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Both of those are staright ass with no chase. I aint even gonna vote
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i just read your battle with spokenbluntly and your verse was weak as fuck, what are you talkin about...you got murked
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Damn, no contest... Logice took this in every single category from punches to flow, multis, everythang. No contest... Bounce backk and keep pushin CROZ!
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yo it was close but i sthink beyond hit harder without question
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it was an alright battle, it was close in all aspects, but logic had better shit. dacroz had no multies or wordplay..kinda boring
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uppin need 2 more votes
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uppin
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vote on this
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I write my flows original, you just findin lyrics that r fuckin stolen/
tryin to rap like fifty, but bitin other peoples shit like Michael Bolton/ spittin so much fire got you walkin wit a black colon// Call up DRE, but the doc cant help ya/ my blows fucked up ya system got ya lookin like Helta Skelta/ This is Croz's best part I think... Decent punches nice flow...the way the structure showed up looks fucked up but it looks worse than it really is.. all in all not too bad. You're Tongue Couldn't Tear Shit Up If You SPOUT-CLAWS/ 5 I RE-ROUTE-JAWS, I'd Rap Like You But I Ain't ABOUT-FLAWS/ 6 Come MEET-YA-GOD And I'll BEAT-YA-SQUAD/ 7- This was when I was sayin oh no, Beyond Logic bout rip this kid in 3 pieces and scatter him across my monitor...but then You used Jaws again in the next punchline...And the next bar flowed nicely but the punch didn't make sense to me, "Sheets with Saws" and "Free without a Pause"- Dont connect any wordplay for me, I dont see the punch or the meta if its there and I dont see it, Im sorry.. The last line though was a nice punch...All in all decent verse... Ima vote for BeyondLogic on this one, because I think you took it by a hair and a half....tight battle...1 |
uppin for votes
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uppin come on finish this thing off
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If Ya Raps Were Sugar Coated They Still Wouldn't Be SWEET-TO-JAWS/ 8
Leave Ya Neck Wrapped In SHEETS-WITH-SAWS Maybe That's The Reason Ya Can't FREE-WITH-OUT-THE-PAUSE/ 9 Attemptin To 'Suck Up This Beef' Is Like Tryin To Drink MEAT-THROUGH-STRAWS/ Nice Logic Had Better Punches Multis Dacroz Had Better Structrue But has To Improve On Punches Vote=Logic Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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