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-Strype- vs. DaTruth29
Aight dawg..
12-14 lines No crew/hate/dr votes. Blind spit within 20 minutes No feeding Good luck.. |
check.. I just finished.. you almost done? should I post up?
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when this battle iz over vote on Da prodigy vs slugga and Da prodigy vs mixedtoxinz and i'll vote on yours
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Aight bro.. it's been over 20 minutes.. I'm postin.. hopefully your almost done.. but like I told ya in PM.. I only called ya out cuz I think we're 2 of the hottest rooks on the site.. I'm tired of wastin lyrics on scrubs.. Much respect to ya.. But you die now.. :nono:
Aight.. Look.. Acceptin my challenge was a mistake.. only Sparkin a Flame but Da Truth is I got Two Nines.. Bullets Marked wit Ya Name Herb's too busy Complainin' .. Claimin' his Wackness is Fake Roll wit me.. hit the ground harder than'a Fat Bitch on Skates Poor kid dreams about beatin' me.. stuck in a Foolish Vision When my punches'll bend ya farther over than Ja Rule in Prison You never explain your votes, but ya always Askin for Favors and ya rap's cold as Ice Cream.. plus it's Lackin the Flavors Your style is awful.. couldn't beat me if I Handed you My Lines so go'head n tell em your name.. how you Ran-from-me FIVE Times now Grab a Clover cuz the Battle's Over.. this he Clearly Knows Kid's bout to get filled wit more holes than a Bowl of Cheerios I peeped your previous posts n' poems.. a Lot of em are Boring Now watch the voters Trash your Verse like the Bottom of a 40 If anybody has any problems understanding a specific personal or punch, ask me.. the "go'head tell em your name" = "tell em 'the truth'" .. I think that's the only one that could get confusing.. Good luck dawg one~ |
Check it,
Yo flow is Pork Rine, I demolish Your Kind in Four Lines Only reason yo record's 4-0's coz u battled the same spaz 4 times I spit acid, while you get dipped In It Like A Nacho In any rap race i'll leave this nigga Winded Like Chicago I'll roast you faster than time it's self, make u "Live In The Past" The only reason you got "Stypes" is coz i be "Whippin Yo Ass" I'll Piss In A Glass and chase it with stricnine to Kill U Even if u were decent, i'd cut my nerves so I won't "Feel U" He talks out his ass, I should give em shit to Feed His Asshole N I read yo basic rhyme scheme, i'll tell Dr. Suess U Need A BAttle Behead His Type, between the lines I'll give u dem Redish "Strypes" (Blood) U lost coz U underestimated, u can't "sleep on me", like a Bed Of Spikes But as I said I'll continue to reign, slay u ass they All Watch ME Take yo fuckin heart out like it was a part of an Autopsy.... |
MEant to say.. "And i'll take yo fuckin heart out like it was part of an Autopsy"
if that would make it sound a little better, flow wise.. but nice battle cuzo... votes now please |
vote on da prodigy vs slugga and da prodigy vs mixed toxinz and i'll return the favor
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Da prodigy, ya'll gotta stop freepostin if you're not gonna vote.. for real
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That vote doesn't count dawg.. if you expect us to return your favor, you gotta explain your shit and poll it.. appreciate the vote, but you gotta do it right for it to count..
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uppin' for votes.. quit sleepin' folks..
