(remade cus off all the freepostin)

5 or 6 bars
no c h DICK RIDE votes
blind spit but 24 hour deadline max
anyone can vote but newbies//define:3 month membership
no feedin

anyothas i forget?

My Life Is Like A Field Trip Question . . . It's Fun To, When?!(Win)
You Couldn't Kick A Bar If You Had A Reflex Test In A Jungle Gym
Get Focused, Like Bill And Ted's Journey Your Career On The Net's Bogus
All The Vets Know This, Which Is Why You Gotta Battle Me Just To Get Noticed
You Ain't Real, It's Like You Plagiarize The Way You Have Fake Text
So I Put This Guy In A Headpiece Like Girls Who Have Safe Sex
I'm Not Dissin Your Talkative Wackness But Your Missin The Thought In Rap
Thats Fine For Litter Cus Mental’s Used To Havin Tickets For Dropping Trash
Tendons Torn Off His Back, Crewless Fag, See The Whore's Born A Loner
He's Stuck In Morgues, Ya Time's Cuts Short Like Pre-Mature Organ Donors
How You Expect To Battle The #1 Out Of 9? Your Whole Rep Is To Straddle Guys
Plus You Got More Stretched Wordplay Than A Fifty Point Scrabble Line
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Brooklyn: Please go easy on me, all my wins come from newbies, im not ready to face a vet.

Mentally Kursed: Its okay, i heard all dogs go to heaven

Brooklyn: So after you lyrically murder me ill be in heaven wit my puppy NaNa
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aight check it

Brooklyn your a newbie, you applied to become a vet but was declined//
you placed your scrotums on a modem so your balls would be on line// (online)

your verse was bad like a R. Kelley song, called little girl go away//
lyrically stabbin your soul and endin your life, causin your heart to stop then delay//

slit your throat wit a machette, breath in, then out, and relax//
you cant see yourself beatin me even if you rocked viagra made wit contacts//

my punches hit to the back knockin your vertebrae disks outta your spine//
head shoulders knees and toes chopped up, your body parts no longer connect or align//

your life is like a swish in bball, your career is nothin but net//
you work wit SARS for minor wage and your still not a major threat//

Brooklyn edits his verses to win, battles newbies for his rec//
Changed your font size to a smaller font so your flow doesnt seem stretched//

^^keep that in mind

uppin fo votes (1)

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Breakdown for Ya:

Flow-Mentally
Punches-BROOKLYN
Vocab-Both
Mulit-BROOKLYN
Enjoyability-Both
Creativness-BOTH
Funniess-Mentally
Structure-BROOKLYN

Overal-BROOKLYN

Personal Breakdowns:

Mentally

Best Lines:
Brooklyn: Please go easy on me, all my wins come from newbies, im not ready to face a vet.

Mentally Kursed: Its okay, i heard all dogs go to heaven

Brooklyn: So after you lyrically murder me ill be in heaven wit my puppy NaNa

That may not have been part of the spit but that was some pretty funny ass shit, I was laughing my ass off, I ahd to readjust before I read your rhyme. You got some skill, I personally don't prefer separating bars, looks bad but hey you can do whatever. Good verse but not good enough.

BROOKLYN

Best Line:
Get Focused, Like Bill And Ted's Journey Your Career On The Net's Bogus
All The Vets Know This, Which Is Why You Gotta Battle Me Just To Get Noticed

I loved the reference to an early teen movie. Bill and Ted's movies were cool. Nice use of historical movies to incooperate his rhymes into it, nice one. This was a pretty good verse. Once again it was pretty mcuh flawless, you have proven once again why you are the top on RB.


Props to both MC's for a awsome battle!

Oh and I am not a noob, so take this into account, I know what I am talking about, so deal with it.

Oh man

Fuckin sick battle

Everythin was TIE so i cant vote

Brooks punches were ILL, then i read Kurses and he was ILL


TIE


peace


Best line was Brooklyns about safe sex, nice shit

overall verse average: 8/10




overall verse average 6.5/10

Overall:BROOKLYN

he edits verses in elite frontlines and u can edit in elite

uppin and i think that new rule needs 2 be enforced brook

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top ten and mod votes only

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That everyone can vote except noobs, which I am not. My vote was wlel explained and it was folloed by another explained vote that was practically the same thing. But if you want to lose slower that is fine with me. It was an explained vote nd a good one at that, so go ahead, reset the poles or whatever you want to do.

i think thats how it should go cus everyone knows mods vote fair im not sayin yall d/r or nothin its jus thats wha i think

mod and top ten votes
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INSTEAD OF THAT WHY DIDNT WE JUST HAVE THE BATTLE IN ELITE?

LOOK IF YOU LIKE ADD A POST LIMIT THATS OK WITH ME BUT TOP 10 & MODS WILL TAKE 24 TO 72 HOURS

HOW ABOUT 500 POST TO VOTE?

aight thats coo tho it should be 1-0 u

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i'm gonna have to go wit brooklyn .. he had ebtta wordplay flow and punches.. no hate props to bohth good battle ..

vote:brooklyn