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uppin.............^^^^^^^^^^^^^^and Picture stop you fuckin whinning....*sobbing*"will someone explain to me how he had punchlines"*sniffle sniffle*
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picture perfect your verse was much better. you had a nice flow but could had been better. you only had one or two nice punches, but you didn't need muchto kill this cat.ori you didn't come hard enough. you personals were aight but where were your punches?return the fava
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Yo Im gonna have to give this one to Ori. He had more effective punches as compared to P.P. who had too much complexity that it made shyt confusing. Ori was straight to the point and came stronger wit it. You didnt have to read into his lines like you had to with P.P.
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hate towards dub syxxx, are u retarded? u are a failure, to complex, shits called wordplay, do me a favor and dont vote on any of my other battles untill u understand ummm.... anything worth knowing. hey quit havin your newbie dick riders that know shit votin on this pleeze cuz neither of us have upped this battle in hours, so its obvious u pm'd 'em. read sig""
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Dude you cry more than any muffuka I ever heard..anyone who voites against you..you get all teary eyed n shit. Just cuz they dontn think you as Dope as you think you are man this shitz an art take some constructive criticizm.Damn
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u already voted so quit free postin. uppin
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flow: picture punches: picture Rhymes: picture punches: picture.. yo come on Ori u need 2 rhyme go to da rhyme forum thingy it teaches u what need 2 rhyme cause some of ya lines didnt even rhyme at all iight ~1~ u bof need 2 elevate good luck on ya otha battle ni99az |
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