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This was feedback posted for Decree Wun
Decree... Nice opener! good structure throughout...loads of disses but very few personals (3rd bar was only personal)
rhymes were better overall didn't really like ya closer. Forsaken... had more personals but they shoulda hit harder. rhyme was ok but not enough to topple decree... structure coulda been a little better... there were a few filler lines that i didn't like... the cascade one and the "he's no abuser" line... they were pretty weak... closer battle than what it seems but vote goes to Decree.... if i had the 200 posts |
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This was feedback posted for For$akeN
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Voted For: Decree Wun
im gonna give this to decree wun even tho his verse was shorter i think he came harder n more direct. his metas were better n structure was better than Forsaken Forsaken started out ight but some of his metas got stretched n sound forced holla at me http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136344 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140333 |
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