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This battle was a close battle i think strype won though
BREAKDOWN Strype- your personals in this battle were killin it one whole line just smashed his name and that was tha highlight of your verse (to me)"but Da Truth is I got Two Nines.. Bullets Marked wit Ya Name and so go'head n tell em your name.. how you Ran-from-me FIVE Times" pesonals were hott your punches hit hard as well i like tha ja rule punch overall ya verse was on point 7/10 datruth29-wanst feelin ya opener all that much but your second line made up for it hella lot "tha same spaz four times" LOL "He talks out his ass, I should give em shit to Feed His Asshole N I read yo basic rhyme scheme, i'll tell Dr. Suess U Need A BAttle" nice punch prolly one of tha best in your verse the rest werent as stopng as strypes but u tried to come hard both-should use more word play and multies yall structure was both allright and both floed well but vote-Strype |
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-Strype-
Acceptin my challenge was a mistake.. only Sparkin a Flame but Da Truth is I got Two Nines.. Bullets Marked wit Ya Name ^weak play off of his name to be honest...atleast u played off of his name tho... Herb's too busy Complainin' .. Claimin' his Wackness is Fake Roll wit me.. hit the ground harder than'a Fat Bitch on Skates ^heh...concept is played like hell tho...fat ppl-ground hard jokes... Poor kid dreams about beatin' me.. stuck in a Foolish Vision When my punches'll bend ya farther over than Ja Rule in Prison ^nah... You never explain your votes, but ya always Askin for Favors and ya rap's cold as Ice Cream.. plus it's Lackin the Flavors ^weak metaphor...played concept Your style is awful.. couldn't beat me if I Handed you My Lines so go'head n tell em your name.. how you Ran-from-me FIVE Times ^if it's true...nice personal... now Grab a Clover cuz the Battle's Over.. this he Clearly Knows Kid's bout to get filled wit more holes than a Bowl of Cheerios ^played... I peeped your previous posts n' poems.. a Lot of em are Boring Now watch the voters Trash your Verse like the Bottom of a 40 ^meh... Datruth29: Yo flow is Pork Rine, I demolish Your Kind in Four Lines Only reason yo record's 4-0's coz u battled the same spaz 4 times ^it isn't even true... I spit acid, while you get dipped In It Like A Nacho In any rap race i'll leave this nigga Winded Like Chicago ^1st line...metaphor is weak...winded~chicage...u gotta think harder man I'll roast you faster than time it's self, make u "Live In The Past" The only reason you got "Stypes" is coz i be "Whippin Yo Ass" ^meh...atleast u played off his name..gettin sumwhere I'll Piss In A Glass and chase it with stricnine to Kill U Even if u were decent, i'd cut my nerves so I won't "Feel U" ^your basically saying your a hater...concept was nice...if u worded it right, could of been a good punch. He talks out his ass, I should give em shit to Feed His Asshole N I read yo basic rhyme scheme, i'll tell Dr. Suess U Need A BAttle ^yours is pretty basic too Behead His Type, between the lines I'll give u dem Redish "Strypes" (Blood) U lost coz U underestimated, u can't "sleep on me", like a Bed Of Spikes ^weak metaphor... But as I said I'll continue to reign, slay u ass they All Watch ME Take yo fuckin heart out like it was a part of an Autopsy.... ^another weak metaphor... Overall:...This would of been a good battle if it was a live freestyle, but ur typin shit...u can word things better...and come out with better concepts. Overall...I think that -Strype- won tho...he had played concepts...but they still were more effective than truth's weak metaphors. Givin ya'll some real feedback. Take it any way you like, just tryin to help. Return the favour with honest votes plz. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135899 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135882 pz out. God Bless. - T-West. |
^I wasn't really trying that hard.. but my metaphores were weak compared to what, your verses? naw
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T.. dawg.. I know everybody's entitled to their own opinions.. and I'm perfectly willing to accept negative feedback and suggestions.. from somebody who deserves to give it... after you made both of our verses look like garbage, I expected to see some talent when I clicked on your 2 links.. I'll tell you what bro.. next time you decide to 'teach me' how to battle, consider teaching yourself, first.. No hate, but if you're gonna try to give me advice, at least be on my level.. you're not bad at all, but you're in NO place to tell either Datruth or I that our shit is weak.. your personals and metas in those 2 verses you posted on our thread, are more played than Elton Jon at a gay bar.. I appreciate your honesty, but very few of your comments will be taken seriously.. when your rhymes impress me in some way, I'll consider taking advice from you.. word?
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good battle i cant even vote cuzz strype is my crew...but 4 t west dogg shut da fukk up with da played concept shit they both spit some shit i wanna see wun of ya verse 4 real u must be da fukk battle champion of da fukk world or some shit....good shit both of ya'll
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my vote goes to strype. he had better structure....his lines flowed better mainly because of the multies... being honest i didnt see any real hard punches from either BUT the wordplay was good from both..more so strype the cheerios line was funny..and creative. overall i hve to say strype coz he was better in every area da truth u came alright..it was jus lacking a lil on stypes |
oh.can u both return the favour plz...............
