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BROOKLYN vs Mentally Kursed
(remade cus off all the freepostin)
5 or 6 bars no c h DICK RIDE votes blind spit but 24 hour deadline max anyone can vote but newbies//define:3 month membership no feedin anyothas i forget? |
My Life Is Like A Field Trip Question . . . It's Fun To, When?!(Win)
You Couldn't Kick A Bar If You Had A Reflex Test In A Jungle Gym Get Focused, Like Bill And Ted's Journey Your Career On The Net's Bogus All The Vets Know This, Which Is Why You Gotta Battle Me Just To Get Noticed You Ain't Real, It's Like You Plagiarize The Way You Have Fake Text So I Put This Guy In A Headpiece Like Girls Who Have Safe Sex I'm Not Dissin Your Talkative Wackness But Your Missin The Thought In Rap Thats Fine For Litter Cus Mental’s Used To Havin Tickets For Dropping Trash Tendons Torn Off His Back, Crewless Fag, See The Whore's Born A Loner He's Stuck In Morgues, Ya Time's Cuts Short Like Pre-Mature Organ Donors How You Expect To Battle The #1 Out Of 9? Your Whole Rep Is To Straddle Guys Plus You Got More Stretched Wordplay Than A Fifty Point Scrabble Line .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ... |
Brooklyn: Please go easy on me, all my wins come from newbies, im not ready to face a vet.
Mentally Kursed: Its okay, i heard all dogs go to heaven Brooklyn: So after you lyrically murder me ill be in heaven wit my puppy NaNa .................................................. ....................................... aight check it Brooklyn your a newbie, you applied to become a vet but was declined// you placed your scrotums on a modem so your balls would be on line// (online) your verse was bad like a R. Kelley song, called little girl go away// lyrically stabbin your soul and endin your life, causin your heart to stop then delay// slit your throat wit a machette, breath in, then out, and relax// you cant see yourself beatin me even if you rocked viagra made wit contacts// my punches hit to the back knockin your vertebrae disks outta your spine// head shoulders knees and toes chopped up, your body parts no longer connect or align// your life is like a swish in bball, your career is nothin but net// you work wit SARS for minor wage and your still not a major threat// Brooklyn edits his verses to win, battles newbies for his rec// Changed your font size to a smaller font so your flow doesnt seem stretched// |
Re: BROOKLYN vs Mentally Kursed
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Breakdown for Ya:
Flow-Mentally Punches-BROOKLYN Vocab-Both Mulit-BROOKLYN Enjoyability-Both Creativness-BOTH Funniess-Mentally Structure-BROOKLYN Overal-BROOKLYN Personal Breakdowns: Mentally Best Lines: Brooklyn: Please go easy on me, all my wins come from newbies, im not ready to face a vet. Mentally Kursed: Its okay, i heard all dogs go to heaven Brooklyn: So after you lyrically murder me ill be in heaven wit my puppy NaNa That may not have been part of the spit but that was some pretty funny ass shit, I was laughing my ass off, I ahd to readjust before I read your rhyme. You got some skill, I personally don't prefer separating bars, looks bad but hey you can do whatever. Good verse but not good enough. BROOKLYN Best Line: Get Focused, Like Bill And Ted's Journey Your Career On The Net's Bogus All The Vets Know This, Which Is Why You Gotta Battle Me Just To Get Noticed I loved the reference to an early teen movie. Bill and Ted's movies were cool. Nice use of historical movies to incooperate his rhymes into it, nice one. This was a pretty good verse. Once again it was pretty mcuh flawless, you have proven once again why you are the top on RB. Props to both MC's for a awsome battle! Oh and I am not a noob, so take this into account, I know what I am talking about, so deal with it. |
Oh man
Fuckin sick battle Everythin was TIE so i cant vote Brooks punches were ILL, then i read Kurses and he was ILL TIE peace Best line was Brooklyns about safe sex, nice shit |
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overall verse average 6.5/10 Overall:BROOKLYN |
he edits verses in elite frontlines and u can edit in elite
uppin and i think that new rule needs 2 be enforced brook .................................................. ............................... |
top ten and mod votes only
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That everyone can vote except noobs, which I am not. My vote was wlel explained and it was folloed by another explained vote that was practically the same thing. But if you want to lose slower that is fine with me. It was an explained vote nd a good one at that, so go ahead, reset the poles or whatever you want to do.
