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intensify effect vs Razzle Dazzle
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6 - 20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting VERY IMPORTANT: This is a new kind of battle... called Verbal Violence... Where youre verse needs to be hella violent... So instead of voting on punches and all that shit, the only things you should vote on are: Creativity (of the violence... Like.. a verse about gats wouldnt be as good as something more inventive) Flow (If theres no flow, thats still bad, cos it *is* rapping) Violence (If theres like one violent line, and the rest punches, thats BAD and shouldnt be voted for...) VOTE PROPERLY and drop links if you want the favor returned... Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 11-13-04 at 05:30 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Expired battle win |
intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-04 11:03 AM.
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Razzle Dazzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-11-04 02:08 AM.
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this gay's gonna see. want violence? get ya kids away from the screen razz holdin swords in both hands, bout to put a blade through ya spleen attacks are drastic so pack ya casket, leave ya wit arms, legs n' an ass of plastic this rancid bastard bout to get blasted wit acid, till they take ya assets home in baskets get bashed with classics when we clash fists, ya gettin beat with chainsaws fuck the set up, i'll cut ya head up, fork ya mind n' eat ya brains raw mangle and cut, i'll tangle ya guts into angles n' such hangin ya ankles and nuts, forcin other men to have u spanked in the butt ya get strangled too much, warn the feds, ain't know who i'm harmin next slice ya limbs nice and thin, to extend my collection of arms n' legs correcting my grasp, objects project in ya path with nothin protectin ya mass stick a sword in ya throat n' slice till ya mouth connects with ya ass considered wreckless, i'll frost ya frame to cross ya name off my checklist eat ya throat for breakfast n' leave ya headless, now ya ain't need a necklace ya get beat to pieces, dissect n' infect ya so much you'll excrete diseases ya stabbed n' dragged to my lab where i'll eat you like they eat a reese's gunnin ya belly, put ya cheeks in a vice to shock n' be stunnin ya steady gashes across masses of this fags flesh, after I sunk a machetti |
i hope this new battle style work out nicely...
i tryed to come raw so here it is N good luck fam... razzle its like this, wit flames your flesh is obliterated from pain-inbeded... ive been self trained-to-shred-it, so your blood from your vain-is-shedded... its drained i take-tha-credit, i start your body shakin... niddles stimulate like "intercoarse" N infect ya body till ya Bold like cancer patients.... *ha* razzle i'll squeez ya lungs, N ram a vacum-hoes in ya befor we see How-Much-U-SUCK... get ready 4 a quick lace'in, cuz "Truthfully" i'll stab at ya bladder 2 help Spill-Ya-Gut's... razzle head like a Deck-Chair i'll fold-ya-dome, ya style "old filth" coverd in mold-N-foam.. i'll Chop off ya Balls N hand them to u, So u can Hold-Ya-Own.. *ouch* Bitch i'll pound on ya chest till it look like u can "cup-ya-tit... * cup = bra * N "pistol whipe ya ass" N Bust, like i was anal fuck'in ya with a load'ed Clip... ya presence i despise so when u see ME, razzle ya best bet is to run-duck-N-hide... i'll cut ya face.. N leave the blade inbeded in ya skull forever like 60 yrs-old Virgin-Thighs... *ha* i'll go in-ya house while u calling police Screaming , I.E broke in with a Gun-Tucked-on-side... fuck up ya ryde, N have ya whip filled wit bullets holes while u'r Son-Stuck-Inside.. (aww-man) N if ya reach N put ya hand out, You'll feel the full Effect of the burn... cuz my gun heat's up around 3000 degreez , so da feel of "Cremation" u about to learn... pause * wait its about to get worse visual wise* yo, i'll hang-ya by ya hair, N continue to squeez ya balls with a "Nut-cracker" till blood ouzz out ... cut ya adam N pour bleach-in, then wash my BOXSER's in dude's-MOUTH.. *eew* EAT-SHIT? nah... but since u'r flow dry, i'll force feed ya a wet-alfit till ya piss clothes..... chop ya body up in quaters, N insert ya sections on a lit-stove... * danm hes hot* got razzle looking pregnat, after i detach hes skin off hes back N stitched it around a globe... u shouldnt had said-shit.. cuz this bitch acts, levft hes arms broke N stuck in hes ass... like LES useing a anal dildo... BANg-BANG-EARLY.... |
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Voted For: Razzle Dazzle
Eazy win 4 razzle his wordplay was witty yet violent and crucial his structure was on point his vocab was also on point Intensify u also had a nice drop very violent and understood ya wordplay is wha threw u off here it didnt really flow all 2gether kind of like a bunch of violent words jus threw 2gether and not structured my vote goes 2 razzle Returned votes are appreciated Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for intensify effect
hmmm,lmao...*vomits*...aight um not votin but um ya...hmmm?
