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L.I. 5 100.00%
Mixxed MC 24 0 0%
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Old 05-22-04, 11:33 PM   #1
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Mixxed MC 24 vs L.I.

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Battle Rulez

No Crew Votes
No Hate Votes
No Dick Rideing Votes

Check in Then Verse Due By 12:45

If u dont Spit By Verse Due Dq'ed

Check in then we Both Keyin at da Same Time
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Old 05-22-04, 11:36 PM   #2
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yo verses due 20 minutes after check in....aint no hour to write 10 lines.......
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Old 05-22-04, 11:37 PM   #3
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Aiight So 10 is max rite w/e Checkin in By da way 1
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Old 05-22-04, 11:39 PM   #4
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yeah 10 lines max 10 lines min....checked in....verses due in 20 min....g'luck...
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Old 05-22-04, 11:45 PM   #5
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Yo u should watch yo self cause im comein behind yo back...
U juss a Weak Vet thatz knows he's acctually Wack...

My rhymes Flyin off da top like crazy...
ya linez is stretched thick like Jay-z... his lips Thick realli big

yo im gonna kill this fake ass Trick...
when ma rhyme in-flick u wit aids then u'll be Sick...

so Get yo ass back when u can rip a newbie...
this niggaz ass if he had Polution he still couldint Polut Me...

im cool about it,u aint sikk,but u still talkin shit...
juss quit,u aint rich,ma rhymez will leave u wit 22 stichs, now u can go n get ya MM BITCHS...

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Old 05-22-04, 11:46 PM   #6
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Thats what i need is good luck lol cause i kno im not gonna beat u
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Old 05-22-04, 11:49 PM   #7
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ayo mixxed my bad for freepostin but i wont be on tonight make our battle verse due tomorrow sometime ~!1!~
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Old 05-22-04, 11:49 PM   #8
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Corection Read this 1 not ^^^
its the same shit i juss spelt it wronge


Yo u should watch yo self cause im comein behind yo back...
U juss a Weak Vet that knows he's acctually Wack...

Yo My rhymes Flyin off da top like crazy...
ya linez is stretched thick like Jay-z... his lips Thick realli big

yo im gonna kill this fake ass Trick...
when ma rhyme in-flick u wit aids then u'll be Sick...

so Get yo ass back when u can rip a newbie...
this niggaz ass if he had Polution he still couldint Polut Me...

im cool about it,u aint sikk,but u still talkin shit...
juss quit,u aint rich,ma rhymez will leave u wit 22 stichs, now u can go n get ya MM BITCHS...

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Old 05-23-04, 12:01 AM   #9
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my verse

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okay did lots of multis....fooled around with this battle....should be enough.....

Mixxed MC’s a wack name to be given, my lines sure make Mixxed emotions given…
Your ambition obviously aint driven, and will be harder to complete in critical condition..
Killin you wit my sick multi style, this is all I need for a win bein plain yet vile…
Like Lloyd banks makin the voters smile, Battlin this herb was worth my while…
Look at his verse already admitted a loss, why’d you bother than with confidence toss’d...
Cant run shit here cause dog im the boss, Couldn’t catch a win from me if u were randy moss…
Enough of your talking just leave, The loss you receive…
For you nothings achieved, Truth is told now im relieved…
Face the facts and just quit, cause your rhymes are just shit…
Your lines need to be tough hits, and they just don’t cut it…
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Old 05-23-04, 08:25 AM   #10
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Old 05-23-04, 09:37 AM   #11
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Yo u should watch yo self cause im comein behind yo back...
U juss a Weak Vet thatz knows he's acctually Wack...
5...not strong and the rhymin was too basic.
My rhymes Flyin off da top like crazy...
ya linez is stretched thick like Jay-z... his lips Thick realli big
6...better than the opener but still pretty weak!!
yo im gonna kill this fake ass Trick...
when ma rhyme in-flick u wit aids then u'll be Sick...
5...weak again, u gotta seriously improve ure punches!!
so Get yo ass back when u can rip a newbie...
this niggaz ass if he had Polution he still couldint Polut Me...
6...average punch!!
im cool about it,u aint sikk,but u still talkin shit...
juss quit,u aint rich,ma rhymez will leave u wit 22 stichs, now u can go n get
6...a nice multi but overall weak closer!!

Mixxed MC’s a wack name to be given, my lines sure make Mixxed emotions given…
Your ambition obviously aint driven, and will be harder to complete in critical condition..
7...nice multi and a pretty gud punch, but u can do better L.I.
Killin you wit my sick multi style, this is all I need for a win bein plain yet vile…
Like Lloyd banks makin the voters smile, Battlin this herb was worth my while…
7...gud multi again and a nice punch!!
Look at his verse already admitted a loss, why’d you bother than with confidence toss’d...
Cant run shit here cause dog im the boss, Couldn’t catch a win from me if u were randy moss…
7...punches are consistent but low standard for a sick vet!!
Enough of your talking just leave, The loss you receive…
For you nothings achieved, Truth is told now im relieved…
6...pretty weak line considering ure skill.
Face the facts and just quit, cause your rhymes are just shit…
Your lines need to be tough hits, and they just don’t cut it…
6...weak closer, but i guess u didnt really try against this guy.

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Mixxed MC - 28/50
L.I. - 33/50

V/ - L.I.
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Old 05-23-04, 10:34 AM   #12
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l.i. you get my vote obviously. better verse, punches and multiples. step up your lyrics though. keep it hott though. step up double time thoguh b/c your verse wasn't real tight. all in all better verse. mixxed mc step up your verse sucked ass dude.

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Old 05-23-04, 11:55 AM   #13
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thanks uppin........i didnt try on this battle.......
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Old 05-23-04, 12:59 PM   #14
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LI wins because his verse had punches... Mixxed you gotta elevate... work on wordplay and the such. Don't do 20 minutes battles... try to get some nice concepts in mind for wordplay and creative flipped punches.

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Old 05-23-04, 12:59 PM   #15
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... err hit back my battle against lil-trip... shit's getting mad slept on.
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