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*stamps legendary on this thread*
and I go to nominate this... I think... I'm lazy though I'll do it later... |
Another gr8 piece. U jus keepin addin gr8 stuff.
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Yo Pen you always come wit some tight hit an this one i can really relate to dawg......keep yo shit up an hit me up whenever you throw down new shit!
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haha pencil neck nigga thats classic... anyways dam penskills this was above average even for you! keep it up :thumbup: |
This was kind of nice. Normally, a piece of these proportions / boundaries wouldn't please me, you know. But, the dialogue between characters set off a bit of an internal chuckle. It wasn't exactly technically sound, but you made up for it with your storytelling abilities. . Vocabulary could be more complex, which goes the same for the rest of the literary devices. The flow was pretty nice. It was worth reading, & introduced me to somebody I'd never read of. Keep writing, man.
Quality P.S. I'm the owner of a certain topical league that could use some new talent - AIM: RalphsBagels, if you are at all interested. |
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