10-20 lines
house rules
verse due in 20

i wonder if this dude will show...

this is my no show veres

this fool no showed comeing to no surprize
but i seen his fear doted in his eyes

i'm writing now, you said 20 min. loser. write, stop copping out.

he disrespected rap, now he gotta be injured/
i'll snuff Virt, like the white dude in the post that he got in his picture/
and i see your style kid, you been weak/ i feel bad battling a child that's only 15/
a fuckin undeveloped whack MC, who raps are empty/
what makes him think that he can rap with me/ bitch you couldn't hold it down if you were gravity/ acually i utterly
damage fakes/ when i spit heat against his "watered down" flow, his rhymes evaporate/ ya'll must of needed me to try em/
but his flows won't fool me, like girl scout cookies, i won't buy em/
x marks the spot, your plain as the paper that your writin on/
your flow belongs in the house, like the computer that i'm typin on/
he holds micrphones only when he's dreaming that it's a Penis/
your gayness, and if rap was revelation, i'm Jesus/
watch him come with some worthless shit/ some astronomical, far out, and earthless shit/ but i give my lyrics cough syrup, shit, my words are sick/ and i'll cut your "flow" off like a motha fuckin tourniquet/ you verbless bitch, i'll smoke you like a dub sac/
and like Tupac, i don't really think that you can "come back"/ i'll commit to whipping you and stick to it like a thumb tac/
ya'll got dumb raps, believe it or not i wanna get dissed/ you see, he's trying to cop out ya'll, he doesn't even have nothin to spit/
but as for me, i expell lyrics until my lips gone/
they got me battling weaklings, i'm "pissed off", so now virt gets "PISSED ON"/
i'm waiting for your philisophical rhyme, you complex word play that can some how eclipse my phenominal shine/ but really i'll make you eat your heart and swallow your pride/ you'll get pealed on sight/ i'll kill u, and if you reincarnate i'll kill you twice/
coz when i rap i stick out like my abdominal/ but go ahead and rhyme, include your whack punchlines, and edgar allen metaphores, just try and make it less comical/
coz winning is highly inprobable, like seeing snow in the tropicals, bioooootch!/

ok ima drop in 10....

ay, i will hit this battle when u guys done, if u guys hit my battle between smokey in my sig. Ill return tha favor.

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ok that was a nice boring verse bitin has hell too....but im not gona sweat that yet...


get a fair portion cuz you shortstepped like u wearin munchkin socks
punch you and u comin back four seconds like malfunctioned clocks
Me and you meet like Lenny and Carl and we all see this clown's a sideshow
So it's no big feat for virt to figure out the irony in gettin' served by Moe
you killed befor your first line and I don't mean he good wit rap ya see?
Endin ya schemes, and you outta Juice like empty vending Machines
horus raps good? your outa the well like the ring movie spoof
and when i said you suck it wasn't skill it was (THETRUTH)
Seeming mushy when I win, “horus too Ill” is a common Statement
And I’d have to step down to your level cuz nigga you mod the basement
Your disses too weak you could never hit me in hard bunches
Cuz I knew you left your multies blank but how'd you use unmarked punches


bring the votes

wow, i thought that you'd be better than that......

birt.. seeing i cant see ur text record, and i dont know where ur battles are, i hear ur a vet.. horus had a flow that ill in that verse.. virt you didnt really come at him hard, i mean you had a few good metas in there, but it seemed like you tried to spit jsut enuff to win, and underesitmated i guess.. cause i thought u were holding back ont hat verse...
Horus:
watch him come with some worthless shit/ some astronomical, far out, and earthless shit/ but i give my lyrics cough syrup, shit, my words are sick/ and i'll cut your "flow" off like a motha fuckin tourniquet/ you verbless bitch, i'll smoke you like a dub sac/
and like Tupac, i don't really think that you can "come back"/ i'll commit to whipping you and stick to it like a thumb tac/
^^ was feelin that

Virt:
get a fair portion cuz you shortstepped like u wearin munchkin socks
punch you and u comin back four seconds like malfunctioned clocks
^^^ yea hehe.. that munchkin sock part was nice

my vote goes to horus to due his nice flow and he had more punches in there i guess...

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

DAMN! LMAO!!!

Really, Virt... I expected more from you.