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135192 |
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this battle was tight
i liked both ya verses the punches the wordplay was all good, hot metas on both sides da truth was pretty good, i already knew strype was good cause i battled him(no hard feeling). thats why i wont vote cause it wont be viewed as a fair one Both ya was good if i had to pick i pick strype though |
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Can we get a couple more votes on here please? :thumbup:
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Honest Votes Please
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Daruth,
ya shit was pretty weak, not many personals or multies, some nice punchlines. Ya coulda came a lil harder. Extra points for some nice Punchlines Strype, ya shit was dope as hell, nice multies, nice personals nice everything, and on top of that it flowed tight. Good job vote: Strype <3 peace (return the favor) |
Why's this battle being slept on? C'mon folks.. few more votes please..
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This was a good battle but I think Strype takes it. He had a punch or a meta in like every line. Truth had some good shit in his too but I think Strype had this one by a little. Strype wins with harder punches and good metas. Ups ta both.
Vote-Strype Vote on this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136783 |
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yo im voting for Strype caz i liked the flow and good used of words and ryhmes
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i got to wait to vote but i will vote for Strype
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-Strype-
Acceptin my challenge was a mistake.. only Sparkin a Flame but Da Truth is I got Two Nines.. Bullets Marked wit Ya Name this was ok Herb's too busy Complainin' .. Claimin' his Wackness is Fake Roll wit me.. hit the ground harder than'a Fat Bitch on Skates haha made me laugh preety good Poor kid dreams about beatin' me.. stuck in a Foolish Vision When my punches'll bend ya farther over than Ja Rule in Prison ha kinda funny as-well You never explain your votes, but ya always Askin for Favors and ya rap's cold as Ice Cream.. plus it's Lackin the Flavors decent flow but could of re-wrod it better to have more effect.. Your style is awful.. couldn't beat me if I Handed you My Lines so go'head n tell em your name.. how you Ran-from-me FIVE Times good personal now Grab a Clover cuz the Battle's Over.. this he Clearly Knows Kid's bout to get filled wit more holes than a Bowl of Cheerios ummm it flows but not that hard hitting.... I peeped your previous posts n' poems.. a Lot of em are Boring Now watch the voters Trash your Verse like the Bottom of a 40 nah i wasnt feeling this... but all around it was preety good nice flow a few good diss N punches... Datruth29: Yo flow is Pork Rine, I demolish Your Kind in Four Lines Only reason yo record's 4-0's coz u battled the same spaz 4 times ok I spit acid, while you get dipped In It Like A Nacho In any rap race i'll leave this nigga Winded Like Chicago kinda weak.. I'll roast you faster than time it's self, make u "Live In The Past" The only reason you got "Stypes" is coz i be "Whippin Yo Ass" haha decent diss... I'll Piss In A Glass and chase it with stricnine to Kill U Even if u were decent, i'd cut my nerves so I won't "Feel U" not bad i was feeling it He talks out his ass, I should give em shit to Feed His Asshole N I read yo basic rhyme scheme, i'll tell Dr. Suess U Need A BAttle nah preety weak man .... Behead His Type, between the lines I'll give u dem Redish "Strypes" (Blood) U lost coz U underestimated, u can't "sleep on me", like a Bed Of Spikes decent not bad... But as I said I'll continue to reign, slay u ass they All Watch ME Take yo fuckin heart out like it was a part of an Autopsy.... not a bad ending...... this was a tight ass battle props to both but i think Datruth29 took this battle after re-reading it for having a few better diss/punches tight battle thou... |
haha.. nice.. there goes my KO :thumbup: tho by the votes, I should have been 7-0 before this last one was posted ^ oh well.. a damn hot battle regardless.. good shit truth, much respect..
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i dont think truth put any heart into this battle, i personally think truth could have done way better. . and i got to give it up to my man strype cus he used back to back metaphors and flow sounded good alongside the way he kept moving on from what he said. . .didn't jump too much. . .
nice battle to both of you. . . but i'm givin it to strype. . . |
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