ok fair comment. no need to post twice tho. na'mean?

^^^^that was ment for shadows edge...................

yo kingz did you put the vote on mine because the scores the same....................................

yeah i know.. not sure what happened there ... sorry bout that

dont matter dawg its gone up now............................................... ...........................

no worries. uppin..................................

uppin............................... come on ya'll dont sleep on this

threatz - nice verse, structure was consistant. you had a nice personal in ur opener, the opener has to go to you.

You coulden't be a King, if you played 4 Sacramento

but i think this is the line that one it for kingz

‘Death Threat’?…if you received one…we know you will give in
Your life aint worth a ‘film’…the only ‘trailer’ you got you live in

it made me laugh. it was a very good meta

kingz also had a nice multi too

U couldn’t ‘pose’ threatz ‘taking pictures’ with terrorists
Dog desist…if ya were admitted to hospital u still wudnt be on tha ‘sick list’

again this showed quality

my vote go's to kingz

simple but effective

uppin............................................. ......

uppin diz

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118632

yo, this was closer than what yall cats are sayin, the shit was evened out. Ok, on punches, i give this to threatz, on personals, tie, on metaphors, funny shit that made sense, i give it to kingz, and the rest basically goes to threatz in ma opion, though i like kingz jackson line.
v/threatz

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uppin diz.. letz get some more votez

not very good from the both of you kingz you had good rhymes i especially liked that Micheal jackson spit but you still could have stuck it to him alot harder overall a good battle tho.
overall not bad but both of you could use a tuneup on syllables even so my vote goes to Kingz i liked his spit and they gave me a good laugh good job both of you

Kingz takes this one one his flow was better and his lyrics were funny this was a good battle for the both of u but u both need a tuneup on how to use syllables good job but u both can do better
Kingz- u had good flow and ur ryhmes were funny but u could have brought more to the tablegood lyrics though
Threatz-your spit was tight but i really didnt get the point that u were trying to get across but good battle.

vote king
he came harder
threats u had some wack shit
threatz work on vocab personals and multis
king work on personals
good battle i d like 2 c a rematch