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no feeding
if you can't vote don't post comments
no fake personals
if they are fake they will be proven
no d/r
no hate/v
no crew/v
no recycling

overall detailed voting only....

this is not acceptable
opener X
multi X
punches X
personals X
Closer X
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line by line analysis voting only

Due on Thursday

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Blue Print

B.P.

lol... let's see what you got.

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lol...you should already know rookie....i remembered when you first got here.

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Blue Print

B.P.

my verse is ready... drop whenever and i'll follow unless im at work.

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well drop it.....

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Blue Print

B.P.

do you really need 2 days to look at it? we drop at the same time, so as to prevent feeding.

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it's due tommorrow...which I told you before...I havent even started yet...and besides there is no feeding...read the rules...I been busy with a lot of other shit...kid.

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Blue Print

B.P.

Since want to be a shadow or some sort so bad
I going treat him like he really is a fucking shadow
so pay attention to the lines

By far this dude is butt, Soft, A fragile pussy, He gushy, Is he hard? I think he nuts
This shadow's edge aint even coming close to creating damage close to a papercut
Can we stop the fakers, Ghostwriters are profit takers, From shadow, A bread breaker
He's Another daclassic hater, A shadow that follows my motions, A fuckin imitator
A vet-vet-veteran, Damn I'm stut-ter-in', A vet please! He a vet on animals of a disease
With ease, I be getting so hot, I'll walk right through this fucker to take a breeze
The way I'm tellin' it, humiliating this faggot for rappin in front of an audience
Your life is irrelevent, Never a leader, You behind others with a simulated intelligence
Always you on my ass or which ever one of my sides, I see depression in your eyes
Wishing to duck and hide, In the land of Urbana, Where the rest of these herbs reside

Now you happy......I went first now....now go edit your damn verse....

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Blue Print

B.P.

lol just woke up. now stop swaying and using gay quotes.

[font=tahoma]Long time in the making? Best savor these moments
No wait…
its just dc’s acne that had a breakout performance
It’s sad really, herbs on this site ever respected you
Kid would be fucking wack… but even that rejected you
We both know, I’m straight better battle wise
Called yourself DC, but I’ll be the one to capitalize
My punches explosive, this stupid fucks ill fated
Cuz daclassic Blue up… n thought he’d elevated
no surprise you stressed, fucking with the best
I commit Cardinal sins, way I Pujoles in your chest
[/quote]



yeah, i remember when people thought you were good.

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eh... whoops. still tired... fucked up tags.

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^wow *speechless*.. why you guys making this so hard lol..this was close as iv seen so far..


daclassic:
By far this dude is butt, Soft, A fragile pussy, He gushy, Is he hard? I think he nuts
This shadow's edge aint even coming close to creating damage close to a papercut
^nice punch, but the flow was choppy..7/10
Can we stop the fakers, Ghostwriters are profit takers, From shadow, A bread breaker
He's Another daclassic hater, A shadow that follows my motions, A fuckin imitator
^nice 8/10
A vet-vet-veteran, Damn I'm stut-ter-in', A vet please! He a vet on animals of a disease
With ease, I be getting so hot, I'll walk right through this fucker to take a breeze
^most people wouldnt catch that line.. took a second to see it.. nice play on his name.. that was good 9/10
The way I'm tellin' it, humiliating this faggot for rappin in front of an audience
Your life is irrelevent, Never a leader, You behind others with a simulated intelligence
^nice vocab..i saw this as decent.. 7.5/10
Always you on my ass or which ever one of my sides, I see depression in your eyes
Wishing to duck and hide, In the land of Urbana, Where the rest of these herbs reside
^ok.. wasent that strong of a closer tho..6/10
^^if my mathisnt wrong, it was 37.5/50(75%)

shadows edge:
Long time in the making? Best savor these moments
No wait…
its just dc’s acne that had a breakout performance
^good flow..not sure i understood that tho..has he posted his pic with acne or something ? 7/10
It’s sad really, herbs on this site ever respected you
Kid would be fucking wack… but even that rejected you
^that was hot.. nice flow, nice punch lol 9/10
We both know, I’m straight better battle wise
Called yourself DC, but I’ll be the one to capitalize
^nice play on his name.. 7.5/10
My punches explosive, this stupid fucks ill fated
Cuz daclassic Blue up… n thought he’d elevated
^aight play on his squad Blue Print.. 7/10
no surprise you stressed, fucking with the best
I commit Cardinal sins, way I Pujoles in your chest
^nice word play lol.. 7/10
^^well fuck me.... 37.5/50(75%)..

my vote comes down to the enjoument of the verse.. im a flow man.. if the verse doesent flow as well as i might have expected it to, then i might flow against it.. flow is pretty much a must in verses.. Daclassic your flow was decent, but shadow had a pretty nice flow in his verse..

Much respect to you both of you.. and like heavy d "got nothin but love for ya babeh".. lol
no hate.
v/Shadows edge

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Uppin...and for you'll info really read my punches so you'll can understand them......and Urban means Herbana if you'll didn't get it....it's where he's from in his profile....take the time and read my verse shit.....uppin...let the votes come in.

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Blue Print

B.P.

vote, drop links, you know the deal.

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Long time in the making? Best savor these moments
No wait…
its just dc’s acne that had a breakout performance
It’s sad really, herbs on this site ever respected you
Kid would be fucking wack… but even that rejected you
We both know, I’m straight better battle wise
Called yourself DC, but I’ll be the one to capitalize
My punches explosive, this stupid fucks ill fated
Cuz daclassic Blue up… n thought he’d elevated
no surprise you stressed, fucking with the best
I commit Cardinal sins, way I Pujoles in your chest

first off the hole shit was simple as hell and should not be a verse. second punches was weak as hell and personals...damn they suck... stop trying... i see y you retired.


By far this dude is butt, Soft, A fragile pussy, He gushy, Is he hard? I think he nuts
This shadow's edge aint even coming close to creating damage close to a papercut
Can we stop the fakers, Ghostwriters are profit takers, From shadow, A bread breaker
He's Another daclassic hater, A shadow that follows my motions, A fuckin imitator
A vet-vet-veteran, Damn I'm stut-ter-in', A vet please! He a vet on animals of a disease
With ease, I be getting so hot, I'll walk right through this fucker to take a breeze
The way I'm tellin' it, humiliating this faggot for rappin in front of an audience
Your life is irrelevent, Never a leader, You behind others with a simulated intelligence
Always you on my ass or which ever one of my sides, I see depression in your eyes
Wishing to duck and hide, In the land of Urbana, Where the rest of these herbs reside

i don't no about anyone else but i liked it nice flow (though style was bad{i recommand puting .'s or /'s after ever rhyme}) personals and punches were alot better (even though you had to read a hole bunch of shit understand some of them). plus your was more complex.

i give this battle to you: daclassic



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