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intensify effect 1 16.67%
Razzle Dazzle 5 83.33%
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Old 11-10-04, 05:30 AM   #1
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intensify effect vs Razzle Dazzle

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Battle Rules:

6 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

VERY IMPORTANT:
This is a new kind of battle... called Verbal Violence... Where youre verse needs to be hella violent...

So instead of voting on punches and all that shit, the only things you should vote on are:

Creativity (of the violence... Like.. a verse about gats wouldnt be as good as something more inventive)

Flow (If theres no flow, thats still bad, cos it *is* rapping)

Violence (If theres like one violent line, and the rest punches, thats BAD and shouldnt be voted for...)

VOTE PROPERLY

and drop links if you want the favor returned...


Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 11-13-04 at 05:30 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

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Old 11-10-04, 11:03 AM   #2
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intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-04 11:03 AM.
 
Old 11-11-04, 02:08 AM   #3
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Razzle Dazzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-11-04 02:08 AM.
 
Old 11-14-04, 04:34 AM   #4
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this gay's gonna see. want violence? get ya kids away from the screen
razz holdin swords in both hands, bout to put a blade through ya spleen

attacks are drastic so pack ya casket, leave ya wit arms, legs n' an ass of plastic
this rancid bastard bout to get blasted wit acid, till they take ya assets home in baskets
get bashed with classics when we clash fists, ya gettin beat with chainsaws
fuck the set up, i'll cut ya head up, fork ya mind n' eat ya brains raw
mangle and cut, i'll tangle ya guts into angles n' such
hangin ya ankles and nuts, forcin other men to have u spanked in the butt
ya get strangled too much, warn the feds, ain't know who i'm harmin next
slice ya limbs nice and thin, to extend my collection of arms n' legs
correcting my grasp, objects project in ya path with nothin protectin ya mass
stick a sword in ya throat n' slice till ya mouth connects with ya ass
considered wreckless, i'll frost ya frame to cross ya name off my checklist
eat ya throat for breakfast n' leave ya headless, now ya ain't need a necklace
ya get beat to pieces, dissect n' infect ya so much you'll excrete diseases
ya stabbed n' dragged to my lab where i'll eat you like they eat a reese's
gunnin ya belly, put ya cheeks in a vice to shock n' be stunnin ya steady
gashes across masses of this fags flesh, after I sunk a machetti
 
Old 11-14-04, 11:08 AM   #5
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i hope this new battle style work out nicely...
i tryed to come raw so here it is N good luck fam...

razzle its like this,

wit flames your flesh is obliterated from pain-inbeded...
ive been self trained-to-shred-it, so your blood from your vain-is-shedded...
its drained i take-tha-credit, i start your body shakin...
niddles stimulate like "intercoarse" N infect ya body till ya Bold like cancer patients.... *ha*
razzle i'll squeez ya lungs, N ram a vacum-hoes in ya befor we see How-Much-U-SUCK...
get ready 4 a quick lace'in, cuz "Truthfully" i'll stab at ya bladder 2 help Spill-Ya-Gut's...
razzle head like a Deck-Chair i'll fold-ya-dome, ya style "old filth" coverd in mold-N-foam..
i'll Chop off ya Balls N hand them to u, So u can Hold-Ya-Own.. *ouch*
Bitch i'll pound on ya chest till it look like u can "cup-ya-tit... * cup = bra *
N "pistol whipe ya ass" N Bust, like i was anal fuck'in ya with a load'ed Clip...
ya presence i despise so when u see ME, razzle ya best bet is to run-duck-N-hide...
i'll cut ya face.. N leave the blade inbeded in ya skull forever like 60 yrs-old Virgin-Thighs... *ha*
i'll go in-ya house while u calling police Screaming , I.E broke in with a Gun-Tucked-on-side...
fuck up ya ryde, N have ya whip filled wit bullets holes while u'r Son-Stuck-Inside.. (aww-man)
N if ya reach N put ya hand out, You'll feel the full Effect of the burn...
cuz my gun heat's up around 3000 degreez , so da feel of "Cremation" u about to learn...
pause
* wait its about to get worse visual wise*

