uppin bring the votes thank you.....

daclassic~ i really enjoyed ya shit your vocab was aight your punches was good structure was pretty good word play was good multis were their flow was on lock i think u coulda come a lil harder but u came hard enough to beat shadow this time overall i think u had a overall good verse that about wraps it up for you...


shadow's edge~ u did good to i think u did tha same in everything except punches in my opinon daclassic got you their your structure was good same wit multis word play was aight flow was on lock but i expected u to come alot harder but maybe it was because u just woke up like u said but overall u was tha same as daclassic i just was feelin him more your vocab wasnt very good but big up's this was bad for you and betta than half these cats here....


punches daclassic
flow both
vocab both
multis both
humor shadow
word play both
enjoyed both
overall vote daclassic

Removed.. no line by line analysis

:( fraid im going to have those votes discounted daclassic. your rules, and what not. lifes ironic, eh?

?very confused you afraid? uppin

Up.

Seriously. Half the fucking site is either in BP or AI.

DC:

By far this dude is butt, Soft, A fragile pussy, He gushy, Is he hard? I think he nuts
This shadow's edge aint even coming close to creating damage close to a papercut
-structure was off, but punch was understood...opener:6/10
Can we stop the fakers, Ghostwriters are profit takers, From shadow, A bread breaker
He's Another daclassic hater, A shadow that follows my motions, A fuckin imitator
-nice punch, good personal...wordplay was good
A vet-vet-veteran, Damn I'm stut-ter-in', A vet please! He a vet on animals of a disease
With ease, I be getting so hot, I'll walk right through this fucker to take a breeze
-haha, my favorite line...great punch with great comedy
The way I'm tellin' it, humiliating this faggot for rappin in front of an audience
Your life is irrelevent, Never a leader, You behind others with a simulated intelligence
-haha, another comedy line, good punch, nice vocab
Always you on my ass or which ever one of my sides, I see depression in your eyes
Wishing to duck and hide, In the land of Urbana, Where the rest of these herbs reside
-nice structure, good meta, nice wordplay....closure: 8/10

Comments:you had stretched lines, but you had great punches, great style...i was a actually laughing during some of your lines, comedy is always good, you had great wordplay and you had original vocab, nice verse...opener was decent but closure was good.....//.....8.7/10


Shadow:

Long time in the making? Best savor these moments
No wait…
its just dc’s acne that had a breakout performance
-nice opener, but ance is just an asumption. great structure....opener:7/10
It’s sad really, herbs on this site ever respected you
Kid would be fucking wack… but even that rejected you
-good punch, lacked vocab or word play
We both know, I’m straight better battle wise
Called yourself DC, but I’ll be the one to capitalize
-good good, punch was also understood, still needs word play
My punches explosive, this stupid fucks ill fated
Cuz daclassic Blue up… n thought he’d elevated
-cussing brings this line down, newbs cuss not vets
no surprise you stressed, fucking with the best
I commit Cardinal sins, way I Pujoles in your chest
-nice meta, aight wordplay....closure:6/10

Comments:you had great stucture throught the whole verse, but you lacked word play which brought down your creativity points, you had many landed punches, i didnt see any filler really, opener was good, closure was decent.....//......8.3/10


vote: DaClassic

Look Me Up And Drop A Vote

is it only one vote wins, cuz im voting dc but the poll is showing the records, and theres no way to poll vote my self, so tell strobe

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=133785&page=1

hit that up or i will kill u :thumbup:

dc

By far this dude is butt, Soft, A fragile pussy, He gushy, Is he hard? I think he nuts
This shadow's edge aint even coming close to creating damage close to a papercut
HAD MULTIES FLOW WAS CHOPPY PUNCH WAS PRETTY AVERAGE... DECENT BARS

Can we stop the fakers, Ghostwriters are profit takers, From shadow, A bread breaker
He's Another daclassic hater, A shadow that follows my motions, A fuckin imitator
STOP WITH THE COMAS FIRST LINE WASNTWORDED RIGHT SOUNDED FORCED 2ND LINE PRETTY NICE WORDPLAY DECENT PUNCH

