Battle Rules:

4 Lines (8 bars maximum)
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No B/S
No Hate Votes/Unexplained will be removed..!

30 minutes after check in.. let's do this man... check in by 30 minutes...
good luck sonofisis! get at me,
~wun~

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 09-28-04 at 07:35 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

my error- typin fast 4 bars- 8 lines maximum sry.. bout that..

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~Sonofisis~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 07:07 PM.

[~*Lady Fiya*~] has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 07:09 PM.

I'll Knock Yo ass Out, like too much of the Beer Hit Ya
Your talent is like this Photo, I never Got a Clear Picture
http://img78.photobucket.com/albums...graduation2.jpg
Flame hit you and burned you as soon as I Wrote Somethin
Beating You is Easy, espesially since i always Smoke "Dutches"
You're gonna feel the impact when i Throw Rhymes At Ya
u're a Princess? well u're gettin drove to yo death like Diana
I'mma tell you right now, you're goin no where wit ya raps
you'd think i was a vetrinarian the way I tale care of this cat
To see her win atleast once, u Have To Be Patient
She's gassed, So i'mma pump fluid in her like Gasoline Stations
So watch me kidnapp this bitch and hold her weav for Ransom
I would say that i ended your career, but geez, u never Had One

EXPLANATION FIRST..
*Isis- an egyptain goddess married to her brother (incest), hieroglyphics are symbols from Egyptian writing..
His name is sonofisis aka datruth29.. and he used to be in mindz collide..
inertia- a term used in physics to pull back and forth with force..*



~*MY VERSE*~
Ya incest born, test tube and cord as the son of Isis..
Fam n crisis cuz I tattoo this loss 2 the back of ya iris!! (eye)
Ya mind collided, now ya punches must strap on a compass!
Dqs make u win honest, identity covered but I table ya contents
Da truth's hidden, got voters 2 scan my verse like hieroglyphics!
y hypocrit mimesis? Ya record pull newbs like inertia n physics!
Name change per week, riders vote make ya losses word-perfect?!
you overrated? Yea, like rakin’ ice you only defeating the purpose!


..8 bars no more sry bout the typo again..
*get at me* and good luck, sonofisis aka datruth29..
pz uppppppppppin’ this shit, like…
~wun~

u did ten lines....... i told u that was a typo..!!!! dayum.. it's str8 but nice battle good luck....

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oh, i'm sorry, i just got yo message PM, and i just saw your correction, shit, my bad, good verse tho..

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"I Must Be The Greatest"!!!!

I would of did a lot better, but i overdosed of these Vicodin pills, i had to rush this shit and rest, i'm dizzy as fuck, you're prolly gonna win..

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"I Must Be The Greatest"!!!!

Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]

lol fiya killed dis shyt....it was a good battle but fiya knows her shyt.....she fuked up up she kno everything about u kid wtf did u battle her for...she smart as hell lol.....

Punches fiya
Structure fiya
opener and closer fiya
wordplay fiya

dis was 1 sided fiya merked it........

no hat return the favors in sigs tho...

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Voted For: ~Sonofisis~

close battle no hate to you fiya.. you just didnt come very hard on this one.. i was feeling sonofisis better on this one... he had harder punches... lady fiya i think u could have taken this if u came harder.. but sonofisis had good punches and flow.. and he just barely edged u out on this one.. no hate..

I STILL LOVE YA FIYA..

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My Lines Are ILL yo

Ofcourse she knows everything about me, i'm a legend on here.. but i won't complain coz i ain't a bitch, but next time judge on Punches, personals, flow, etc, not coz she knows my old name.. coz her verse was good, but you never explained why..

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"I Must Be The Greatest"!!!!

too close to vote on so just dropping feedback, ya structure was good and i'm loving the opener

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"I Must Be The Greatest"!!!!