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L.E 09-30-04 01:42 PM

This was a very nice drop...the multies it what stuck out the most. Nice work...peep mine...link in my sig. You could work on your stucture just a tiny bit more though...but overall nice work, keep it up.

Ysdat 09-30-04 03:48 PM

thnx for the feed. All comment's are welcome and all favour's will be returned.......pz

Ysdat 09-30-04 06:53 PM

upping for any more comment's please

Houdini 09-30-04 07:47 PM

Nice drop. I felt the concept and that nerd line made me laugh bullets. One of your funniest,greatest pieces in a while "@". Nice job man, All I can say Is quit elevatin' Cause your hogging' The elevator key man. :) lol

p3c

-wreckage-

Ysdat 10-02-04 03:00 AM

Thanx for the feed. ..

Ysdat 10-14-04 08:34 PM

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MERCenary 10-14-04 08:37 PM

nice concept wordplay and flow dope is all i can sya good work @.

streetryda 10-15-04 01:26 AM

i was feeling this all throughout no need for explainin great wordplay .. nice volcab .. sick multi's...all was to the point and i just thought it was off the hook.nice man keep it up...i seen some of your shit and its tight...so its just natural for you i guess.hahah.peace~1

return tha favor in my open mic or an honest explained vote on my battle

Dabatos 10-27-04 02:51 AM

lol, i could see this was a freestyle :)

very very good!! your vocab was very nyce..ur structure was very nyce.. n u were very much on topic (cuz there was no topic) lol... you are actually pretty good... I liked how you rhymed alot with one word... and now that gives me an idea..:) Just make it longer or w/e next time.. :) lookin forward to more :) 8/10


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