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M&rk 05-18-04 02:00 AM

uuuppinn

..::Ori::.. 05-18-04 11:06 AM

uppin.............^^^^^^^^^^^^^^and Picture stop you fuckin whinning....*sobbing*"will someone explain to me how he had punchlines"*sniffle sniffle*

LyricalMethod 05-18-04 11:42 AM

picture perfect your verse was much better. you had a nice flow but could had been better. you only had one or two nice punches, but you didn't need muchto kill this cat.ori you didn't come hard enough. you personals were aight but where were your punches?return the fava

vote=p.p.

dub syxxx 05-18-04 06:54 PM

Yo Im gonna have to give this one to Ori. He had more effective punches as compared to P.P. who had too much complexity that it made shyt confusing. Ori was straight to the point and came stronger wit it. You didnt have to read into his lines like you had to with P.P.

Overall. VOTE=ORI

1ne

M&rk 05-18-04 07:53 PM

hate towards dub syxxx, are u retarded? u are a failure, to complex, shits called wordplay, do me a favor and dont vote on any of my other battles untill u understand ummm.... anything worth knowing. hey quit havin your newbie dick riders that know shit votin on this pleeze cuz neither of us have upped this battle in hours, so its obvious u pm'd 'em. read sig""

dub syxxx 05-18-04 09:18 PM

Dude you cry more than any muffuka I ever heard..anyone who voites against you..you get all teary eyed n shit. Just cuz they dontn think you as Dope as you think you are man this shitz an art take some constructive criticizm.Damn

M&rk 05-19-04 06:28 PM

u already voted so quit free postin. uppin

40CaliberHitz 05-19-04 11:03 PM

Quote:
PICTURE PERFECT2

BEST LINE:damn, ya name for this thread, cut and paste for the first time
fuckin fag,effectin the st8est like quier eye for the str8 guy

positively dead, fags hiv'd, case closed likier than a *fin on a fish*
nice possition i put this bitch in, in that avatar, jus another pictureperfect *finish*//

WORST LINE:im the lakers as i be embarrisinly finishing this story
cats be askin if im kobe and was that robert ori(losin to old team,jus a lil bit ago)


NICE HOMIE I LIKED YO PUNCHES// BUT HIT HARD NEXT TIME//


ORI

BEST LINE:ayo, Ori aint picture perfect, Ima Perfect Picture/
Like nomo signed for millions, Ima Perfect Pitcher

WORST LINE:Ori's wheaties for breakfast, you cream corn and crackerz/
Girlz talkin 0n how u Packin vienna sausages/
same bitch is stalkin me cuz one fuck fix they postures/
its a good year cuz i stay huggin these streetz/
perfects peddlin powerwheels still sittin in a car seat/
I catch no sleep, like half O's Of Yo/
These lines just keep comin, like nine lines ago/ DIS SOME WEAK SHIT//

OVERALL:PicturePerFect


I agree..........Took the wordz out my mouth!

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-19-04 11:33 PM

perfect....
flow: picture
punches: picture
Rhymes: picture
punches: picture..

yo come on Ori u need 2 rhyme go to da rhyme forum thingy it teaches u what need 2 rhyme cause some of ya lines didnt even rhyme at all iight ~1~ u bof need 2 elevate good luck on ya otha battle ni99az


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