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Diet Coke 11-07-06 01:41 PM

I don't know too much about it, see if the US lost, it's rarely talked about because they like to self glory the shit outta themselves. I'll look it up, regardless, Zone Out's Canada war line was weak, because A. We beat the US, B. Even Hitler said if he had Canadian troops instead of German troops he would have won the war. C. I have to go back to work now, peace.

Avalon 11-07-06 02:08 PM

Voted For: troublesome06

gotta go with this duke... I know I know who you are... but fuck if I can remember your name... which actually makes Zone's punches great... cause they were funny... hit hard and on point... what lost the battle for him... is simple... flow... delivery... mic presence... emotion and ability to ride the beat... You won based on those things and like 2 good punches... the rest was ok...


Vote switched

Avalon 11-07-06 02:12 PM

actually the more I think about it... I'm still thinkin about Zone's verse... but he can't spit for shit... damn... which is fuckin me up... you know what... Someone go ahead and change my vote... I don't have mod powers over here... I mean... he dissed the fuck out of you which was funny... change it.

Zone Out 11-07-06 03:38 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Red Bull
I don't know too much about it, see if the US lost, it's rarely talked about because they like to self glory the shit outta themselves. I'll look it up, regardless, Zone Out's Canada war line was weak, because A. We beat the US, B. Even Hitler said if he had Canadian troops instead of German troops he would have won the war. C. I have to go back to work now, peace.

ok
but how many wars have America won since then?
and how many wars have Canada won since then?
my point exactly
you dont even like rap anyway, STFU!

.Ike. 11-07-06 03:56 PM

This was feedback posted for Zone Out
 
checking polls............................................

TROUBLESOMEā„¢ 11-07-06 04:26 PM

cant fucking change a vote unless u explain why cause it was funnier? ok but yet u said my flow/pressence.delvery....and riding tha beat was better
so how tha fuck did he win?
this is a rap battle right?
its wutever
nice verse too zone........no hate there

Zone Out 11-07-06 04:36 PM

if I would've put some effort into my delivery I would've won by now 5-0
but I was tired from recording other shit
thats the only thing I regret about my verse.

TROUBLESOMEā„¢ 11-07-06 04:43 PM

dogg take ya arogant ass sumwhere else i said nice verse and u still fucking make exuses

BigTony.Self 11-07-06 11:24 PM

This was feedback posted for Zone Out
 
peepin .................................................. .............

Ebircs 11-07-06 11:44 PM

Voted For: Zone Out

man......hard...shits close..........for real.....trouble got the flow n shit ....but i think zone got the punches n delevery.....troubles was put together tigher...quality wise....but thats not what wins a battle IMO...and zone had a few nice punches and metas...."i son kids that son kids....head cold n shit.....he was comin at dude...and trouble sounded better overall man....but that an't whats up, cuz zone came nice, AND had punches man.....and i think he won this w them punches for real..."mr rogers hood" n shit....zone took this

Willa 11-07-06 11:50 PM

This was feedback posted for troublesome06
 
trouble you had really nice flow production was nice
will had soem nide punches

Willa 11-07-06 11:52 PM

i kinda wish i had voted now
if i had my vote would have been for zone
hiw flow and breath control wasn't as nice as troubles
but as far as punches go zone got this easy

Avalon 11-08-06 12:21 AM

^ see... it's a 2nd thought thing... you had good flow etc... but punches when a battle... you didn't have enough punches to win it... which is FUCKING crazy. he had a shit load of punches that were nice... you had 2. you had a better flow... but... I didn't remember anything but that from your verse... he beat you duke...

Yvonne 11-08-06 04:39 PM

This was feedback posted for troublesome06
 
Intro : i was feeling zone out's intro



Beat :troublesome had a nicer one,tho to me this beat dosent fit a battle zone out's beat fitted a battle...but troublesome gets this cos compared to zone outs i was feeling it a lil more


Flows : troublesome got this again,he was confident on he beat,steady flow!..zone out was steady too but kinna fell off here and there...


Punches / Emotion : (iight listening to both for the second time)...zone out gets this,he had more wordplays i was actually feeling..tho he wasnt FULLY on point with the emotion,but compared to troublesomehe was more convincing...more hard with is words which actually helped him more with the punches...troublesome had more personals than punches...and the punches he had werent as hard as zone out's...and troublesome's emotion was more like he was making a normal track,kinna laid back,he dosent seem hard/convincing the way he spitting his words...


Quality / Delivery : troublesome got this,yeah he had a better quality and mixed his vocals better..and he had some effects plus them hi's(which were almost too high)...zone out idk ur mic is just on a lower stand compared to troublesomes...zone didnt have any effects and quality was slacking...your voice was louder than the beat!

Outro : zone out had a nice closer...i liked it,got me nodding


....so ummm from all that ^^^

Troublesome got 3


Zone Out got 3


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