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hmm, omb..i hate to say it but i think he took ya...
both pretty violent but ie had some fuckin ill lines.... |
This was feedback posted for Razzle Dazzle
word...dopeness. this was a 'SICK' idea. good verses from both emcees. if i could vote it would be for razzle his was simply way more violent.
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^should have voted................... lol ... so now your opinion doesnt matter!! haha..
*foils daz again* word.. |
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lmao, yes but razz, i have alias's........*fools razz again* |
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ahhh i figuerd he wouldnt vote for me ANYWAYS EITHER WAY U LOOK AT IT... he'll just vote for hes buddy... DAZ thanks for being honest.... turma or whatever the fuck ya name is who cares about feed-back when we need VOTES THAT ARE EXPLAINED...... upp'in for more honest votes N better BRAKE DOWNS.... |
Voted For: Razzle Dazzle
Damn this battle made me heave lol...na this was a mad battle both ya heads need checkin lol but Raz ya verse was ill both in the mental sense and the lyrical sense...the wordplay was eugh...i mean it was cool nicely done some sick bars in there no doubt and it flowed well...but that don't matter... Intensify again u had a sick verse disgusting lol...it was quite a hard call to make because both were equally evil in their wordplay so i'm sorry but it had to goto the basics and RD did have a better flow to his verse but damn we need to see more of these battles... RTF in ma sig...song or battle i don't mind :thumbup: Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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this is still open with the same votes??? WTF?? upp'in for votes........
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Voted For: Razzle Dazzle
v/one m.b one-damn this was a hot verse.....you def had soooooooooooooo much flow it just rolled off the tip of my tongue....and then i just spit ur verse as i read it and it sounded even better..........i like the idea of this new battle style tooo.............you had soo much imagery and a lil humor.......very very very nice multi's.....haha which is just expected by you...................very nice vocab......you came more creative and more thought out the topic as you spit....and everything just worked together......which is how it should be.....good drop i was astonished by the flow inensity-you came more with punches here......but this wasnt really about the punches and stuff.........it was more like a topical battle in a way just about being violent........but you came with good multi's .....some of ya lines didnt include being violent.......you shoulda focused on the violence more cuz thats what this battle was about...........and i dont think ur structure was too bad cuz multi's can create longer lines.....which i have no prob with...... good battle return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=163144 honest and explained v/one m.b peace~1 |
yo this was fire hot lava, one verse was sick nice multis and all good picture in my head as u spit and I.E verse was hot like fire 2 i mean hes punches was raw he had a good picture in my head the ending was nasty with the nuts N hair shit but if i could vote it would be for I.E i thought he had the more enjoyable verse that flow better off my toung close one
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Voted For: intensify effect
alright if i had to vote who won punch wise then raz got this but since its violence then I.E got this.. I.E: you had a pretty dope verse ... the gore and violence was definately better than raz's... you got real descriptive which was dope showed the imagery... decent structure could have been better even the lines up... flow was pretty good also good verse.. overall : 8.5/10 ra..daz.. your verse was good but not as violent and since this is how you wanted people to vote then i think you lose.... and also some of the multies kinda threw off the flow i know your trademark is multies but they didnt work too well here you also need to work on ya structure even it up overall: 7.4/10 vote: I.E return the favor on any battle in my sig plz!!!! |
This was feedback posted for intensify effect
just checking polls......
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^^^ why are u check'in polls u should of voted.....................
