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checkin in...................

i'll spit later cuz it's like nearly 4:00am over here
and i need some fuckin SLEEP!!

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checkin in

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*/=multi lines, //=actual lines
if u have the nas - ether instrumental,,recite the vers wit it...i used this beat while rhymin because in that song nas said that jay was rifin bigs dick, and solo is ridin nsights dick


picture gotta losin to solo, no image of course//
he thinks hes the shyt cuz he runs wit the best on this board//

fuck praisin him, give him the 21 gun salute//
his name is solo, but hes always lookin to join local crews//

u on legendary status, but no one mentions u/
ur skills is like ur avatar nigga, 1 dimensional//
u think if u leave, anybody will remember u/
yea i guess u aint notice cuz u was hangin on nsights testicles//

get over it, the dude left, might i mention//
that writin the rules like that is the only way ull be the center of attention//

uve been in denial, u kno the fuckin truth//
that lyrikal destruktion was destructed cause of u//


ull never spit the illest/ and u kno u cant win this//
so take off the crown for i shoot it off ya melon/
and jus before finish//

might i add//
that all ur fuckin threads are jus, "i love nsight ads"//

nsight this nsight that, all u do is bitch and whine//
and dont forget about the time/
that when u battled jpoll, ur breath reeked of other ppls lines//

solo i can finish here,cuz ur ass is fuckin toast/
now ur mouth should and threads should be identical, both of em closed!!!//
i got about 18, so what sue me

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before i drop i'd like to point out two things to this dumb fuck...............

1. How was I ridin N-Sight's dick dumbass, I was hatin on him u retarded fuck!!
and...........
2. In my battle with JPoll it was him who was caught biting that's why he edited his verse u fuckin ass!!

now that i've got that out of the way...............
here's my drop...................

I’m a size this bitch up and beat his ass in a flash…
Ain’t gotta say shit, he already admits he’s trash…
Lookin at ure avatar, I thought I’d seen u before…
Shit I’m in there to, I’m sorry for breakin ure jaw…
Listen up u bitch cuz I’ve got-a-ass-whoopin-4-u…
Stop looking downstairs, ain’t no dick suckin 4 u…
Not only dick suckin this bitch likes to study ass…*
Tryin to drop hot shit but keeps on blowing gas…
Tie me up and blindfold me, u still cudn’t get the kill…
When this line alone just fuckin defines all ure skill…
13 years old man is ure ass even allowed on this site…
I’ll beat u so bad u’ll be leavin faster than N-Sight…
Batter u with my lyrics leavin u black and bruised…

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Originally Posted by gotaasswhoopin4U ?????????????

I just spit a basic verse and ure still looking all confused…

* check his profile

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picture gotta losin to solo, no image of course//
he thinks hes the shyt cuz he runs wit the best on this board//
no punch..more like a compliment
fuck praisin him, give him the 21 gun salute//
his name is solo, but hes always lookin to join local crews//
ok....nothing here really
u on legendary status, but no one mentions u/
ur skills is like ur avatar nigga, 1 dimensional//
u think if u leave, anybody will remember u/
yea i guess u aint notice cuz u was hangin on nsights testicles//
ok...here's an alright personal
get over it, the dude left, might i mention//
that writin the rules like that is the only way ull be the center of attention//
ok....
uve been in denial, u kno the fuckin truth//
that lyrikal destruktion was destructed cause of u//
ok......the truth is the crew was going no where and people in that
crew were gettin caught for biting and makin it look wack...

ull never spit the illest/ and u kno u cant win this//
so take off the crown for i shoot it off ya melon/
and jus before finish//
aight
might i add//
that all ur fuckin threads are jus, "i love nsight ads"//
ha ha
nsight this nsight that, all u do is bitch and whine//
and dont forget about the time/
that when u battled jpoll, ur breath reeked of other ppls lines//
ok....other way around kid...
solo i can finish here,cuz ur ass is fuckin toast/
now ur mouth should and threads should be identical, both of em closed!!!//
ok....

i think you didnt really come hard...a lot of played personals and
you didnt really have any sick punches but overall

