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-   -   HORUS(thetruth) vs Virt (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=130841)

.VenoM. 06-21-04 07:52 PM

and that pic in ur sig is fucked up haha......return the favor the both of ya...

Ca'lam 06-21-04 07:58 PM

first off,, dont come in here sayin shit disrespectful to me, cause i dont give a shit \if you were eminem id still say fuck you... got it ? and second off, my vote stays the same.. they were both hott verses, i just like shit that i can actually bob my head to, and not have to read a fuckign book... now as far as that sylable shit, dont diss our votes cause you got different taste, ignant mufucka...... *shakes head*... fuckin to newbie to life

cookie 06-21-04 08:56 PM

Yea, the last vote was very discrimnatory against people who he doesn't even know. He judges they're cred on how long they have been on this particular site, which is ignorant.
i would give an honest vote, but i don't have enough posts yet.

YuNG TiLT 06-21-04 09:02 PM

I'm a newbie BUT i have experience on other sites, virt had a much better structure and his shceme could've been better but it was better than Horus's.
BUT
Horus had more word play and the line wit his raps are empty, u shoulda put that gravity verse right after it, but it was still good.
But In The End
Virt had a better finisher and opener and that's wat saved him
good battle all through though
Vote=Virt

Miss. Lyricist 06-21-04 09:16 PM

It's NOOB, not NEWB. A noob is someone new to a forum, organization, or activity. A newb is someone who freeposts and acts like they know it all, and try to attract attention themselves by being assholes.

cookie 06-21-04 09:35 PM

Well i don't see what ya'll see at all, i see Horus spitting far more creative punchlines and attacking his opponent like he should. he destroys this kid with wordplay, fuck closers and openers, this is a freestyle.

The other kid was okay but what can I say, Horus dominated that. if you can't see that, then I don't know what else to say.

For$akeN 06-21-04 09:49 PM

horus: ok not feeling your drop much punches were really lacking........
your syllable count was way off, flow wasn't on point vocab wasn't there
opener was very weak closer wasn't good...................

overall: 5/10

virt: ok that was nice drop were you trying?????????lmao......okay
you murdered him with your opener &you barely fell off on the verse
vocab was pretty good, flow was very good, syllable count was nice,
punches were nice

overall:7.5/10

vote goes to: virt

Sire 06-21-04 09:56 PM

this battle was decent.... I was starting to get discouraged at the lack of quality here.... HORUD you had some nice punches, structure was a nightmare, but def had the better verse here. Had some decent punches, just fix it up so the rhymes hit at the end of the line instead of having multiple lines together separated by slashes, that shit is ugly. as far as content goes, you swept this no problem. Virt you have a decent structure and approach but need to get off your simpson's trip dog. You really had no hard hitters, your attempts at punches were all comparisons Example:

like u wearin munchkin socks
like malfunctioned clocks
like empty vending Machines
like the ring movie spoof

played.....

vote - HORUD for coming less wack.


yall hit this up
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130866

Bigtank 06-21-04 10:27 PM

Horus took him, all he has to do is work on his Flow, he has the best punches on here, and is back to back with them.

Virt was whack, he wasn't even speaking english, who was he talking to?
i don't like his style, it wouldn't sound right audio.

I gotta go with Horus, he is better than Virt and the dudes that voted against him, i've read ya'll rhymes.

Bigtank 06-21-04 10:34 PM

So like I said man, this goes to Horus

HORUS(thetruth) 06-21-04 10:42 PM

Why isn't Sire's Vote up, it should be 4-5 with me having more votes.

LiL HoPPa 06-21-04 11:18 PM

uh ohhhhh, my vote is for tha winner... and i gotta just put it out there like it, vert won....

structure:vert
Vocab:both
Rhyme:both

idk, they was pretty close, but, i think other man stretched his shit a lil bit.
and tha otehr boi went way over tha 20 line limit. so virt got my vote./ peace.
Return tha favor on tha battle in my sig against Whitey313


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