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08-07-04, 01:14 AM | #1 | ||||
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BANG vs String9487
IP: 78E6 F849
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10-20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-07-04 at 02:14 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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08-07-04, 01:16 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 78E6 F849
BANG has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 01:16 AM.
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08-07-04, 01:21 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: B9AB 64CC
String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 01:21 AM.
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08-07-04, 01:45 AM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 78E6 F849
You can come hard but i feel you trying to sing
To get a win I might have to pull some strings To think that you could win- you must be dreamin sniffin that silly string really got you feenin Im a quit playin with this bitch- dont get out of line trying to diss me is easy- but can you do it in time Afta I drop this bomb on this bitch-nigga its over If you feeling me not then I guess I'll show ya Rapverse told ya that im new but you fuckin wit a soldier Cought him off guard wit the hook dog imma hold ya -/ clown really you cant win- so nigga put ya hands down/ I aint fuckin around wit this lame-so nigga dont speak my name/ Dont worry dog -this is a warning before the storm This is just a sample of gettin ya ass torn. Bang |
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08-07-04, 01:54 AM | #5 | ||||
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IP: B9AB 64CC
try n shoot me but y a bullets dont hit that far
dis lil nigga get "broke off" like a kik-kat bar i take ya girl as an extra-nighter cuz she b blowin on me like a breathalizer aint nuttin u can do to hurt me n u couldnt find praise, not even in a church b freeal, yo my life's revered n u you gon last about as long as Vanilla ice career i'll knock u off ya feet so u can barely stand cuz bitch u dont BANG, u a family man u get shit popped in u like the VCR, u get 3 feet scars beware i burn MC's like CD-R's u'll wind up on the nightly news,slightly bruised u aint never met an MC quite like me dude U say u packin, it betta b heat BANG u sweet, wind up dead on Sesame Street u can stay hard, in the Graveyard ya face b all blue like Mel Gibson in Braveheart step to me n u get blammed up promise cuz ya rhymes a bigger joke than stand up comics HAAAAA |
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08-07-04, 01:56 AM | #6 | ||||
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IP: B9AB 64CC
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08-07-04, 03:06 AM | #7 | ||||
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IP: 93D8 F3E6
Voted For: String9487
bang: good flow, nursery kinda in some parts, but altogether handlin in my opion...u did yo thing...u need to elevate on your rhymin and wordin, but u still hot string: why u keep endin like that, but i gotta say, this was yo best endin i seen yet, finally u ended something like u began it..goood job, but...naw(thought i was gonna be stupid), yo flow was better thatn bang's...u had better wordin nad punches hit harder, and personals we more, didnt really see too many outta none ya'll...u had a lot of metas in there, i like the creativity...good shit overall: this was neck n neck...onyl reason why string took it is cause his was un nuresery...and his , fuk it, overall flow was better...good battle dont forget to visit my tour guide, his name is S.CARTER(JAY-Z)...he's directing u to the hottest battles by ya boy DOT...go drop some feedback ,and votes on it peoples... |
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08-07-04, 12:45 PM | #8 | ||||
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IP: 78E6 F849
uppin this post aight
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08-07-04, 12:50 PM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: E198 D20B
Voted For: String9487
sTRING YOU GER MY VOTE.. YOUR SHIT WAS MORE CREATIVE, IT WAS ALSO MORE ENTERTAINING.. YOU HAD BETTER WORDPLAY ALSO, HIS RHYMES WERE A LITTLE BASIC AT TIMES.. YOUR PUNCHES HIT HARDER COZ THEY WERE MORE CLEVER AND COMPLEX, HE HAD A COUPLE OF PERSONAL, BUT THEY DIDN'T HIT THAT HARD.. SO BASICALLY YOU GET MY VOTE.. AYE CUZ, CAN YOU RETURN THE FAVOR WIT A DROP IN MY BATTLE? THANX CUZO,, http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352 |
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08-08-04, 04:29 PM | #10 | |||
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IP: 3C58 486D
Voted For: String9487
Ima have to vote for string on this one, altho i wasnt feelin all his rhymes he just brought it harder, he had some original lines but the rest were pretty basic, and bang pratically all your ryhmes were basic, i was feelin strings structure, but i wasnt feelin bangs, i thought string came harder in the beggining middle and really had a great finish, n Bang, you just needa elevate your game, so ima vote for String9487 n yo return the favor |
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08-08-04, 05:40 PM | #11 | ||||||
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IP: E198 D20B
people were complainig about the boxes in the battle not working just incase you tried to vote already, but it should be coo now.. here
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352 |
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08-08-04, 09:45 PM | #12 | |||||||
I can rap and stuff.
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: String9487
imma give this one to string cuz of just overall better verse but it was close. my fav lines from both of you: String:U say u packin, it betta b heat BANG u sweet, wind up dead on Sesame Street BANG:To think that you could win- you must be dreamin sniffin that silly string really got you feenin but bang i can see u got the talent in u but i just dont think it showed up this time. no hate. show sum honest vote love on the link below too
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08-09-04, 10:37 PM | #13 | ||||
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IP: B9AB 64CC
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08-10-04, 11:05 PM | #14 | ||||
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08-10-04, 11:18 PM | #15 | |||||
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This was feedback posted for String9487
IP: C1DA C961
vote/string
can't poll but i will when i get 20 post strings took it cuz struc. and punches bang had better flow but not enough 2 win good drop 4 both now can u PLEEEEAAAAASSE return da favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141151 dis battle has been slept on soooo bad it'll be bogus if u dont
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