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Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG
Scenario........verse flowed well, an wa sstructured well but thats all you had....no visible punches your best line was this setup: u beating me is like parapelgics can play soccer but u followed it with a really weak line<--if u followed dat line with 1 solid punch u woulda won but u didn't so I say jus elevate. Certified........weak as well...your flow was equally good, his structure was a lil better, you didn't have any punches either but some of your lines were funny an dats really the only positive of this battle..jus in her pussy like a kangaroo is wack but funny so entertainment value got the win in my opiion..as well as ya closer was wack but funny, so u also need to elevate. Both dropped weak but cert edged it with a lil comedy an a lil more creativity. Vote: Cert |
Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG
aiight u gettin betta thug.... opener - thug closer - scenerio flow - scenerio punchez - thug vocab - thug v/ thug, no hate but thug just pulled it off not by much... |
Voted For: Scenario
Alright.. good punches by scenario.... personals were alright.. nothing too special.. Certified... your punches.. = pretty wack.. like rap artist tryin ta play a guitar/ ^^ some do.. nuff said.. Your stucture was HORRID.. your punches were weak.. your opener = pretty SHIT.. your closer was alright.. but nothing special.. Pretty weak battle.. no hate but elevation is needed.. try multis.. harder punches.. personals.. and yah.. but im givin this to Scenerio, because he had better punches, personals and better verse.. nuff said.. |
Voted For: CeRtIfIeDtHuG
the first two bars took it for me.. certified got this because of better punchlines mostly.. the flow was also nice, both of you had nice structure.. certified came of with better disses, his opener was a lot stronger and i honestly think that his verse was a little more entertaining to read.. V/Certified thug return favor witta honest vote right here.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152255 |
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