10 lines
blind spit
due tonight
check in and start keyin B

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check check, check check, check, uh uh check. check

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In the end there can be only 1ne.

Ori of ELMNTz

theres some yellow there brush off ya shoulder
straight rackitin his ass as he gets served over

cat be askin me, are u be stabbin me?
only reason u (so ill), be coughin up blood after battlin me

im the lakers as i be embarrisinly finishing this story
cats be askin if im kobe and was that robert ori(losin to old team,jus a lil bit ago)

damn, ya name for this thread, cut and paste for the first time
fuckin fag,effectin the st8est like quier eye for the str8 guy

positively dead, fags hiv'd, case closed likier than a *fin on a fish*
nice possition i put this bitch in, in that avatar, jus another pictureperfect *finish*

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ite B, get yo's up, 10 lines tonight homes, blind spit, dont feed off mine.

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iiite, look.....

ayo, Ori aint picture perfect, Ima Perfect Picture/
Like nomo signed for millions, Ima Perfect Pitcher/
I throw them shut outs n U just beanin batterz/
Ori's wheaties for breakfast, you cream corn and crackerz/
Girlz talkin 0n how u Packin vienna sausages/
same bitch is stalkin me cuz one fuck fix they postures/
its a good year cuz i stay huggin these streetz/
perfects peddlin powerwheels still sittin in a car seat/
I catch no sleep, like half O's Of Yo/
These lines just keep comin, like nine lines ago/

Ori of ELMNTz... Rabid Flock...

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In the end there can be only 1ne.

Ori of ELMNTz

......................uppin^^^^^^................. ........

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In the end there can be only 1ne.

Ori of ELMNTz

picture-nice stuff....Some was weak......
structure was nice so was the similies
to much complexity......othing I can really else is is just to elevate

ori-alot of weak stuff.....structure was nice
similies was alright....metas nah...Good with
the structure balance.....but everything else
was nah.....work on alot of things and keep elevatin

v/picture Return the favor = http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124404

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upppin

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Yo, I'ma vote on this but after I hope you two can vote on mine
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124669
Da Vinci VS Hood General,

Alright first off this was a pretty even battle not saying it was overly hot but still nice. Pictureperfect I've seen you drop way harder punches, these one's seemed a little underdevloped (not complete) they lacked the punch. Ori your punches weren't as creative as PP's but they flowed a bit better and they were consistent. Because this battle is about punches I'ma give it to Ori cause his punches came harder.

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ayo, next person who votes please do best and worst lines, cuz they make the most sence and i dont see any punches in his verse, so it'll make votes for me more obvious.

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theres some yellow there brush off ya shoulder
straight rackitin his ass as he gets served over
- wasn't really feel'n this second line helped a bit

cat be askin me, are u be stabbin me?
only reason u (so ill), be coughin up blood after battlin me
-Again this is an okay punch not overly creative

im the lakers as i be embarrisinly finishing this story
cats be askin if im kobe and was that robert ori(losin to old team,jus a lil bit ago)
-This one I didn't like at all it was wordy without a punch

damn, ya name for this thread, cut and paste for the first time
fuckin fag,effectin the st8est like quier eye for the str8 guy
-First line didn't make sense to me, second was a weak punch

positively dead, fags hiv'd, case closed likier than a *fin on a fish*
nice possition i put this bitch in, in that avatar, jus another pictureperfect *finish*
-this was a nice finish try and make them all like this next time


ayo, Ori aint picture perfect, Ima Perfect Picture/
Like nomo signed for millions, Ima Perfect Pitcher/
-The first line was good the second was alright

I throw them shut outs n U just beanin batterz/
Ori's wheaties for breakfast, you cream corn and crackerz/
-This is a average punch origional but not to developed

Girlz talkin 0n how u Packin vienna sausages/
same bitch is stalkin me cuz one fuck fix they postures/
-This was alright second line was weak

its a good year cuz i stay huggin these streetz/
perfects peddlin powerwheels still sittin in a car seat/
Nice punch, creative too

I catch no sleep, like half O's Of Yo/
These lines just keep comin, like nine lines ago/
First line was nice, second was kinda lacked a punch

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uuupin

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Good battle. Not really much of a contest doe. My vote goes to Ori for havin mre creative punches. Picture, you got da flow dawg, jus get more complex widcha punches and ya shit will be coo. Congrats to whoever wins...

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?p=1339209#post1339209

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uppin.....................................^^^^^^^^ ^^^^

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In the end there can be only 1ne.

Ori of ELMNTz

uppin.... and voters tell when how his punches are creative or even punches for that matter, i aint gettin it. uppin

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