Anything with as bad of structure this has cant be open mic of the month...

Nice word play. Was really feeln da imagery u was puttin on. thought i was there for a moment. One of da best heard

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Mosiac
Corrupted Individuals

shit was definetly deep i felt it shit hot kid goodluck winnin u got sum good skillz style different but dat wut da game need n am i rite? well peace out nice drop 8 outta 10

that was exclusive continue to do your thing

man...wow.. like every one else said, this was mad hot, the vocab and imagery were killa, i could practically feel the anger of your words...man i was really feelin this piece, hell yeah this should be fuckin open mic of tha month indefinitely..

that was good, really deep and excellent use of vocab, In my opinion worthy of open mic of the month

wow...thats the first words that popped in my head........................

this was truly a masterpiece.........real I ain't playing...........
flow was good fuck the stretched lines...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you depth and emotion made ^ for stretched.............
you used nice vocab for the words to bring the drop
together.... I rate it maybe a 8.5/10....................

possibly open mic of the month in my opinion ~respect..~

Damn Atticus, u continue to impress..... love the song, the vocab, and the way u put it together. feelin the flow. U always out do yaself, keep up the good, drown the bad.... hahahahahahah, holla

i gotcha bro here ya go

Thanks For All The Props...
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nice shit man...really deep nice tory...only bad thing....2 long...lmao....good lookin bro.....yo man you know raw killa check lyricist lounge that bitch....lmao............he said im not even on his level......

hot shit dawg...very nice. ur skills are mad hot. better here than 6. haha...get at me though. peace

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This was good. A little stretched, but for an OM, that's not a bad thing, cause u had a lot to say. Lost the capitalizing every word, doesn't really work for yas. It had some good imagery which is needed in every OM. I really felt this piece. Good wordplay. I don't know what passes for Hall of Fame round here, but the shit was dope. Keep elevatin'.

Hit the OM up in my sig. When In Rome.

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