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This was feedback posted for phatinum
 

phatinum first line looks like a quote from big l- just re worded

Big L's Line- " You Betta Fleep Hops, Or Ya Head Gets
Flown 3 Blocks" - Big L - Dont Front First Line
And " Its The Tripple 6 In This Shit, Im From H-e Double Hockie Sticks, Im The Son Of the Devil Like My Song Said, Break Niggas Like Corn Bread, You Cant Kill Me I Was Born Dead" - Same Song Just A Little Bit More Into It

And Phats First Line Went "U better flee bitch before ya head gets a 3 stitch Ill burry you in my shed you cant kill me I was born dead " <-

Just Something To Think About....

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Voted For: For$akeN

forsaken took this no comp.. phat ya verse had no structure or flow... and it wasnt a battle verse.. forsaken takes this.. although his verse was pretty weak too.. but it had flow n structure AND most of all... punches... so...

v/ forsaken...

and btw, could you return the favor on me vs eye in my sig..

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Voted For: For$akeN

aight not much comp here,flow punches,structure,vocab,all go ta verse 2,pretty weak battle but an easy decision phat you gotta elevate alot before ya battle anymore dawg..i think you should go read da tutorial n practice..forsaken i thought your opener was your best bar...

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Voted For: For$akeN

fORSAKEN TOOK THIS BATTLE FOR BEETTER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS, HIS LINES WERE STRCTURED WELL AND HIS FLOW WAS GOOD.. AGIN PHATINUM DOESN'T STRUCTURE HIS LINES AND HE IS LOSING POINTS FROM THAT.

vOTE/FORSAKEN

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