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Shifty Fingers: Well first off I was very impressed with these couple lines... "its like a refined lunch-time, the way you cower, and i devour youre salty-bunched-rhymes, cause on this DEVINE-HOUR, my multi's-crunch-spines unlike the COMBINED-POWER, of youre faulty-punch-lines/" The Flow here was incredible in my opinion. The punches really werent there in your flow but the vocab and the way your rhyme flowed definately was. To me you fell off at the end, Closing should've been a lot better to match with your earlier bars.
Tay G Sincity: Yo man... on the real this flow has it all to me... The Opening was good, text under spacebar line. Closing was good. Your one of the first rappers on here that Ive seen that had some nice punches and your flow was precise as well. One of the best battle verses I have voted on yet. Good Job Homie. Big Up. No Need for no explanation fam, the verse did it. Vote: Tay G Sincity http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124224 (Please vote on the battle I participated in, Just click on this link and vote like I did for ya'll.... Thank You) |
just uppin this shit..............................
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Yo, 2 people dat voted for me forget to clickk on da poll... Can ya'll handle dat for me? Thanx...
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Heres A Warning Dont Come Against Tay Newbies Dont Come Against Him
Tay Won Dis Cuz Of Hard Punches And Flowz Damn Anotha Murder On Da Board/ Yo Tay Liked Yo Struture Shifty U Had Good Punches But U Need To Hit Hard/ Next Time Homie And Work On Yo Flowz Vote=tay |
This Waz A Weak Battle 4 Both Of You, Shifty's Verse Waz Kinda Good But Only In Blows And He Aloso Didn't Have Enough Of That (Too Weak) Tay's Verse Waz Equally Da Same 2 Shifty's But Shifty Had Better Blows Even Thought It Waz Wack Both Of You Need 2 Work Harder Next Time You Have A Battle RATINGZ Opener-Shifty Flow-Shifty (Both Were 2 Ugly And Terrible) Blows-Shifty (Both Were Also Ugly And Terrible) Lyricism-This One Goes 2 Nobody Finisher-This One Goes 2 Nobody Da Winner Iz...Shifty Seriously, Both Of You Need 2 Learn 2 Wryte And None Of ` Or ' Or " None Of That Shit It Gets Confusin, And Wryte In Bars Not In Paragraphz |
Can You Look At That?, I Don't Even Have 20 Postes Yet But I'll Return Later When I Have Enough, Alright |
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LMAO @ this vote and explaination!! Can u believe this shit Shifty? |
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