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topic:earning respect in the rap game

spit due in about 2days

i can spit quicker then that i jus got school comin up
and shit so i gotta do a couple thangs, for my freshman year

so its gotta be 2days -agree?


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-25-04 at 01:57 AM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

ProVerse has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 02:01 AM.

flow2crazy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-04 02:03 AM.

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-i rap subconcious- sleep spitin and rhymin-rhymin and spitin-
-sticking to hidin-my fear- hopin they listen--open your mind-
-listen to the lyrics- see me as if i was grown-
-working with only the known-only those who have blown-
-sympethey not neccecery-i will crawl through the game_
prone-even on my stoamch i hope i meet the standards-
-answers seem to be gvin in riddle-they try to expand words-
-still I toil- awake late nights- pushin school to the side-
-this is it- if i don't make it here-then my family was right-
-never that- there wrong- when i'm rappin i'm home-
-you can't take that away- go that-a-way-leave me alone-
-while creating my music- i smile- unlike around town-
-its not even been a while sinced i frowned- anything it takes_
to for you to feel me- even if it means releasin every track
i'm my cd- you gonna see me- even if it kills me-

ok dats my verse

hope you felt it

~1~ i just spitted early to avoid school trouble

is u gonna spit or WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

tell me u not gonna no show plzzzzzzzzzzzz

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yo shouldn't he be dq'd?

he no showed so i should get the win den right?

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no nikka u said 2 days and 2 days isnt here yet imma write this shit now...

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The Council

the new testamin ft. anxiety (must see)

Bubba Bible Ft. Ajax[/SIZE]

Chillin in my room listenin to a new cd~
By a rapper who just made it... sayin thats gona be me~
Next day im wit my homeboys freestyling on the block~
Never running outta rhymes like i got hundreds on stock~
Did that for a while then i started to write tracks~
Dreaming that someday i could be gettin those plaques~
As i aged i started battling at all the local clubs~
Eatin emcees like their all just some subs~
Now me and my homeboy had our own schemes~
I rhymed and he had the beats that was our dreams~
We made hot songs and our mixtapes sold out~
Then he got shot right after our first tryout~
They called my house and said that they wana see me~
They told me "u got potential kid n u write ur rhymes deeply"~
The funeral arrived and i prayed to my boy up above~
Told him imma do this for you and do it wit love~
Went to the studio to record my first track~
It was a crazy ass song i called Outta the Pack~
Asking why my boy got shot and not me~
Released my album and it debuted at numba 3~
Peeps was respectin me now n i was makin a video~
Watched it rise up the countdown like a hot newshow~
10 years later... now ive matured quite a bit~
Still writin for my boy...they neva found the culprit~
Now im one of the best n i just released a new cd~
Wonderin if someone is listenin 2 it sayin thats gona b me~

uppin~ay i didnt even know u had dropped until 2nite

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The Council

the new testamin ft. anxiety (must see)

Bubba Bible Ft. Ajax[/SIZE]

Voted For: flow2crazy

im gonna have to give this shit to you becuz i like how oyu started it and ened it..that shit was cool...damn kid you wrote that shit deeply..like if it really had happened.......other guy you was coo but your shit was too hard to read...but you got potiential...good topical

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my MYSPACE is Better than Yours

uppin another time/.......................................
................................. pleeeeeease vote iight???????

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uppin... votes is needed i will return the favor

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The Council

the new testamin ft. anxiety (must see)

Bubba Bible Ft. Ajax[/SIZE]

uppin... dont sleep on this now

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The Council

the new testamin ft. anxiety (must see)

Bubba Bible Ft. Ajax[/SIZE]

nice job flow2crazy. crew so cant vote...just checkin the poll

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