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i think thats how it should go cus everyone knows mods vote fair im not sayin yall d/r or nothin its jus thats wha i think
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INSTEAD OF THAT WHY DIDNT WE JUST HAVE THE BATTLE IN ELITE?
LOOK IF YOU LIKE ADD A POST LIMIT THATS OK WITH ME BUT TOP 10 & MODS WILL TAKE 24 TO 72 HOURS HOW ABOUT 500 POST TO VOTE? |
aight thats coo tho it should be 1-0 u
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i'm gonna have to go wit brooklyn .. he had ebtta wordplay flow and punches.. no hate props to bohth good battle ..
vote:brooklyn |
damn another vote that doesnt count aight people read this
u have to have 500 POSTS AND 3 MONTH MEMBERSHIP not jus one but BOTH its pose to be 1-0 cus rico was the only one who had BOTH .................................................. ........................................... |
^^^ foreal tho his cat mite just loose cuzof this shit
follow the rules fukerrs.. i thoguht this was an aite battle broolyn i wanna battle wit u kid any day....anytime pm me da link second u had sum coo punches na personals first pair oflines was a filler but all in all u had a pretty legit verse.. Mk u came pretty hard against brook...u really tryna no get a loses//..... but if u have mods vote ull get a fair loss or win////sum cats do d/r cuz they jok brook that aint his fault its just da herbish thing to do.... bu MK damn u did come cllean an alll it was fukin close but BRook TOOK it.. pc props brook me an u..homie pm me da link |
Vote = Broolyn
Came harder wit punches And better wordplay The other guy was tight too but I was feelin Brooklyn's flow more |
BREAKDOWN
BROOKLYN I'm Not Dissin Your Talkative Wackness But Your Missin The Thought In Rap Thats Fine For Litter Cus Mental’s Used To Havin Tickets For Dropping Trash You Ain't Real, It's Like You Plagiarize The Way You Have Fake Text So I Put This Guy In A Headpiece Like Girls Who Have Safe Sex Get Focused, Like Bill And Ted's Journey Your Career On The Net's Bogus All The Vets Know This, Which Is Why You Gotta Battle Me Just To Get Noticed thos are killas ^^^ How You Expect To Battle The #1 Out Of 9? Your Whole Rep Is To Straddle Guys Plus You Got More Stretched Wordplay Than A Fifty Point Scrabble Line not that great of a finisher.. i expected him to do a betta finisha cuz he's "the best" at rb.. no hate tho MENTALLY KURSED Brooklyn your a newbie, you applied to become a vet but was declined// you placed your scrotums on a modem so your balls would be on line// (online) my punches hit to the back knockin your vertebrae disks outta your spine// head shoulders knees and toes chopped up, your body parts no longer connect or align// your life is like a swish in bball, your career is nothin but net// you work wit SARS for minor wage and your still not a major threat// those are killas^^^ Brooklyn edits his verses to win, battles newbies for his rec// Changed your font size to a smaller font so your flow doesnt seem stretched// nice but not that great of a finisher...nice tho.. no hate doggs vocab=both punches=mental flow=mental metas=brook structure=both humor=mental(opening line was great) creativity=both enjoyability=both vote=Mentally Kursed\ close ass battle tho... i expected brook to take it cuz he's the "top dogg" but whatever.. no hate no beef im not polling...juss waitin fer the mods to fix the poll.. its suppose to b 1-0 cuz of the requirments peace |
Good Battle here.....BreakDown
Punches - Brook Persoanls - MK Flow - Brook Multi's - Brook Wordplay -Brook Vote = Brook MK u usually come harder than that cuz.....But this is like the 5th battle Ive seen from u where u talkin bout cuttin or rippin someones spine out, u need to change it up a bit dawg..... |
It Wasnt Bad But I've Said It Before.. Brook
Start Battlin Kats In Ure Own League Dawg.. Your Gunna Get Buried For This Newb Shit.. Again Every Category You Took This.. Even Tho My Vote Was An Opinon Still Return The Favor I Took The Time To Hit This Up..(Hit That UP Too Mental) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...7696#post747696 |
Good Battle here.....BreakDown
Punches - Brook Persoanls - MK Flow - Brook Multi's - Brook Wordplay -Brook Vote = Brook ^^ Exactly |
-3 from brookyln.