A vet-vet-veteran, Damn I'm stut-ter-in', A vet please! He a vet on animals of a disease
With ease, I be getting so hot, I'll walk right through this fucker to take a breeze
NICE BARS RIGHT HERE TIGHT WORDPLAY IN THE 2nd LINE TIGHT PUNCH HERE

The way I'm tellin' it, humiliating this faggot for rappin in front of an audience
Your life is irrelevent, Never a leader, You behind others with a simulated intelligence
NICE BARS AGAIN DONT THINK PEOPLE GONNA CATCH THE PUNCH '"BEHIND OTHERS" AN HIS NAME SHADOWS EDGE DONT KNOW IF U REALIZED THAT BUT SHIT WAS NICE AN PUNCH WAS GOOD

Always you on my ass or which ever one of my sides, I see depression in your eyes
Wishing to duck and hide, In the land of Urbana, Where the rest of these herbs reside
NICE FIRST LINE GOOD WORDPLAY OFF HIS NAME PUNCH WAS PRETTY NICE I CAUGHT IT NICE BARS AGAIN HERE

OVERALL- NICE VERSE HAD A BUNCH OF PERSONALS NICE WORDPLAY IN A BUNCH OF LINES HAD MULTIES YADA YADA YADA THINK YA VERSE GOT BETTER AS IT WENT ON MADE UP FOR THE SOFT PUNCHS IN THE BEGINNING TIGHT VERSE AN GOOD USUAGE OFF HIS NAME

SE
Long time in the making? Best savor these moments
No wait…
its just dc’s acne that had a breakout performance
KINDA FUNNY BUT DIDNT THINK THE PUNCH HIT TO HARD

It’s sad really, herbs on this site ever respected you
Kid would be fucking wack… but even that rejected you
NICE BARS HERE GOOD PUNCH AN DECENT PERSONAL

We both know, I’m straight better battle wise
Called yourself DC, but I’ll be the one to capitalize
FIRST LINE HALF GLORIFICATION DECENT SET UP NICE WORDPLAY IN 2ND LINE PUNCH WAS PRETTY AVERAGE NOT THAT HARD HITTIN TO ME

My punches explosive, this stupid fucks ill fated
Cuz daclassic Blue up… n thought he’d elevated
AGAIN HALF GLORIFICATION IN 1ST LINE DECENT WORDPLAY IN 2ND LINE DIDNT FEAL THE PUNCH AGAIN ON THESE LINES

no surprise you stressed, fucking with the best
I commit Cardinal sins, way I Pujoles in your chest
DAMN SHADOW AGAIN GLORIFICATION MOST I SEEN IN YOUR VERSES BUT THE 2ND LINE WAS ILL WOW REAL SICK SHIT NICE WORDPLAY PRETTY NICE PUNCH BUT KILLED IT WITH THE WORDPLAY ON THAT SHIT

OVERALL-HAD SOME PERSONALS AS WELL NICE WORDPLAY TO THAT PUJOLES LINE WAS DOPE HAD BETTER RHYME SCHEME AND FLOW I THOUGHT PUNCHS WHERE AROUND AVERAGE THINK U PUT TO MUCH GLORIFICATION IN THE VERSE NICE STRUCTURE THOUGH

VOTE DACLASSIC

THOUGHT HE HAD BETTER PUNCHS AN CONSTENT PERSONALS IF U CATCH EM GOOD BATTLE BY BOTH

uppin............................................. ..........

uppin yo can we get some damn votes please ...lol

Hmm... Nice battle... DaClassic... Way to go, i was feeling the verse, flow had something about it... Cant say it was bad, just, wierd... Nice lines, you had some personals, but would have been nice if there was more... Shadow, nice, good flow, also could have used more personals... Even as shit... I give it to Shadow because he had an awesome closer...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137958
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Hit that up...

I'm bout to say fuck this battle and everything else...people don't vote...this is like the 6th vote tooken away from me....then not only that shadows edge is up 2 to 1 when he got one vote overall. what the fuck.....if so ....why he got an extra vote?
uppin...line by line analysis which means give feed back on each bar....thanks I guess I shouldn't have put the rules like that...

Yo... I didnt even read the voting rules... My bad... But i did read the battle... My vote is how it should be...

an my vote didnt get returned damnit