uppin this
dont sleep

This was feedback posted for intensify effect
 

you need to elevate, put in some personels and multis aight

uppin this

Voted For: Da Jokah

Da Jokah took this with harder punches and better wordplay. Intensify said he blows fellas, and when i read that I kinda lost interest in the rest of his drop. But no hate though, good battle between the 2 of you.
Vote - Da Jokah

Yo, return the favor y'all with honest votes
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138941

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138941

This was feedback posted for Da Jokah
 

Dis battle was ok
too bad I cant vote yet but Il will get back to u when I can

Voted For: intensify effect

jokah-
haha enuff to make ya girls legs spred like a rash
^^^original metaphor, but not a punch and the only thing i liked in ya verse

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i.e.

plus i kill queers and everyone knows this guy blows fellas
so i'll put a hole in ya chest big enough to make ya asshole jealous
^^^^not a diss, but origianl and i liked it.
i know why ya name jokah... cuz u know u aint a relevant spitter
be a quitter, cuz u about to get more negatives results then developing pictures......
^^^^an acutal witty PUNCH, prolly played thought, but good enough to win the battle.

yo i.e. how bout u set up a battle that the check in is later so i got time to check in ya dumb fuck

Voted For: intensify effect

i didn't like this battle in my opinion
This battle goes to I.E. for a better verse though i didn't like how he structured it
Da jokah your good keep elevating man
vote goes to I.E. for better punches and better overall verse

upp'in for more votes...

i see jokah got dick ryders haha so fuck a red-bull nigga.....

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Voted For: intensify effect

Intensify effect barley took this one cuz.. Jokah had way better structure than you and his flow was also on point, it sounded better actually than your verse.. yet, the content of your verse gave your the win, the wordplay, the punchlines, etc.. your opener was tight, but the line was stretched, you see what i mean? but your punchlines hit harder than his overall, rhymes were on point to give for a more entertaining verse...

return the favor with an honest drop in this one cuz..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=143655