10 lines
first to 5 votes wins
thats basically it

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aight im checkin in

yea me too check in

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its showtime


I write my flows original, you just findin lyrics that r fuckin stolen/
tryin to rap like fifty, but bitin other peoples shit like Michael Bolton/spittin so much fire got you walkin wit a black colon//
Call up DRE, but the doc cant help ya/
my blows fucked up ya system got ya lookin like Helta Skelta/
Logic, u wanna bang wit da best then y you flashin a nigga at rest(icon)/
i put ya to sleep 6 feet deep, cuz ur shit just cant hack it/
put ur dead body right on top of puns cuz i kno how u like it u Fuckin Faggot/
Get da Fuck off my website and hit up backdoe dot com/
take a picture of yoself bendin over and post it next to Lil John/
rappin dis text shit, cuz u dont got da ballz to get in my face and beef/
I spread ya legs like a pussy bitch, lookin like Dave Chapelles teef/

AMAZIN-MEN, You Couldn't Write A Hot Verse If You Were Holdin BLAZIN-PENS/ 1
PHASIN-CROZ, Like Preachers Out Drinkin I Got Ya PRAISIN-MY-BARS/ 2
Bullets GRAZIN This LAME Leavin Ya SCARED/ 3
You Couldn't Take Ya GAME To Another Level If Ya Spelled Ya NAME-IN-THE-STARS/ 4

You're Tongue Couldn't Tear Shit Up If You SPOUT-CLAWS/ 5
I RE-ROUTE-JAWS, I'd Rap Like You But I Ain't ABOUT-FLAWS/ 6
Come MEET-YA-GOD And I'll BEAT-YA-SQUAD/ 7
If Ya Raps Were Sugar Coated They Still Wouldn't Be SWEET-TO-JAWS/ 8
Leave Ya Neck Wrapped In SHEETS-WITH-SAWS Maybe That's The Reason Ya Can't FREE-WITH-OUT-THE-PAUSE/ 9
Attemptin To 'Suck Up This Beef' Is Like Tryin To Drink MEAT-THROUGH-STRAWS/ 10

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If Ya Raps Were Sugar Coated They Still Wouldn't Be SWEET-TO-JAWS/ 8
Leave Ya Neck Wrapped In SHEETS-WITH-SAWS Maybe That's The Reason Ya Can't FREE-WITH-OUT-THE-PAUSE/ 9
Attemptin To 'Suck Up This Beef' Is Like Tryin To Drink MEAT-THROUGH-STRAWS/ 10

Hot battle without A Question! Both emcees brought flames to the table but Beyond cameoff the hardest! The battle could have went anyway but "Beyond" took this battle!

Vote:Beyond

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yo this was a very good battle.

DaCROZofHB structure: 8/10
rhymes: 7/10
creativeness: 7/10

Beyond Logic structure: 7/10
rhymes: 7/10
creativness: 7/10
DaCROZofHB takes this one by a hair

please vote on my shit http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125321
help me finish this bitch off.. yo man Jacket

Bth of ya shit was tight ass hell, but i have to go with my man dacrozofhb.

rappin dis text shit, cuz u dont got da ballz to get in my face and beef/
I spread ya legs like a pussy bitch, lookin like Dave Chapelles teef/

Thats the bar that set it off!!!!

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Adroit(ko)
Dalyricalvillain(5-4)
LyRiKaL19(Ko)
blackmon(ko)
Eclapt(DQ)

this is why i set the post limit up cause of the newbs, still 1-0 uppin

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thats fuckin gay dawg, i beat ur shit u didnt hit hard enough im up 2-1

uppin.......


get ur posts up and vote since logics a lil bitch

shut the fuck up you know you're bat. look at the cats who voted. you had no multis, no word play nothin

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Aight. DaCroz Had A Better Flow, But Logic Came Wit Mad Punches And Some Nice Multi's.

Best Line:

PHASIN-CROZ, Like Preachers Out Drinkin I Got Ya PRAISIN-MY-BARS/


Overall, I Felt Like Logic's Verse Hit Harder.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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DAAAAAAAMN this was a close battle....

heres the breakdown

croz-i love dis niggas punches, but u stretched a couple lines a little too far, and ur structure was just alright....

logic-crazy ass metaphors, got me thinkin, your flow was tight

this was a fuckin close battle yall, both came hard as fuck, but im gonna have to go with......

vote-logic

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