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keep it up homeboy

thanks fr the replies uppen for some more

this is a pretty good piece I have enjoyed reading and I always like your stuff and things you post dis proves your talent truly does rule.


hit my shit up on open mics dawg and return da favor.


peace out

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uppen for some more feedback

I enjoyed This Ish......It wuz Dope....Coo Readin.....>I'm New hurr...and i;m looking foward to mo of ur Pieces of art,,

thanks

not complex, but easy on the eyes lol......u use'd some nice wordage in this peice....good vocab....and a good not great flow...good work kid

good for a key.. some parts fell off but most of it was strong, good fluent flow, some nice creative lines, not many down points.. keep em coming stay elevating.. 1

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