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iight wutever solo, i dont give a fuck, and marv, i clicked on the link and it said it was invalid
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aight my explanation will be a lil shorter than the rest. asswhoopin i liked how u put it to the ether beat cause i was listenin to that before i opened up this battle. its good u had a lota personals specially bout him ridin nsights dick(but now they hate each other). i liked the multi u used down at the bottom ur flow and strucutre was good specially cause it fit that beat.
solo ur punches were weaker so were ur persoanls.i dont kno it didnt sound like a raw verse to me but the persoanls were nice i liked them. strucutre anf dlow were ok needed some work on this battle i seen ur other battles its usually more complex. this was a close battle real close. v/gotaasswhoopin return the favor hit up these 2 battles aight no hate thanks pc http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130036 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130033 |
how many times i gotta say this
my verse was purposely not complex, i made it basic to fit the punchline at the end of the verse......can i get sum none retarded fools in this battle to vote....u know sum ppl who actually understand a punch!!!! UPPIN................................. |
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gotta: you did good...hotter than i thought u would come good punches and decent personals...rhymes scheme was good...i understand u went off of the ether beat but this is text so it dont look right and that fucked up your structure...some lines were weak but most of them was good...decent verse
overall : 7/10 king solo: your first couple bars werent too hott but then u opened up and spit some fire....closer was funny as hell and the bar before the closer was pretty good too.....flow was consistent.....structure was perfect...decent rhyme scheme....hardly saw any meta's between either verse...but good drop overall : 7.5/10 vote: K.S ~!1!~ plz RTF http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130033 |
lol king ripped him no question
gotta u had so many stretched lines king solo ahahha thanx 4 clearin his verse up i wouldve believed da personals nice drop bestline-I’m a size this bitch up and beat his ass in a flash… Ain’t gotta say shit, he already admits he’s trash… nice worsteline-none way 2 kill mang gotta bestline-picture gotta losin to solo, no image of course// he thinks hes the shyt cuz he runs wit the best on this board// okk worsteline-ull never spit the illest/ and u kno u cant win this// so take off the crown for i shoot it off ya melon/ and jus before finish// talk about rap not about gunz and shootin winner-king solo |
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