three of those who polled did not have the required time on the site, or the required post count. in fact, almost everyone who voted broke the voting rules. i think this was actually pretty close thouh. and im not voting. dont bitch about me takin away from ya votes brook, as they dont count for not following rules you agreed to. pz |
ayo im uppin for these kats.. gettin slept on.. btw i did poll vote aight... UPPIN FO THESE ILL CATS
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YOU STILL DONT HAVE 500 POST, WELL UPPIN :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::: |
ARE YOU THREATING ME!!!!!!???????
WHAT I DONT KNO UPPIN HOES YES IM JOCKIN AND IM SORRY ~WUN~ ~TWO~ |
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Strong, tight battle...
Brooklyn takes this for stronger punches and slightly better wordplay. That line about battlin him ta get noticed was ultra sick. Kursed came ok, pretty tight. But... If I see one more person rip on Brook about battlin newbs... I think I'll scream. Kursed came with an amazing opener, but didn't continue that way. Fell off some. Still, tight ass battle. Deserves props. Holla back... Vote up, please... |
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THANK YOU, I HAVEN'T MADE 1 CALLOUT SINCE JULY PEOPLE CALL ME OUT I JUST ACCEPT NEWBIE OR VET NOW UPPIN, SLOW PROCESS VOTING! |
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Vote here and ill return da honest favor
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This battle was pretty garbage... on both sides...
Brook... old played punches... it's 2003... bill and ted punches have been played for 8 years... get over it... flow was ok... Ment... stop postin verses like that... it takes away from the flow of it... plus it's gay... R Kelly punches... wow... played... um... all I can say is... Vote: Brook... better played lines... punches slightly harder... I'm throughly disappointed I even looked at this... you must stay battlin newbs or something for that record... *shakes head in disgust and walks out* |
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Flow-BROOKLYN
Punches-BROOKLYN Vocab-Both Mulit-BROOKLYN Enjoyability-BROOKLYN Creativness-BOTH Funniess-Mentally Structure-BROOKLYN Overall-BROOKLYN this wuz an iigh battle...brook simply outdid mentally...need i say more... |
I cant vote because of this damn new name..plus I cant crew vote..but if I could vote vote I would vote for Mentally Kursed..he had some good ass line..I liked this one the most..
you cant see yourself beatin me even if you rocked viagra made wit contacts// that was ill..and Brooklyn had some good ass line also..mainly this one... You Couldn't Kick A Bar If You Had A Reflex Test In A Jungle Gym But I going to have to go with Mentally Kursed on this battle..and dont say this is a damn newbie vote either...peace out.. uppin this shit for yall too... |
YEA I AGREE WITH EVERYBODY ELSE...
BROOKLYN GOT THIS...NO EXPLANATION NEEDED REALYY.... SO MY VOTE IS GOING TO GO TO... BROOKLYN....YEP POLL VOTE- BROOK ...YEP ....PZ You are banned for DR... and explanations ARE needed. -Amby *Vote Taken Away* |
Battle reopened... 4-0 in favor of Brooklyn.
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propain streetlegend and tonya montana cant vote
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^ too late
whatever this was like not even the best battle i've ever seen seriuosly but whatever if i could vote i would say Kursed took it i liked his structure ten x's better than brook and some of his punches were nice, im not saying brook didnt have nice stuff but i felt that kursed took it ^is that explained? whatever it dont matter cuz i can't vote, just an opinion |
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