6.5/10

King Solo

I’m a size this bitch up and beat his ass in a flash…
Ain’t gotta say shit, he already admits he’s trash…
ha ha first nice personal of the battle here.....
Lookin at ure avatar, I thought I’d seen u before…
Shit I’m in there to, I’m sorry for breakin ure jaw…
ha ha....aight aight
Listen up u bitch cuz I’ve got-a-ass-whoopin-4-u…
Stop looking downstairs, ain’t no dick suckin 4 u…
again...nice
Not only dick suckin this bitch likes to study ass…*
Tryin to drop hot shit but keeps on blowing gas…
ha ha...good punch
Tie me up and blindfold me, u still cudn’t get the kill…
When this line alone just fuckin defines all ure skill…
another nice punch
13 years old man is ure ass even allowed on this site…
I’ll beat u so bad u’ll be leavin faster than N-Sight…
ha ha.....but will he come back? ha ha
Batter u with my lyrics leavin u black and bruised…
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Originally Posted by gotaasswhoopin4U
?????????????

I just spit a basic verse and ure still looking all confused…
nice closer
aight you stayed consistent through your verse and had some
nice punches and personals...basically you took this no contest

overall:8/10

vote:King Solo

drop an honest one on this

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129783

lol^...u got here first. Ill drop my vote anyways.[FONT]

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Originally Posted by gotaasswhoopin4U picture gotta losin to solo, no image of course// he thinks hes the shyt cuz he runs wit the best on this board// Could of had nice wordplay with the image line. But like DeLeon said, its not really a diss fuck praisin him, give him the 21 gun salute// his name is solo, but hes always lookin to join local crews// Nice play off his name and works as a personal u on legendary status, but no one mentions u/ ur skills is like ur avatar nigga, 1 dimensional// was ok u think if u leave, anybody will remember u/ yea i guess u aint notice cuz u was hangin on nsights testicles// Personal. Good. get over it, the dude left, might i mention// that writin the rules like that is the only way ull be the center of attention// Again this word play could have been worded better but I still got it and liked it. Not very strong tho uve been in denial, u kno the fuckin truth// that lyrikal destruktion was destructed cause of u// .....ok..basic ull never spit the illest/ and u kno u cant win this// so take off the crown for i shoot it off ya melon/ and jus before finish// wack might i add// that all ur fuckin threads are jus, "i love nsight ads"// wack nsight this nsight that, all u do is bitch and whine// and dont forget about the time/ that when u battled jpoll, ur breath reeked of other ppls lines// Personal. But is it true? Use a link in future. solo i can finish here,cuz ur ass is fuckin toast/ now ur mouth should and threads should be identical, both of em closed!!!// Needed re wording but nice closer but not very strong.[B]

{FONT=Tahoma]I would say this had a couple of good personals and wordplay with potential but it wasnt a very strong verse. I would give it about 5/10.





Overall this was basic. I mean you seemed to of tried with personals and playing off his name etc but it didnt do much. It wasnt very strong. No lines really stood out for me and I just think u cud of done alot better.

V=gotta ass.....

king solow has got my vote on this because his shit was well thought of in creativity and hit more harder punches all the way through when reading it. He had really nice vocab and word play and used some nice multies 2 it. The other verse wasn't as good and not as creative as king.
vote-king

ps king, Please can you drop me a pm on teaching me how to rhyme perfectly like you. Well done on dis battle. Peace

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I'm The Best On This Site My Battle Record Says It All

Harold u dumb shit..................
obviously u don't know the meaning of a punch

read the last line, it says..............
I just spit a basic verse and ure still looking all confused…
^^^that is why i made my verse pretty basic

cuz that punchline with the ?????? quote works with the entire verse

and ass used 2 fake personals against me so it is beyond me how u can vote for me
but u voted for him and i can't change it

keep the votes comin.........................

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and ass used 2 fake personals against me so it is beyond me how u can vote for *me*

that shit shud say him........My Bad!!

