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[~*Lady Fiya*~] vs ~Sonofisis~
Battle Rules:
4 Lines (8 bars maximum) No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No B/S No Hate Votes/Unexplained will be removed..! 30 minutes after check in.. let's do this man... check in by 30 minutes... good luck sonofisis! get at me, ~wun~ Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 09-28-04 at 07:35 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
my error- typin fast 4 bars- 8 lines maximum sry.. bout that..
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~Sonofisis~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 07:07 PM.
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[~*Lady Fiya*~] has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 07:09 PM.
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I'll Knock Yo ass Out, like too much of the Beer Hit Ya
Your talent is like this Photo, I never Got a Clear Picture http://img78.photobucket.com/albums...graduation2.jpg Flame hit you and burned you as soon as I Wrote Somethin Beating You is Easy, espesially since i always Smoke "Dutches" You're gonna feel the impact when i Throw Rhymes At Ya u're a Princess? well u're gettin drove to yo death like Diana I'mma tell you right now, you're goin no where wit ya raps you'd think i was a vetrinarian the way I tale care of this cat To see her win atleast once, u Have To Be Patient She's gassed, So i'mma pump fluid in her like Gasoline Stations So watch me kidnapp this bitch and hold her weav for Ransom I would say that i ended your career, but geez, u never Had One |
EXPLANATION FIRST..
*Isis- an egyptain goddess married to her brother (incest), hieroglyphics are symbols from Egyptian writing.. His name is sonofisis aka datruth29.. and he used to be in mindz collide.. inertia- a term used in physics to pull back and forth with force..* ~*MY VERSE*~ Ya incest born, test tube and cord as the son of Isis.. Fam n crisis cuz I tattoo this loss 2 the back of ya iris!! (eye) Ya mind collided, now ya punches must strap on a compass! Dqs make u win honest, identity covered but I table ya contents Da truth's hidden, got voters 2 scan my verse like hieroglyphics! y hypocrit mimesis? Ya record pull newbs like inertia n physics! Name change per week, riders vote make ya losses word-perfect?! you overrated? Yea, like rakin’ ice you only defeating the purpose! ..8 bars no more sry bout the typo again.. *get at me* and good luck, sonofisis aka datruth29.. pz uppppppppppin’ this shit, like… ~wun~ |
u did ten lines....... i told u that was a typo..!!!! dayum.. it's str8 but nice battle good luck....
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oh, i'm sorry, i just got yo message PM, and i just saw your correction, shit, my bad, good verse tho..
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I would of did a lot better, but i overdosed of these Vicodin pills, i had to rush this shit and rest, i'm dizzy as fuck, you're prolly gonna win..
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]
lol fiya killed dis shyt....it was a good battle but fiya knows her shyt.....she fuked up up she kno everything about u kid wtf did u battle her for...she smart as hell lol..... Punches fiya Structure fiya opener and closer fiya wordplay fiya dis was 1 sided fiya merked it........ no hat return the favors in sigs tho... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: ~Sonofisis~
close battle no hate to you fiya.. you just didnt come very hard on this one.. i was feeling sonofisis better on this one... he had harder punches... lady fiya i think u could have taken this if u came harder.. but sonofisis had good punches and flow.. and he just barely edged u out on this one.. no hate.. I STILL LOVE YA FIYA.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Ofcourse she knows everything about me, i'm a legend on here.. but i won't complain coz i ain't a bitch, but next time judge on Punches, personals, flow, etc, not coz she knows my old name.. coz her verse was good, but you never explained why.. |
This was feedback posted for [~*Lady Fiya*~]
too close to vote on so just dropping feedback, ya structure was good and i'm loving the opener
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Why didn't u Vote?
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]
AAight good battle... . Opener-Lady Closer-Sonofisis Personals-Lady Punches-Lady Multies-lady Metas-Sonofisis Structure-Sonofisis Overall Best Verse-Lady . aaight great battle i really dont have any advice for yall exept work on yalls structure a lil more...and sonofisis work on your word play.........please return the favor wit an unbias vote on my sig.........Vote/Lady Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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