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yea uppin this shit yo!!!!!!!!!
gimme dem votez!!! |
]~times-up like jadakiss, over like lil flip~
~and like a preview of a movie, you'll get-a-clip~ 7/10 old, but well put ~flippin-ya-lip too much, leave you wit cuts-and-gash~ ~sluts-get-smashed, stuck like immature gurls shaving they mustache~ 6/10 haha ~run for the hills, when that fuckin banana-spew~ ~like mad cow desease, this is a piece of beef you dont wanna-chew~ 6/10 old, but fit well ~it's about time i silence you and leave you confined~ ~man you couldnt wreck mics if you took the whole demolition team when you rhymed~ 8/10 this one was good ~show you the definition-of-pain, let these punches poisen and manifest~ ~ill be damned if you rest, cause im leave you smokin like canibus~ 3/10 meh.. could be better. ~and-a-fist in ya nose, cause bitch i got the scariest-visions~ ~leave ya rhymes watered down like i sprayed ya raps wit various-liquids~ 6/10 this was ok ~these is real statements, engraving ya face wit ailments~ ~no stail-mates, like the old testament i destroy ya pages~ 7/10 pretty nice ~i dont need no canvass, im real to paint-on~ ~even if jesus is ya homeboy like teenage millionaire, ill have ya head off like saint-john 4/10 ... some versus left me like wtf and some was hot.. nice I gotta go for Del. |
yo faggot lets get somethin straight I AM NOT THE ONE TO PROVOKE//
after im done with chu, ruff tuff thug's homo dick ride'll be ya lone vote// 1/10 the intro is mehish.. just trash talk. i portray greatness, u on the other hand just rely on subliminal things// get blown to smitherines ya linez culdnt cut me if i took a nap on a gullotine// 7/10 nice well put i new u was puss, these bars snuff one of ya nine leave yu with eight// i spotted ya tendancies lookin around for another man to help you procreate// 6/10 heh this was good nigga weak bars are only gonna get herbs on here to dick ryde an model yu// n'stead of absorbin it n her puss ya momz shulda just swallowed yu// 9/10 nice personals! i can tell by ya linez u one of dem catholics that extort sinz by fuckin men// well shit don a priest colla fuck a kid to some r. kelly an u'd fit right in// 2/10 meh to played out these niggaz on here got ya head hype thinkin ya flow is the shit// but all you get from me iz boo'z like william hung in front of an appolo audience// 6/10 pretty good. but im done with chu caz its clear in my mind that u a bitch to me// i culd dress like osama an u culd b bush an u still wuldnt want "war" wit me// 5/10 nice verses and personals, flow was pretty good,... intro killed it tho , u still good. |
uppin for dem final 2 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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uppin this shit i clearly won lets go vote u lame mutha fuckaz
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vote/ mic wrecker
simply his verses was much better- and gun rap stay outa battles iight Del?- mos gun rap is threats and not punches- you spose to try to insult him-not thraten dude bout yo clips- and multi's arent gonna get REAL votes- try to only use them when its convenient for you- don't jus use them to sound pretty-it won't work vote:mic-wrecker return the favor for real-i spent time to vote on yours so the least you can do is return the favor fam 4 real http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144192 no hate votes plz thanx ~1~ |
Mic-Wrecker took this one..punches were harder,tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place and not strecthed-out..
Deliquint..yo shit was pretty decent...punches could've been a littler~harder and u would've gottin my vote..and tha flow was ok... |
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