Ok.. i will be sure to check for one of your pieces so you can show me how a "good
flow" is suppose to look like... Ill be sure to be honest like you were

lmao... why are you gettin all defensive..? but you can either peep... uh... Stephanie's kiss... or... Gone... well excerpt from it...

I Aint Defensive... I Just Dont See It The Way You Do... But I Respect Your Opinion
Though... & I Replied To Stephanie...

By The Way.. This Wasn't Meant To Be A Full Song.. It Was Only Suppose To Be A
Test Piece That Was Keyed..

What The Fuck

*punches you in the stomach* Shut up dummy..!

Lol

hey ladys dont get in a slappin contest, it woz a good piece but verbal got his oppinion and evolve got his. make peace my brothers. (lol)

We have... Evo ban this man...

woh woh i woz only jokin hence the lol att the end, shit ill back off, no need to ban me. sorry!!!!

naw man I was jokin... Evo can't ban people... he's a lowly forum moderator... nothing special... it's ok...















































Rich has warts... & this is a dope way to freepost..!

Ummmm... Must I Remind You That I Am Now & Have Been For Some Time.. A

SUPER MOD.. & To Be Honest Av... I Might Ban You For Not Being My Yes Man

--[Flow]---
Liked your scheme you had goin on here...you had alot of dope internals throughout the piece..you kept a level of consistancy about it, experimented in your rhymes and it pulled off..some dope shit!

--[Vocab]--
Vocab was above average, liked the way you didn't over-use or but also you didn't under-use it...you had some good terms that really fitted into the flow and topic, looked like you thought about what to use before your put it in..just didn't put stuff in there to rhyme or make it look impressive..props.

--[Concept]--
Outragous topic, you really filled the bars with some real gritty emotion and some real feelin's...it didn't appear to be superficial, came out real and sincere. Original[ish] topic, kept on point and really came through:
"Unknowingly, The Part I've Played Was Fake..
Apparently I Thought I Never Made a Mistake..
Cause That Would Mean I Was Able To Break..
So I Write My Life Through The Fables I Make.."

--[Overall]--
Very few pieces like this actually come through on Open Mic, you have some real ability and it showed...4/5, was one of the best pieces i've read in a while (with the exception of Dev and Such)...was of a high quality...good read. :thumbup:

That was nice. It had a bad ass rhyme scheme and flowed amazingly well. Good job Evolve. It's good to see that you're still dropping dope rhymes. Keep em comin bro

pz

Whoa... Domain 9.. Where the hell you been kid?

damn! tht was ill..
u defo had som good imagry ther...consitantly flowd
and guud wordpl;ay...and vocan wasnt bad
but overall tht was trully and definatly ill