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good vote... but eh? even up my structure?? it was pretty even i thought... and his was overshot and stuff... i just didnt get your logic on that... |
^^^ i aint complain or quote any of u'r votes....
why u trying to sway votes???? |
go ahead if you wanna... votes dont dq themselves...
that guys vote just didnt make any sense to me.. im not gonna dq it.. i hate dqin votes.. its cool if its just some subjective thing like he liked one verse more than the other... but some of the stuff is just like what... by the way, you cant sway votes with the new system... the only thing other people see is our verses. :thumbup: |
Voted For: Razzle Dazzle
I.E- Creativity: not bad at all, you through some punches in there that helped with this- Flow: man ur bars are really kinda long, even with the use of the multies it didn't flow great for me. Violence Level: pretty violent, I kinda expected more but it wasn't bad.... razzle: Creativity: you a multi head case like me so I generally find ur shit right up my alley, your verse was more what I expected where you pretty much just went out on a descriptive rampage. Flow: flowed better than your opponents, lines nice and equal length, real easy read here.... Level of Violence: I'd say this was slightly more violent than your opponents just for the fact you don't shovin punchlines in it, you stuck to the task at hand and described a pretty bloody scene, good job... i think this was a cool idea to be done, props to both, I vote Razzle.... please return the fav guy... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d=1#post1807015 |
Voted For: intensify effect
This Style Is Pretty Gay But Whatever... This Kid Had More Ways Of Death And Even Tied Punches Into That... He Also Had A Cleaner Structure... And Ya, He Was The Most Violent???... Lololmao, Ya So Thats Whats Up... I Hope This Style Doesnt Make It Off The Grownd... .One. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for Razzle Dazzle
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^^^ man u could of voted insted of feed back mang......
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Fuuck.. why is this battle still open..
was dqin those votes really necessary?? it just makes shit longer... if you were gonna win, you would have got 4 votes and i woulda got 2... those votes that were dqed were fine.. and you also lost a vote.. but now no one wants to vote on this shit so itll never get closed.. |
^^^ now now easy if u was gonna win then u still should win or get the next couple the votes.....
the votes that were removed means they wasnt explain good enough........ dont start no beef ova this shit mang.... i wouldnt want to take it there with u.... lets just focus on getting this close and we can do it again if ya want REGULAR BATTLE STYLE.... |
nah im audio..
I aint beefin I was just in a bad mood when I said that.. Just annoys me cos battles take so damn long to close nowadays |
Voted For: Razzle Dazzle
yo had to go wit OMB both came violent like psycho-mothafuckas but damn OMB's multi flow violence jus killed it i was goin ohhhhhhhh to da folloein: attacks are drastic so pack ya casket, leave ya wit arms, legs n' an ass of plastic this rancid bastard bout to get blasted wit acid, till they take ya assets home in baskets get bashed with classics when we clash fists, ya gettin beat with chainsaws fuck the set up, i'll cut ya head up, fork ya mind n' eat ya brains raw and correcting my grasp, objects project in ya path with nothin protectin ya mass stick a sword in ya throat n' slice till ya mouth connects with ya ass yo I.E was feelin tour drop but it was jus as voilent as OMB but OMB edged ahead wit da multi flow. Peace. RETURN FAVOUR ON REALISTIK BATTLE - LINK IN SIG |
Voted For: Razzle Dazzle
wow omb you sound like when i used to battle with gore....lol...nice shit.... . OMB:you verse was nice good punches they hit good...nice personlas....good wordplay....and over all nice ass structure....overall:9/10 . intensify effect:okay you had a okay verse...you had some okay punches..they didn't hit as much...okay personals..but hell this wasn't really that personal overall.....you had wordplay....but your strcutre was fucked....overall:8/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
danm when will the hate stop ya must be reading it wrong or something he had multis and all but he aint had that raw of a verse word i thought u was soppuse to vote according to RAW and deadly and violence not flow and multis thats why this site is going down the drain slowly but surely to many dick ryders who cant vote stright up
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Voted For: Razzle Dazzle
OMB...You are officially a SICK FUCK. ya get beat to pieces, dissect n' infect ya so much you'll excrete diseases ^YOU ARE A SICK FUCKING LUNATIC... YOU PROBABLY DO THIS STUFF IN REAL LIFE AND JACK OFF OVER DEAD BODIES AND YOU PROBABLY LICK UP VOMIT.. But....I think you won this battle due to punches and personals of structure.. Flow.. Umm.. Peace.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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