Thank you all and thank you to Archival for nominating it as Best Open Mic of the month....I appreciate all your words.......^^Uppin^^....peace

i read this previously but didn't get a chance to say what i felt because i was at school, now i can tell you that everyone else has already said what i would have..it was dope, and you deserved all the good feedback you recieved..i'll look out for you

(and on another note, me and you will have to keep battling to keep Penskills in Legends, i know you feel the same!)

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good piece i liked how ya took a common thing and twisted it. I would really like to see how you deliver it in an audio

first drop i've seen of yours
pretty good
the flow was the standout for me in this..
it just read so smoothly...not many pieces on here that do that
the topic was a bit played...and the hacking wrists and shooting yourself
thats my only major complaint really..could have improved with originality
but the story itself was interesting and the verse held my interest thruout
easy reading piece
improved as it went on too..
props

very dope piece right here. i felt it for real. straight up nice. i think i started
seeing flowers. haha. yeah. excellent expression. its one of those stories that
they make movies out of. kinda cool. love the flow and the imagery. very
deep. im pretty sure it ain't true tho, seeing as how you're still alive. lol. no matter.
still dope. keep at it man.

hit this up in return plz.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111616

pz

its been a played topic....but u wrote it diff and thats
always a good thing.....the word choice/vocab could
have been better but overall this was a good peice...
flow was on key for the majority of the verse
but flow can always be improved, the structure
always be improved, check out diverses peice
"photographs...." and u see some sick struture there
the chorus was ehh/// could have been better
lyricaly wise but it was also an impact on the overall
story.
... drop smore.

^^Uppin thanks for the 2 votes on OM of the month for this piece!!^^

^^Uppin Once Again^^

^^Hello anyone out there?^^

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