God, the truth-
damage fakes/ when i spit heat against his "watered down" flow, his rhymes evaporate/ ya'll must of needed me to try em/
but his flows won't fool me, like girl scout cookies, i won't buy em/
***Do you really have to hit that hard? I mean, c'mon, you don't want to hurt dis dude.
but as for me, i expell lyrics until my lips gone/
they got me battling weaklings, i'm "pissed off", so now virt gets "PISSED ON"/
*** Piss is like acid...
....And I can't include everything I liked, because then I would have to choose the whole verse. But that was some TIGHT shit man. "snow in the tropicals" LMAO

*cough* Virt-
Endin ya schemes, and you outta Juice like empty vending Machines
***That was pretty good

Horus *snickers* took this hands down: better punches, word play, vocab, and everything that I forgot to mention.

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Posted by Miss. Lyricist:
"Do you really have to hit that hard? I mean, c'mon, you don't want to hurt dis dude."

lol @ Miss.Lyricist

wassup wit the votes ya'll? i might just get a knock out on my first battle. lol

here is the breack down...

get a fair portion cuz you shortstepped like u wearin munchkin socks
punch you and u comin back four seconds like malfunctioned clocks
Good opener....8/10
Me and you meet like Lenny and Carl and we all see this clown's a sideshow
So it's no big feat for virt to figure out the irony in gettin' served by Moe
that line was ok but not much of a punch...5/10
you killed befor your first line and I don't mean he good wit rap ya see?
Endin ya schemes, and you outta Juice like empty vending Machines
ok word play but not worded right but it had potential....6/10
horus raps good? your outa the well like the ring movie spoof
and when i said you suck it wasn't skill it was (THETRUTH)
that was a tight personal the first line was ok but the second was ill...8/10
Seeming mushy when I win, “horus too Ill” is a common Statement
And I’d have to step down to your level cuz nigga you mod the basement
that was ill too your verse is picking up speed now...8/10
Your disses too weak you could never hit me in hard bunches
Cuz I knew you left your multies blank but how'd you use unmarked punches
it was ok probly had a meaning to it...3/10

over all he gets a 7/10


This was a long verse and hard to read at times....and it breaks the rules....
20 lines not 26 lines but lets do some judging

he disrespected rap, now he gotta be injured/
i'll snuff Virt, like the white dude in the post that he got in his picture/
it was a personal but had no punch...5/10
and i see your style kid, you been weak/ i feel bad battling a child that's only 15/
a fuckin undeveloped whack MC, who raps are empty/
what makes him think that he can rap with me/ bitch you couldn't hold it down if you were gravity/ acually i utterly
the flow on this one was fucked...but the punch was good.....7/10
damage fakes/ when i spit heat against his "watered down" flow, his rhymes evaporate/ ya'll must of needed me to try em/
but his flows won't fool me, like girl scout cookies, i won't buy em/
not a fan of three line bars...5/10
x marks the spot, your plain as the paper that your writin on/
your flow belongs in the house, like the computer that i'm typin on/
good punch....6/10
he holds micrphones only when he's dreaming that it's a Penis/
your gayness, and if rap was revelation, i'm Jesus/
don't know were your going with this line?....3/10
watch him come with some worthless shit/ some astronomical, far out, and earthless shit/ but i give my lyrics cough syrup, shit, my words are sick/
another three line bar but wat kills it is the rhyme of shit shit and sick...4/10
and i'll cut your "flow" off like a motha fuckin tourniquet/ you verbless bitch, i'll smoke you like a dub sac/
and like Tupac, i don't really think that you can "come back"/ i'll commit to whipping you and stick to it like a thumb tac/
im not feeling these lines but there ok....6/10
ya'll got dumb raps, believe it or not i wanna get dissed/ you see, he's trying to cop out ya'll, he doesn't even have nothin to spit/
ill...5/10
but as for me, i expell lyrics until my lips gone/
they got me battling weaklings, i'm "pissed off", so now virt gets "PISSED ON"/
ill punch...8/10
i'm waiting for your philisophical rhyme, you complex word play that can some how eclipse my phenominal shine/ but really i'll make you eat your heart and swallow your pride/ you'll get pealed on sight/ i'll kill u, and if you reincarnate i'll kill you twice/
Im lost here were is your rhyme schem?...3/10
coz when i rap i stick out like my abdominal/
but go ahead and rhyme, include your whack punchlines, and edgar allen metaphores, just try and make it less comical/
this was an ok line nothing special...5/10
coz winning is highly inprobable, like seeing snow in the tropicals, bioooootch!/
that was a gay closer...4/10

the score is 6/10

Flow:virt
structure:virt
punches:horus
personals:horus
opener:virt
closer:virt

vote-virt