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The day by day Life.....
Handcuffs
Word Perfect Masta C / Mc-Uski hmm......les get this shit poppin .................................................. . Man it's like our job how we patrollin' tha blocks Dawg it's thier job we can't be controllin' da cops We kinda like feens when consollin' in rocks but we still human beings holdin' bitches alot gotta love the feeling smoke sum viscious pot Till ya blood itches and clots, till ya bodies ticker just stops drinkin' liquerish shnaps, i got the quickest of hops tha sickest of drops, the doc says i need insulin shots Cuz I'm depictin' a plot, predictin' alot Next thing you know I'm facin' convictions for pot Tech's thing is I take my pen and visions just blot I Don't mistake my friends for decisions to watch If they not fake our ends can be risen to tha top Bring ma crew ta ride wit me no division can stop I don't care what ne1 says Slim on Infinite's hot! Tha games deap, rushed ta rip in it alot Tha frame's weak, I just slipped in tha spot Fuckin' dame freaks bustin' hip's of'em off "Fuckin' Game" cheats like adjustin her lips ta then cough This is my list man and i'm wishin' it off Respect, Techs, Jets I wanna glisten and all Tech's Neck Gets chics hit and then gone I Wreck Sex, Bets shit ma game'll git ta da hall Fuck fame I'm not awaitin' the call Theres no debatin' no stall, only Hatin' and Ball, So I'm Statin' no Fall ********************************* They way that I Live, and never give I'll Say what I Did, to lose clever witt Felt great with a hit, that severed some shit Smelt hate in'a bitch, but i weathered it kid Fuckin' life up blazin' and Cids........ Worries me.....about raisin' my kids ********************************** I'm claimin' the exploration of ya brain containment copassitation, **Let me get you imaginatin' and agitated,** Arrangin' segregation trail blazin' gainin' arrangement to relax this nation, Dis game in ya ears like en-slavement on pace wit dangers engaugin', Flamin' and Caged-In, Creatin' Hot bars Flamin' Like Cajuin, Burnin' Like Bacon, I Earn what I'm Takin......... Learn what I'm brakin'.........Ya face Turned is Relatin' just drop sum feeding.................... :banghead: |
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yo dawg this was a nice OPen Mic....ya Structure seemed Off But still a Good Read And ya FLow was Deent So I enjoyed It.....the Topic was Good I thought So....ya Vocab and Wordplay Posted that Pic In My Head Man..........So With Ya Structure some of ya Lines seemed too short but other wize it was a Nice Piece man....keep them dropin In aiight......p.€.a.c.€.....
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tru...........uppin...........
and Wall to Wall dopeness...............the three names are at the tippity top bro! |
yo this was illness either i slept on you or just plain out am behind the times but you displayed great skill here with limited flaws.
i enjoyed reading you work and look forward to much more |
thanx^uppin....................................... .....dont sleep ppl
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Nice It Had Nice Flow, And Nice Wordplay, Nice Vocab
You Stayed On Topic I Thought That It Was Ill Overall: 8/10 |
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yeah all round a decent drop....structure aint shit..so long as its got a flow...i mean its only the way you write it down....you dont have to have a pause after each line..so....to me it didnt come into it....some nice imagery voiced through ya words....liked the burst of multis towards the end....good,, man......pZ.....
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...Hmmm...this piece was well written..you drfted of a little...but you made back up at the end...nice...
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upppin.............dont sleep? |
hey i recognize this haha.. sounds alot better spit over a beat too.. we need'a lace that shit and throw it up.. ima post mines for the hell of it.. holla
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upppn..............
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dawg i was feelin the shit, good choices of words but get tired of reading the same endings, just switch it up a bit and mix the shit, and you got it, holdem down
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