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Voted For: Typical


Sorry dude but Im gon have to give this one to
Typical


his punchlines were just knockin him out even though both were good
His flow was heavenly and
his wordplay just killed him
Very good battle

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Voted For: Typical



I can't breathe, its just really too hard to believe,
Im runnin for my life, the dogs just been released..
I stop n get quieter, hear steps of one hunderd ppl...
Feel blazes of a fire n weapons made way 2 leathal..
I start runnin again cuz they just keep getting closer...
Shyt, One jst spotted me, thinkin my lifes already over...
They start chasin, sounds like a stampeed of animals...
Except they wanna kill me chasin me as if they hanibals
I tripped over a little branch, Shyt! I jst cut mah foot
U try runnin while limping, all of mah strength it took.
I Climb A tall tree, n js wait untill all them pass by
As I wait, i think in mah mind of my future great life
How unlike before, I could make good memories...
Get to live like humans, the life thats ment for me...
I move alittle, One guy says " I think I saw him"
Shyt and once again I gotta have another problem...
I jump down 2 da ground wit out making a sound..
head north where I can count on freedom 2 be found..
Still followed by dogs so need to get rid of my smell..
Jump in mud but its quick-sand I shoulda known well..
I pray for help as the sands already up to my shoulder..
My life passes by my eyes as if i survived n got older...
shyt get worst as I see a man in white comin towards me..
But I could tell he ain't bad cuz he dresses so poorely..
Then he takes a rope out and quickly throws it to me...
I grab it n he starts pulling, out of the sand i start moving
Now I know there's a Lord cuz who else coulda helped
It ain't a white man cuz they to busy countin their wealth
We arrive, I thank him cuz he walked wit me 2 da north
I say "thank God" he says "ur welcome" cuz he's the Lord

Ok i dont kno if this was a battle or wha cuz really there werent many punches that came off as a battle but good wordplay and complexity and nice structure

ayo
fuck u master!!.. i refuse to stay/
u no longer have sway, i will not be a slave/
my mind is made, n u will not catch me/
never again will i b under lock latch n key/

yesteday u had me beat cuz i looked u in d eye/
looked thru ur lies... recognized ur disguise
i saw tha truth, thru ur blue burnin devilysh eyes/
i saw tha maze of ur hate, u were afraid...
of my earth tone heavenly gaze/

that was tha last time i was beatin into mud/
cuz after dat... i could feel tha freedom in my blood/
i leaft that same night, on my life/
i swore, id run thru daylight/

i was once told, i was from a place called afrika/
now... the only place i could see freedom is canada/
so now im runnin wit my feet bleedin/
fast as i can away from tha bleached demon/
id rather these krakers take my life/
then withstand another night of them rapein' my wife/

this isnt tha only method, that i was discussin/
coulda stayed. my cousin met harriet tubman/
but i couldnt stand da government, i was disgusted...............

yea yea
im no longer in tha masters service/
my wounds run deep, cant be treated by nurses/
so now i feel, like a man wita purpose/
but first i must span tha luissiana purchase/
fuck u n ur laws, i will not worship/
tho im hertin, when i run free i m not worthless...

i cant believe it, i been runnin for three days/
i hear them behind me in each state/
i dont care if my feet ache/
im hopin to meet fate/

so with every ounce of my soul/
i ran hard as i could, till i found my goal/
i hope god doesnt forsake me/
let me reach tha gate please/

...then i passed tha border/
looked back, saw tha patty rollers* comin in order/
they shootin!.. but bullets jus pass n miss me/
KRACKA!.. PICK A SPOT ON MY ASS TO KISS ME!/
cuz u cant do nothin, im in a free domain/
i found nice people, a warm bed, n slept...
for three whole days.

Nice wordplay and and complexity and nice structure werent any hard stingin punches i dont kno if ya was battelin or wha but it came down 2 better complexity and the overall best vocab

Nuff Said

upin

Voted For: ..::Sinister::..

I.Mind gets my vote because I like the story it flowed very nice and kept me more captivated they Typicals verse. This was a tight topical battle though. Both stay improving.