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Give it up for "Hardwood Class-Sickz" newest and almost best member, it's me!
^^^^^^^^I JUST PEEP DAT DOGG IS U DRUNK??? U FAR FROM DA BEST IN DA CREW

Voted For: SONIC

Fuck you first and foremost....
but u took this...you had some good lines, and some weak shit, but marv had 3 bars of filler in a 5 bar verse...which made it weak...i liked lines like the vietnam shit, and the work at a music store one...
The structure was good, flow had some flaws but overall good...so u get the vote...

can u guys plz return the favor....
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...478963&posted=1

This was feedback posted for MARVOLoUsJ1009
 

I'll give this bitch Punches to his chest until his Eyes Pop Out
Weaklin GOT knocked out by someone that I've Knocked Out
THAT,WAS NOT HARD HITTING AT ALL....U SHOULD HAVE USED THE SECOND LINE AS A SETUP...DISCARDED THE FIRST....N THROWN A PUNCH IN THERE...IT WAS WEAK LIKE THIS....N SINCE IT SEEMS LIKE U DONT KNOW HOW TO PUT A LINK IN PROPERLY.....ASKKKKKKKK SOMEBODYYYYYY
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136429
I Totally Own Mc's who go Toe to Toe Wit Me
U must Like my Poetry, coz in all my battles u Vote Fa Me
WEAK.....AGAIN,ONLY GOOD ENOUGH FOR A SETUP LINE,NOT FOR A PUNCH
U Take lyrical shots but when I shoot You can't Dodge da 9
Sonic Came to steal yo Eyes right from yo sockets, Rob u Blind
WEAK
U'r the Nerd Type, U'll choke off the smoke when I Burn da Mic
U'r like a Kid born with Hand Arthritis, u never Learned to Write
WEAK...CUZ SOMEONE WHO HAS ARTHRITIS CAN STILL WRITE.......
Your trying to beat a champ, but you ain't tryin Hard Enough
If U took on the soul of BIG yo rhymes still won't be Marvolous
GAYYYYYYYYYY
I know than U didn't expect the Best, u lost so Let it Rest
Like retired Vietnam soldiers Ur just another Unrespected "Vet"
GAY
I Abuse u More, Yo rhymes are more Irritatin than Pubic Sores
So The only way U'll Sell a CD is if u worked in a Music Store
DECENT PUNCH...BUT THE SETUP? WTF....SOUNDS LIKE U KNOW ABOUT PUBIC SORES LOL...I'VE HEARD CD SELLIN N LINES LIKE THAT..NOT EXACTLY THIS ONE
This is "My House" bitch, I get both Beds, you Choose da Floor
And I bet he uses weak personals that's been Used Before
WEAK
You're below me bitch, I'll always Be Dominant
with rhymes, this dude recycles more than an Ecologist
GAY..I'VE HEARD ENVIROMENTALIST LINES ON THIS VERY BOARD
So now you know, I control this shit like Crime Bosses
While "MarvolousJ" will keep gettin merked til he gets "1009" Losses
GAY


ONLY THE CD LINE WAS WORTH MENTIONING IN THE ENTIRE VERSE.........


wont be hard da merk u quer,every marvjay verse u fear-
u cant be da "the realest" know y?? cuzz he merked u here-
NOT HARD HITTIN....

yea u know marvolousjay1009 dat dude dat use ebonic's-
dont rap own apart. in "seattle" u should be a "super-sonic"-
HMMM...I GUESS WORDPLAY BUT NOT HARD HITTING

u got it fukked up i am vet u probly mad dem yung cats fold-
but i "sleep on ya bar's" like "barney when he drunk at moe's"-
I GET IT,ITS DECENT...HEARD A LOTTA BAR LINES BEFORE....THIS WAS AIGHT THOUGH

not hater fam u is souped,i'll have dudes stamp u with boots-
gota new s/n cuzz i "lied" w/ ya girl,u cant "handle da truth"-
HMMMM...DONT LIKE IT

funny thing is only newbie's & fags read da metaphor's-
ima "5 mic" rapper sonic u 1 mic short i neva met-a-four-
WORDPLAY....NOTHIN HARD HITTING

yeah dunny i a few keep guns so if i go da cali aim n pop it-
"sonic" ya punk ass gon need a "doctor" & it aint "robotnick"-
HUH?

nuff said...all keyed

WOW ,THIS WAS TRUELY WEAK......SHIT IT WAS REAL...I MEAN REAL REAL CLOSE.....BOTH OF U ONLY HAD ONE PUNCH EACH TAHT WAS DECENT.......NEITHER ONE WAS VERY ORIGINAL....I THINK MARV'S WAS JUST A TAD BETTER I GUESS.................SONIC HAD MORE PERSONALS....BUT HE USED THEM AS WEAK ASS PUNCHES....MARV HAD NO PERSONALS..BUT HAD BETTER FLOW N HAD MORE MULTIES.........................IMMA DECLARE THIS A TIE....................

LMAO, i've read the roster, i'll battle anyone to prove it, starting with you..

^^^yea wutever son...go drop a vote on my battle plz.....

and how are you 37-1, last time i had looked u were 27-2...and the last time i looked before that, u were 14-4...but anyway...go vote on my battle

^Don't question me, just know that most people can't beat me without cheating, put it like that..

iight...can u go return the favor tho.....

up and away

damn noone in elevated votes..

vote people....

uppin

Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

I gotta give marv my vote this is not a d./r vote or anything but im feeling his verse a little bit more ....i liked his punches and shit....sonic ur shit was mad htot 2 but i did not feel it like i was feeling marv....ur struc was on and ur punches and wordplay was on but i think marv got this battle because of his better punchlines and wordplay they were just mad hott and i gotta give it up for both of ya this was a hott battlle!

He thinks he nice ...to be true...he been getting d/r votes..i peeped 3 pbattles....and the flow intelligent battle was all d/r...lol...flow killed him..but...im the up and coming vet in hardwood so ill battle you for a spot