Yung Duke
Dont ever call me a biter, unless you ready to get left in patches,
guess I'm number 13, out of ya 12 already open matches,
Filler
now come on, this dissin niggaz better than you shit is gettin old,
especially when just speakin my name can get you ko'd,
blah
and you gone diss the kid, when my name you dont deserve to speak,
ya opponents votes is gettin dq'd and they still gettin the clean sweep,
filler times 2
ya name even describe this battle, cause my verse is "intense" and yours is frail,
now that's the cause, and the "effect" is your goi home wit an L,
not creative w/ the L flip, I've seen many & thats wack
I'll have him cryin to a judge, talkin bout Yung Duke just raped me,
only time you get steady votes, is if the way they got there was shaky,
blah
and me and you aint on the same level, our names should be kept on different sectors,
now once again a biter? only thing I took a bite out of was ya record...
OK... for a guy like you

No meta's or wordplay, flow was unco, seemed more like a 'I Hate You' letter then a actual battle verse

V/Intense;Cause he had a battle verse

Follow my link & do your thing

Ha, can't poll my vote... oh well someone misses out

Uppin for REAL votes

Voted For: Yung Duke

Yo dis was pretty close but i gotta give it to yung cuz he jus had better shit. His Punchez hit harder( out of tha few yall had. Flow and structure was better(jus look at it). Out of originality an wordplay i think Intinsify had it but errthing else goes 2 yung.

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^^ shut up clown....

upp'in this battle........

Voted For: intensify effect

you won jus sayin betta tings get me

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Voted For: intensify effect

i liked this drop alot,it was good i woud've like ta see a closer syllable count on your short lines but ya vocab was way better..i think this way of written really works in your favour..this was alot better than what i've previously seen from ya....favorite line was"custody line"in da whole battle..
da other verse was ok but lacked in strong punches n content...i ain't a d/r but i give credit were credits due...pc
no hate ya'll good drops
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Voted For: Yung Duke

i vote for young duke bette flow i like flow ight nigga peace

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flows were even as well as struture both had good personals but yung got over a little better with his.intesity had stronger punches and a few better bars and yung killed his ending better and got him too good with the personals so i gotta give him my vote still it was a good battle.




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Voted For: intensify effect

intensifyed effect cuz he had punchlines and betta flow

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Voted For: Yung Duke

hot closing and ending fa sho..
best lines:
I'll have him cryin to a judge, talkin bout Yung Duke just raped me,
only time you get steady votes, is if the way they got there was shaky,
^besides the opener and closer.. u won this hands down so.. ur my vote..

aight then holla..
~wun~

Voted For: Yung Duke

overall yung had the stronger verse... and he killed it with the closer....nice ending... had a few personals in there ... wasn't feeling the shaky line or the opener but everything else was at least decent....

intensify had a good opener but then started going downhill after that... the tac-tics line was iffy... urkel line was funny... last two bars were bad... blah... a good battle none-the-less... pretty evenly matched.... but i gave it to yung

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