yo,
i'll hang-ya by ya hair, N continue to squeez ya balls with a "Nut-cracker" till blood ouzz out ...
cut ya adam N pour bleach-in, then wash my BOXSER's in dude's-MOUTH.. *eew*
EAT-SHIT? nah... but since u'r flow dry, i'll force feed ya a wet-alfit till ya piss clothes.....
chop ya body up in quaters, N insert ya sections on a lit-stove... * danm hes hot*
got razzle looking pregnat, after i detach hes skin off hes back N stitched it around a globe...
u shouldnt had said-shit.. cuz this bitch acts, levft hes arms broke N stuck in hes ass... like LES useing a anal dildo...

BANg-BANG-EARLY....
 
Old 11-15-04, 05:36 PM   #6
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upp'in this battle dont sleep.......................
 
Old 11-17-04, 12:38 AM   #7
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DAMN.... uppin............................................. .........
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Old 11-17-04, 01:14 AM   #8
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Voted For: Razzle Dazzle

Eazy win 4 razzle
his wordplay was witty yet violent and crucial
his structure was on point
his vocab was also on point

Intensify u also had a nice drop
very violent and understood
ya wordplay is wha threw u off here
it didnt really flow all 2gether
kind of like a bunch of violent words
jus threw 2gether and not structured

my vote goes 2 razzle

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Old 11-17-04, 06:27 AM   #9
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This was feedback posted for intensify effect

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hmmm,lmao...*vomits*...aight um not votin but um ya...hmmm?
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 11-17-04, 06:29 AM   #10
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hmm, omb..i hate to say it but i think he took ya...
both pretty violent but ie had some fuckin ill lines....
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 11-17-04, 07:02 AM   #11
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This was feedback posted for Razzle Dazzle

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word...dopeness. this was a 'SICK' idea. good verses from both emcees. if i could vote it would be for razzle his was simply way more violent.
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Old 11-17-04, 07:03 AM   #12
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^should have voted................... lol ... so now your opinion doesnt matter!! haha..

*foils daz again*

word..
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Old 11-17-04, 09:23 AM   #13
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Originally Posted by Razzle Dazzle
^should have voted................... lol ... so now your opinion doesnt matter!! haha..

*foils daz again*

word..

lmao, yes but razz, i have alias's........*fools razz again*
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 11-17-04, 11:09 AM   #14
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Originally Posted by *Troop*
Voted For: Razzle Dazzle

Eazy win 4 razzle
his wordplay was witty yet violent and crucial
his structure was on point
his vocab was also on point

Intensify u also had a nice drop
very violent and understood
ya wordplay is wha threw u off here
it didnt really flow all 2gether
kind of like a bunch of violent words
jus threw 2gether and not structured

my vote goes 2 razzle

Returned votes are appreciated


ahhh i figuerd he wouldnt vote for me ANYWAYS EITHER WAY U LOOK AT IT...
he'll just vote for hes buddy...

DAZ thanks for being honest....

turma or whatever the fuck ya name is who cares about feed-back when we need VOTES THAT ARE EXPLAINED......

upp'in for more honest votes N better BRAKE DOWNS....
 
Old 11-18-04, 07:44 AM   #15
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Damn this battle made me heave lol...na this was a mad battle both ya heads need checkin lol but Raz ya verse was ill both in the mental sense and the lyrical sense...the wordplay was eugh...i mean it was cool nicely done some sick bars in there no doubt and it flowed well...but that don't matter...

Intensify again u had a sick verse disgusting lol...it was quite a hard call to make because both were equally evil in their wordplay so i'm sorry but it had to goto the basics and RD did have a better flow to his verse but damn we need to see more of these battles...

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