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Gottaasswhoppin4u's drop

picture gotta losin to solo, no image of course//
he thinks hes the shyt cuz he runs wit the best on this board//
NOPE NOT A GOOD OPENER TO START THIS OFF 6.5/10
fuck praisin him, give him the 21 gun salute//
his name is solo, but hes always lookin to join local crews//
OK THIS WAS AIGHT FELT THE PUNCH A LIL 7/10
u on legendary status, but no one mentions u/
ur skills is like ur avatar nigga, 1 dimensional//
BLAH NOPE NOT FEELING AGAIN NOT A VERY GOOD PUNCH 6/10
u think if u leave, anybody will remember u/
yea i guess u aint notice cuz u was hangin on nsights testicles//
N SIGHT'S TESTICLES HAHA SOLO HATES HIM MUAHAHAHHA 5/10
get over it, the dude left, might i mention//
that writin the rules like that is the only way ull be the center of attention//
N SIGHT AIN'T LEAVE FALSE FACT AND NOT A GOOD PUNCH 6/10
uve been in denial, u kno the fuckin truth//
that lyrikal destruktion was destructed cause of u//
NOT LIKING AT ALL BAR COUNT AIGHT BUT NOT OVERALL GOOD PUNCH 6.5/10
ull never spit the illest/ and u kno u cant win this//
so take off the crown for i shoot it off ya melon/
and jus before finish//
OK NOPE NOT LIKING ONCE AGAIN SORRY BUT ITS TRU 5/10
might i add//
that all ur fuckin threads are jus, "i love nsight ads"//
BAR COUNT WAY OFF, PUNCH FALSE (ONCE AGAIN SOLO HATES THATBOY!!!!!!) 3/10
nsight this nsight that, all u do is bitch and whine//
and dont forget about the time/
that when u battled jpoll, ur breath reeked of other ppls lines//
UMM HOW COULD IT REEK YOU STALK HIM OR WHAT 5/10
solo i can finish here,cuz ur ass is fuckin toast/
now ur mouth should and threads should be identical, both of em closed!!!//
OKAY THING TO END THIS 7.5/10

OVERALL ALL 6.5/10 (GAVE A LIL EXTRA CUZ FLOW WAS AIGHT)

King Solo's Drop:

I’m a size this bitch up and beat his ass in a flash…
Ain’t gotta say shit, he already admits he’s trash…
HAHA FUNNY SHIT NICE OPENER SOLO 8.5/10
Lookin at ure avatar, I thought I’d seen u before…
Shit I’m in there to, I’m sorry for breakin ure jaw…
NICE NICE NICE AGAIN YOU START OFF GOOD BARELY FALLS OFF 8/10
Listen up u bitch cuz I’ve got-a-ass-whoopin-4-u…
Stop looking downstairs, ain’t no dick suckin 4 u…
GOOD WORDPLAY & SHIT NOT ILL BUT GOOD 7.5/10
Not only dick suckin this bitch likes to study ass…*
Tryin to drop hot shit but keeps on blowing gas…
HAHA YA FUNNY AGAIN LIKING THIS 8/10
Tie me up and blindfold me, u still cudn’t get the kill…
When this line alone just fuckin defines all ure skill…
NICE NOT YOUR BEST IN THE DROP BUT GOOD 7/10
13 years old man is ure ass even allowed on this site…
I’ll beat u so bad u’ll be leavin faster than N-Sight…
ARE YOU PRESIDENT OF THE I HATE N-SIGHT FAN CLUB IF SO CAN I JOIN LOL!!!!! 7.5/10
Batter u with my lyrics leavin u black and bruised…
I just spit a basic verse and ure still looking all confused…
BASIC KNEW IT FROM THE START BUT STILL GOOD OF COURSE 7.5/10

OVERALL: 8.5/10 (LIL EXTRA FOR REALLY GOOD FLOW)

VOTE GOES TO: KING SOLO

do a honest vote on my shit the links in the sig prefer you dropping a vote
on the PLOTT one aight thanks!!!

~I'm Out~

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its seems some of yall dont understand the verse...ill break it down, show why the personals are true, and ill tell u wtf im talkin bout

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t125798
^^^^there go da link 2 my battle...so ya'll can return da favor after i vote dis shit

okay first of all its 2 much talkin in dis post if niggaz dont vote 4 u get ova it

opener-king got it dat was a personal and it do he's trash unda his name
structure-king his shit look neat and ass y u gotta seperate ya multi's datz retarded
punchlines-ass
creativity-a tie
multis-ass he was tryin madd hard lol
personals-king...he came with links dunn datz enuff
enjoyed-king of course...ass u lose points 4 not bein original nahmean u aint have do no nas shit u could of did u i aint feel dat

my vote-king....pleez retunr da favor ya'll...GON

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

ass man are u retarded or sumthin

that JPoll line is a fake personal dumbass
i'm only gonna explain this one more time

shadow said that sumone was biting, he never specified who
but later on he dropped the line that had been bitten and it was from JPoll's verse

that is why JPoll edited his verse to change it u dumb fuck!!!

anywayz.................UPPIN 4 MORE VOTES!!

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