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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-05-04 at 09:46 PM

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MARVOLoUsJ1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 05:12 AM.

SONIC has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 05:16 AM.

wont be hard da merk u quer,every marvjay verse u fear-
u cant be da "the realest" know y?? cuzz he merked u here-

yea u know marvolousjay1009 dat dude dat use ebonic's-
dont rap own apart. in "seattle" u should be a "super-sonic"-

u got it fukked up i am vet u probly mad dem yung cats fold-
but i "sleep on ya bar's" like "barney when he drunk at moe's"-

not hater fam u is souped,i'll have dudes stamp u with boots-
gota new s/n cuzz i "lied" w/ ya girl,u cant "handle da truth"-

funny thing is only newbie's & fags read da metaphor's-
ima "5 mic" rapper sonic u 1 mic short i neva met-a-four-

yeah dunny i a few keep guns so if i go da cali aim n pop it-
"sonic" ya punk ass gon need a "doctor" & it aint "robotnick"-

nuff said...all keyed

my 3rd bar....i mean barney fromd a simpsons he always sleepin at da bar u'll get it

I'll give this bitch Punches to his chest until his Eyes Pop Out
Weaklin GOT knocked out by someone that I've Knocked Out
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136429
I Totally Own Mc's who go Toe to Toe Wit Me
U must Like my Poetry, coz in all my battles u Vote Fa Me
U Take lyrical shots but when I shoot You can't Dodge da 9
Sonic Came to steal yo Eyes right from yo sockets, Rob u Blind
U'r the Nerd Type, U'll choke off the smoke when I Burn da Mic
U'r like a Kid born with Hand Arthritis, u never Learned to Write
Your trying to beat a champ, but you ain't tryin Hard Enough
If U took on the soul of BIG yo rhymes still won't be Marvolous
I know than U didn't expect the Best, u lost so Let it Rest
Like retired Vietnam soldiers Ur just another Unrespected "Vet"
I Abuse u More, Yo rhymes are more Irritatin than Pubic Sores
So The only way U'll Sell a CD is if u worked in a Music Store
This is "My House" bitch, I get both Beds, you Choose da Floor
And I bet he uses weak personals that's been Used Before
You're below me bitch, I'll always Be Dominant
with rhymes, this dude recycles more than an Ecologist
So now you know, I control this shit like Crime Bosses
While "MarvolousJ" will keep gettin merked til he gets "1009" Losses

lmaooo damm nigga u spit a album...but hey its all good

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Voted For: SONIC

Damn good battle over here. Some good punches and personals goin back and forth. Both of which were even. I think both were on the same level on punches and personals. Both closures were tite. Both of them were personals too. Both had a good structures too. This was a nice battle cuz almost every line from both were punches. However I think Sonic took it because he had a hard hittin line throughout the whole verse. He also wrote more than Marv so he had more disses in his. If Marv had writtin like 6 more lines, i think that he would have won. But, I gotta give it ta Sonic for the tite verse. Good shit ta both.

Vote-Sonic

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i vote for sonic cos his personals and punches were tight(9)....and they hit harder than marvolous'...and his strucrure made his verse have a cool flow too...when i read marvolous' verse i was like "huh??????".......yo u gatta work on ya punches and ur personals..but ur structure was ok....

v/sonic

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shit i cant vote........wdf?.........dayummmmmmm!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!

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^^^??? fukk u mean huh?? dogg but uppin 4 more votes man.......

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

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