Battle Rules:

house rules, blind spit get yours up as soon as u can

10 -12 lines



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-04-04 at 05:13 PM

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DustyBlunted has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 05:13 PM.

pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 05:14 PM.

Look,

My dialect demands respect, when i reflect with my war like intelect..
Always remember real THUGS don't battle on the internet..
I'll push you of a building with the mic chord around your neck..
The cops know who did it like I was the "Usual Suspect"...
This battle you'll regret, better come correct,No battle i'll neglect...
With my ILL lyrical content,my followers build me monuments..
On the 7 continents, In every State, In every providence...
So hold the derogatory comments....

I'll put this emcee in the ground next to his rotting hero(2pac)
DustyBlunted record just improved to two and zero....

Only one battle u aint shit, beginners luck, soon to be shown a fluke
Db ya rhymes is discusting, this aint my spit he just made me puke
My bitch slapped call out was “who’s dumb enough”, fo real not fake
Don’t make a mistake, vote for me, carry out this fool’s fate
Not only u stupid but this bitch ugly, honestly db’s not good looking
Pugly wouldn’t even be considered it as the main course in home cooking
I spit fire--, sirens go off, u disordily run out the battle, exits unknowing
U spit--, smoke clears people leave not from fire.. cuz your annoying
Trust me db u aint on my level, how many Canadian known to rap?
Only time u considered above me is while checkin out a map
Check his location he’s slutty, even makes the alphabet look sleazy
Sandwiching AB in his location, only sick from aids u fake ass easy-E


Easy- E died from aids, and I was playin off easy meaning slutty, so with the alphabet and looking sleazy and him wantin to be like him. Hope ya get it.

Only one battle u aint shit, beginners luck, soon to be shown a fluke
Db ya rhymes is discusting, this aint my spit he just made me puke
My bitch slapped call out was “who’s dumb enough”, fo real not fake
Don’t make a mistake, vote for me, carry out this fool’s fate
Even newbs brush off and light up dusty blunted when they’re spitting
U suck and don’t belong on this site, but at least your names’s fitting
I spit fire--, sirens go off, u disordily run out the battle, exits unknowing
U spit--, smoke clears people leave not from fire.. cuz your annoying
Trust me db u aint on my level, how many Canadian known to rap?
Only time u considered above me is while checkin out a map
Check his location he’s slutty, even makes the alphabet look sleazy
Sandwiching AB in his location, only sick from aids u fake ass easy-E


Easy- E died from aids, and I was playin off easy meaning slutty, so with the alphabet and looking sleazy and him wantin to be like him. Hope ya get it.

uppin, lets start with at least one vote damn

Since Im in your crew I cant vote so Ill leave you sum feedback.You had the right idea to put a bunch of multies in your verse,firt of all,it adds to your verse.But the thing is,you had too much "self ups" in youe verse,meaning you were talking about how evil and gangstaish you are.In battles,focus more on personals dissing your opponent on contents in their profiles and their names and stuff.I liked your line where you talked about real thugs not battling on the internet,that was well thought out.Your structure was pretty average,but your flow was kinda rough at parts.Just keep on battling and elevate,you'll get there.Average drop overall,focus more on the opponent.

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The Definition. period.

Voted For: DustyBlunted



Only one battle u aint shit, beginners luck, soon to be shown a fluke
Db ya rhymes is discusting, this aint my spit he just made me puke
5/10
My bitch slapped call out was “who’s dumb enough”, fo real not fake
Don’t make a mistake, vote for me, carry out this fool’s fate
5/10
Even newbs brush off and light up dusty blunted when they’re spitting
U suck and don’t belong on this site, but at least your names’s fitting
5/10
I spit fire--, sirens go off, u disordily run out the battle, exits unknowing
U spit--, smoke clears people leave not from fire.. cuz your annoying
5/10
Trust me db u aint on my level, how many Canadian known to rap?
Only time u considered above me is while checkin out a map
4/10
Check his location he’s slutty, even makes the alphabet look sleazy
Sandwiching AB in his location, only sick from aids u fake ass easy-E
5/10

My dialect demands respect, when i reflect with my war like intelect..
Always remember real THUGS don't battle on the internet..
7/10
I'll push you of a building with the mic chord around your neck..
The cops know who did it like I was the "Usual Suspect"...
8/10
This battle you'll regret, better come correct,No battle i'll neglect...
With my ILL lyrical content,my followers build me monuments..
7/10
On the 7 continents, In every State, In every providence...
So hold the derogatory comments....
6/10

came down 2 better wordplay and harder punches

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Voted For: DustyBlunted

my vote goes to him cuz he had constant vocab and he was nice wit it....he has a nice flow n everything....da other guy had a nice verse too but it wasnt as good to me as this one was

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Voted For: DustyBlunted

Dusty had harder hittin punches tho' picture perfect had a good verse the punches coulda been harder. I say Dusty but it's debateable I liked this verse return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982

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Black Man White(BMW)
No Grudges.

wow, not a single punch and one personal and this cats winning, never deny the power of d/r's

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uppin

Voted For: pictureperfect2

Flow: pictureperfect2
Punches: pictureperfect2
Structure: pictureperfect2
Personalz: DustyBlunted
Metas: pictureperfect2
Creativity: DustyBlunted
Enjoyment: pictureperfect2

VOTE: pictureperfect2

y'll return the fav and vgote in this battle plz

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138618

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