat To Lock A Win... I Merked You Wit A Key Shot Prewritten To The Grave... And You Still Aint Copped A Win What Makes You Think This Is Gon Be Different?... Your Battlin A Veteran Look At Your Style You're Bringin A New Meanin To The Word Throw Back Rockin A Pac Avy Aint Been In Since Michael Jackson Was Still Black Blah... Fuck Writers Block... Damn It...
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10-24-03, 04:40 PM
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BANNED: Cheater
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IP: 399E F0FD
yo i didnt know that was wrong, my fault, but i wrote my verse with my rules, so......
"Rules: a quick 8liner no crews no hate votes and u spit first i guess" my record is 0-2, with 2 hurtins......(NOT!)/ well imma even this out against u and kclipz 4 murkin/ ill leave u sad and hummbled, so u can go onto OPRAH/ and talk about how a lightweight flowed ya(up)/ im gonna make u turn around ur intrest and occupation/ so u can go join the herb garden......a HUGE adaptation!/ heres a "TOKEN" of my appretiation/ its to hot to say, so imma leave it in abbreviations........FU/ |
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10-24-03, 04:42 PM
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BANNED: Cheater
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IP: 399E F0FD
i think my verse is aight, i dont think i didnt anything on ur rules............................................. .....
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10-24-03, 04:50 PM
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IP: 1965 93D3
*blagh* what kinda battle is this
you both got writers block or something? (no offense) there's a winner tho structure = both flow = both punches = token metas = token vote = token from lookin at token's record, i expected alot more from him, y'suppose to be a vet right? neways hit this battle up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87324 |
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10-24-03, 07:54 PM
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IP: 3CF6 3147
lmao ^... look who i'm battlin.... i aint wasting a vet material verse on him... no offense... normally i come much harder...
uppin 1
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10-24-03, 07:58 PM
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IP: 4710 118C
i aint g0t 100 post so i cant put it on da poll...but here it iz
punchz-token metaz-token flow-tbird struc.-token so obiously token get muh vote |
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10-24-03, 07:59 PM
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IP: 1B00 CD8C
token......that was ur wackest shit ever!.....
thank god u battled some one who talked about there 0-2 record in there first line......simlpy stupid..... neither had mych of anything......but the fact that Tbird knocked himself...puts him on a whole nother negative level....... vote - token......aka...lucky bastard |
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10-24-03, 08:18 PM
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IP: 3CF6 3147
hahahahaha ^ I Know Man... I Knew He Would Come Like This Thats Why I Did It.... Took Me 1 Minute And 27 Seconds To Put That Up... Hop Off My Net Dick... You Know I Can Spit...
lol Uppin 2
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10-24-03, 08:22 PM
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IP: F1FF 6B31
structure: Token
flow: Token punches: Token metas: Token Structure: Token Fav Lines: Token Rhymes Couldn't Get To A Climax If You Set A Match On The G Spot You Aint Got The Heat To Lock A Win... I Merked You Wit A Key Shot Raw heres a "TOKEN" of my appretiation/ its to hot to say, so imma leave it in abbreviations........FU/ Overall..One sided..Raw was weak..token didnt come that hard..expected tho against a newb...Still tokens weakest lines took Raw Keep elevatin raw..jackson line was tight Vote: Token http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87517 Check it |
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10-25-03, 08:20 AM
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IP: 3CF6 3147
Thank You ^... uppin 3.......
I Didn't Think My Lines Were That Bad :\ ....................................... .................................. ...........................
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10-25-03, 08:30 AM
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IP: B89D 4D65
opener:tie
closer:token structure:tie punches:token wordplay:tbirdraw overall:token nice battle peeps plz return the favor by votin fairly on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=87137 |
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10-25-03, 08:33 AM
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IP: 1495 6CD9
This is gonna sound controversial seein as everyone's on Tokens dick (no offence to u mayn)... but other than that suicidal first line i felt TBird had some funny ol' punches that were truely original:
"heres a "TOKEN" of my appretiation/ its to hot to say, so imma leave it in abbreviations........FU/" ^^^That was a hott finisher! Now the rest werent nothin special but although it could've been worded better i felt TBird had an alrite flow... Token on the other hand... dont underestimate new guys... that was ur first mistake... secondly for a crackin record like urs (27-1) that verse was weak... uv obviusly got madd skills so neva come soft... even on a new guy... didnt feel u were very personal an them punches were kinda general. Vote = TBird
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10-25-03, 11:57 AM
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IP: 3CF6 3147
Ight ^..... For Now On I'll Come ILL No Matter What.....
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10-25-03, 11:59 AM
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IP: 1495 6CD9
Werd... u took that constructive criticism exactly how u were supposed to... i applaud u... most niccas get all up tite.
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