threatz to spit first
10-12 lines
no crew no hate
no feedin no d/r
due as soon as poss

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checkin in

You coulden't be a King, if you played 4 Sacramento
couldent spit flamez if you had a torch in ya dental
so if you think your hot.. check your A/C
pick it up a notch.. then step to face me
I bring Major Pain, but i ain't talkin bout a movie
i'm talkin bout a stain on your T from my Uzzi
leave ya brains on tha passanga seat of ya whoopti
I shake MC's.. spit fire an burn'em like blank CD's
you couldent be hard if you was a tit
i win, so Game Over nigga like that song 4rm Lil Flip

Whenever your ready 2 drop yo verse, N you better not bust a no-show

mayn you got till tommorow my nigga, i ain't gonna be havin all dis waitin cuz your takin yo tyme type of shyt

well if you checked you would realise i werent online wen u dropped

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Dog why u challenging me…you ain’t even a ‘threat’
I aint gonna stop…im’a ‘keep it comin’ like ‘keith sweat’

‘Death Threat’?…if you received one…we know you will give in
Your life aint worth a ‘film’…the only ‘trailer’ you got you live in

U couldn’t ‘pose’ threatz ‘taking pictures’ with terrorists
Dog desist…if ya were admitted to hospital u still wudnt be on tha ‘sick list’

this pussy a gangster?…ha….forget the ‘guns’ he claims to hold,
like Michael Jackson…he is touching a ‘nine’ but…that’s a nine year old

the reason you only wrote ten lines…is cos of ya small vocabulary
the only votes you ‘cop’…are from ya local ‘constabulary’

so to beat ya son..i don’t even need a good finishing line
when it comes to it…the voters are gonna go past you like a ‘street sign’

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weak spit but im rele busy at the moment uppin....................

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uppinn............................................

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This Was A Fairly Tied' Battle Verse' .. NO Doubt But Im Going To Have To Go With KingZ On This Shit' Because His Punches Hit Harder .. He Had The Better Flow - With Consistant WordPlay' - Not Much But Enough To Get My Vote' ...

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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Haha.. pulling for votes. Whatever, I give this one to threatz. King's rhymes were stretched out, pretty bad flow. Also, anything with MJ is just tired by this time.. try some new stuff. threatz's punches weren't much better.. same thing throughout basically, but at least the flow is pretty decent and consistent.

Haha.. Whatever, I give this one to threatz. King's rhymes were stretched out, pretty bad flow. Also, anything with MJ is just tired by this time.. try some new stuff. threatz's punches weren't much better.. same thing throughout basically, but at least the flow is pretty decent and consistent.

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