Battle Rules:

10 lines max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No bullshit.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-01-04 at 06:08 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

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The Definition. period.

Ok check it,
You couldn’t get a-“head” even if you had help from Ron Jeremy…
You just trash talk but end up hiding like Oscar off Sesame*…
He tries to have a slick name all funked up snoop dogg style...
Except you sound more like J-kwon on a freestyle...
Here's this 17 old boi about to get merked by a 14 year old...
Since your crew is 'Ill',if you 'spit' at me all I'll turn to is mold**...
I bet you'd like yo mamma to 'Dizzle 'n' Pat yo diK'***...
Even if you laced your verse with oil it still youldnt be slick...
Read my avatar and remember the name...
My crew and I will just stomp ya flat as we continue to run the rap game...

*Oascar is the dude in a garbage can in sesame street
**His crew is called Ill Ten.
***Its his name backwards. Kid is spelled backwards diK and the Pat is the P and dizzle is understandable.
And ron jeremy is the most famous porno producer.

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Avanish has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 05:56 PM.

Ok check it,
You couldn’t get a-“head” even if you had help from Ron Jeremy…
You just trash talk but end up hiding like Oscar off Sesame*…
He tries to have a slick name all funked up snoop dogg style...
Except you sound more like J-kwon on a freestyle...
Here's this 17 old boi about to get merked by a 14 year old...
Since your crew is 'Ill',if you 'spit' at me all I'll turn to is mold**...
I bet you'd like yo mamma to 'Dizzle 'n' Pat yo diK'***...
Even if you laced your verse with oil it still youldnt be slick...
Read my avatar and remember the name...
My crew and I will just stomp ya flat as we continue to run the rap game...

*Oascar is the dude in a garbage can in sesame street
**His crew is called Ill Ten.
***Its his name backwards. Kid is spelled backwards diK and the Pat is the P and dizzle is understandable.
And ron jeremy is the most famous porno producer.

Woops posted in the wrong place 1st time.

The Kid P-Dizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 06:01 PM.

Listen youngin' why you frontin'? You can't merk me/
You prolly still a virgin, and I got pussy when I was 13/
I can drop the mic dude, age don't matter, I'll fight you/
Explained your rhymes, thinkin' we must be illiterate like you/
Dog you ain't moving Paul, you peeped my profile/
Prolly looked for my address to come try and get a booty call/
You a fake bitch, actin' in your lame rhymes/
I'll see you nominated for a Grammy and an Oscar at the same time/
Bullets do more than graze, fool, I amaze fools/
So shut the fuck up and go back to grade school/

That's what I got for yo ass.

nice drop...uppin for votes...

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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

iite D u took it if u gota explain yo rym afta ur done den u lost in my opinion


Unexplained vote removed

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

iite D u took it if u gota explain yo rym afta ur done den u lost in my opinion

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

You couldn’t get a-“head” even if you had help from Ron Jeremy…
You just trash talk but end up hiding like Oscar off Sesame*…
ok,no punch really though
He tries to have a slick name all funked up snoop dogg style...
Except you sound more like J-kwon on a freestyle...
was'nt feeling this line
Here's this 17 old boi about to get merked by a 14 year old...
Since your crew is 'Ill',if you 'spit' at me all I'll turn to is mold**...
i get it but its weak..
I bet you'd like yo mamma to 'Dizzle 'n' Pat yo diK'***...
Even if you laced your verse with oil it still youldnt be slick...
ok punch..about average
Read my avatar and remember the name...
My crew and I will just stomp ya flat as we continue to run the rap game...
weak closer


Listen youngin' why you frontin'? You can't merk me/
You prolly still a virgin, and I got pussy when I was 13/
alright setup...
I can drop the mic dude, age don't matter, I'll fight you/
Explained your rhymes, thinkin' we must be illiterate like you/
good punch..personal kinda funny
Dog you ain't moving Paul, you peeped my profile/
Prolly looked for my address to come try and get a booty call/
...ok punch
You a fake bitch, actin' in your lame rhymes/
I'll see you nominated for a Grammy and an Oscar at the same time/
...actin...ya decent punch...
Bullets do more than graze, fool, I amaze fools/
So shut the fuck up and go back to grade school/
not a bad closer

overall im giving this ta the kid he came with more relevence in the battle with better punches..both had simular structure n vocab...battles are won by punches!!!n none of avanish's connected....

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left...2 many herbs

good vote^ up.

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The Definition. period.

Aight, well we're still uppin' for votes, come on folks.

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cmon people,dont sleep on these...

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The Definition. period.