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headgames 08-09-04 04:32 PM

Voted For: white_boi

ahhhhhhhhh hahahahahahahahahaha, man whitboy owned you buddy, damn whiteboy, twelve years old wit rhymes like that, he had a few sick lines, and there was a few that i wasn't feelin, all in all though you won this shit....

you claim to be an MC thats finally emergin
youz 15 and youz prolly still a virgin
imma beat you down you gon need a lyrical surgeon

that was so fucking sick fo a kid his age, n yo, i was feelin whiteboys flo, he had better structure, killed him on the personells, his rhymes were more thought out so he had a better rhyme sceme, he had better punches, Mc07, you needa work on your structure, it was really akward to read, and your punches were just stupid, you had no personells, and cuz of the structure i wasnt feelin the flo of it, and your rhyme sceme was just so basic, dont hate cuz i know how to vote trust me................................................ ..............
Flow: White boi
Punches: White boi
Personnels: White boi
Rhyme sceme: White boi
Word play: White boi
Opener: white boi
Ending: didn't like either of there endings
Structure: White boi
Vote: White Boi

M&rk 08-09-04 05:07 PM

Voted For: white_boi

white boi, u said alot of dumb shit wit these
so go get your dress, bowtie, panties and skirt
cuz you goin on a date wit elmo and bert
....after this battle youll have ability reduction
so you can stay at home, get fat, and youll need lypo suction

das jus some dumbe shit. and then.......
cuz i abducted this battle and its now all mine
cuz this right here is now my last line

u finish wit a nice punch not stating the obvious.

but u had harder hitting personals and shit wit.....
imma make you look like the most stupidest MC
you claim to be an MC thats finally emergin
youz 15 and youz prolly still a virgin

.........
emerging....

ya shit is way to stretched, u need a new fuckin structure and sum vocab. then personals. i jus aint feelin none of your disses at all, the way u say the shit jus aint good and what u say aint good. aint feelin none of it.

no hate jus honesty, RETURN THE FAVOR, HIT THIS UP
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138937

Katastrofe 08-09-04 05:49 PM

Voted For: white_boi

This was an ok battle....U had bettter punches and structure, and a few peronals but over all it was medioker..nah mean. Ok battle. U got my vote though...cuz u got him.

white_boi 08-09-04 08:12 PM

ayyo shit this is my battle so i might as well take victory now...

Logic The Goonie 08-09-04 08:54 PM

Voted For: white_boi

oooookay i guess ill vote for white boi even tho hes duckin our fuckin battle. n e ways both was weak but since ur noobies its not THAT serious for now. white boi wins for better punches, and structure and more creativity(nevr thot i wuld say that) but this aint a hate its just real. drop a vote on the link in the sig but be HONEST cuz it was real close. one


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