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lol wow
mixxed brah had a average verse all ya punchs where about average none of em really stands out structure was pretty good but none of ya punchs or personals was really strong just work on that an try gettin creative or usin wordplay in ya verses might help out ya punchs a lil bit brah l.i bout a lil above average verse mulites aint really much when ya punchs arent to good said u didnt try an it showed ya barely brought enough to beat him that randy moss line was prolyl the best punch i seen in the whole battle vote l.i |
And i Used That Randy Moss Line Be 4 thaz fucked up it was when i was on Reg. Mixxed MC i said sunttin like this niggaz a loser chouldint Catch a Win if he was Randy Moss
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^ and how many other people have probably used that before....i used it to fit in with my multi's.....one more vote UP.
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PRetty Weak
V/L.I - he cam harder with better punched Mixed MC punchline`s were pretty weak Yo u should watch yo self cause im comein behind yo back... U juss a Weak Vet thatz knows he's acctually Wack... Defined wackness . . ^^ L.I was decent/below average I dont think he really tryed but he came better with punches & used personals like you did not really u just said he was a weak vet. |
decent battle...mixxed mc i think u came better than i usually see you...prolly cuz u battlin a vet average punches from you good wordplay and multies structure was a lil off it was kinda cosistent and it flowed pretty good...if u use more punches and personald you would be a hott emcee now i picture you as above average but use harder stuff and youll get more wins
overall: 6/10 L.I obviously you came weaker than usual in this battle...you had a good verse tho...nice punches multies were off tha chain good wordplay structure was decent flow was good...and very consistent i dont think i need to give you tips but good verse overall:7/10 vote : L.I he had the better verse due to harder punches a plyed line but it didnt affect his verse much cuz it was good mixxed yours was good too but not as good as L.I's..so my vote is to him ~!1!~ can someone drop a vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126194 |
too bad someone blacklisted me and i cant poll it o well not my problem
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one more fucking vote......................up..............
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uppp.........come on and fucking vote!!...................
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lol.... I can't vote (crew) - but i think it's funny how the votes actually 6-0, with two DQ's who aren't even crew votes. lol....
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v/ LI.
More creative.. some fresh concepts too.. personals were generally used to good effect.. a tad stretched on some lines.. an your opener was kinda weak.. but you picked up an stayed consistant thereafter.. MC.. structure was bad.. 5 stand alone punches killed any chance of a flow.. punches were ineffective cos they coulda been for anyone.. `Jay-Z` line was worst.. minimal personals too. Vote: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121685 |
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